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Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 22

Excellant job on this chapter! Loved it - very hot from the dance to the bathroom scene!  The feelings between Bella & Edward just keep growing!

Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 22

Uhhhh...I think you melted my brain.  Prude in perv's clothing or not, that was hot as hell.  I'm very much looking forward to your increased vocabulary, because you're damn good as is...

Reviewer: lizf22 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 22

*giggle* too many regency romances huh? you did a fabulous job with the b-b-b word and i'm sure you will rock the p word now that you're in the lemon 'saddle'!

and you can never go wrong with a little dirty dancing..thank you for making Bella the expert in that. I like when she takes the lead and isn't a total self flagellating klutz! 

thank for for the update! xo

Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 22

good chapter. glad they are making progress but can't wait and until they finally make it all the way!!

Reviewer: Red Koolaid (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 22

The dancing description was awesome! You really nailed it. Made me want to go dancing very soon with my Edward. 

Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 21

Keep it coming... hope you are feeling better!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 21

just read through and love it

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 21

so the denalis are visiting too? im sure bella is really going to enjoy that!

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 21

i like the interactions where crazy happens just quality time spent together. The Denali ladies coming to visit, oh my! cant wait to see the fun/antics that may occur. Gotta agree about Eclipse Jasper was so sexy! they need Jasper/Alice book and movie asap

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 21

ohhh hahahahah and here come the Denali's :D

 

Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 21

just found this story and I am enjoying it!  Can't wait for the next update.  so sad that Carlisle is gone.  I wonder what will happen when Sam starts phasing and imprints on Emily while he's married to Leah?!?

 



Author's Response:

In this story, Sam is too old to phase.  Jacob is the first...others may follow.

Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 13

Totally awesome!  I have to go to bed but I don't want to I want to finish reading.  Great story.

Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 7

What a great story!  I'm excited to read more

Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 21

Great chapter. I guess Tanya is paying a visit? Can't wait to see how this turns out.

Reviewer: UndercoverSwede (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 21

The Denalis? Could make things interesting...

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 21

eclipse did that to me too, i moved to team jasper!! :D Love the chapter and get well!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 21

and by that we all know who is behind thoes golden eyes don't we .....if she plays true to form in her lust for our beautiful boy ...this will bring out the green eyed monster in our Bella

Reviewer: longtobeme (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 21

I joined Team Jasper after watching Eclipse, too. I was a little disappointed in Eclipse...it seemed darker and more depressing than New Moon. Chris Weitz did an amazing job with balancing the tempo of the movie and including subtle humor to keep things interesting. I wish Weitz had directed Eclipse, too.

 

Back to this story, I love this Edward and the whole situation involving Carlisle's death at the hands of the Quilete wolves. I am curious to see how Bella handles the Alaskan girls' visit.

 

Merry Christmas!:)

Reviewer: Borax (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 21

Cool, here come the Delani sisters! I hope they'll be nice with Bella–she'll feel bad enough comparing herself to them already.

I love everything about this story, especially Edward and Bella's relationship, which I think has the same kind of feel as in the first book–tentative and so so intense. Thank you for updating!

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 21

Uh oh. Tanya's in town.  This aught to be good.

I really liked this chapter. It was simple and nothing epic happened, but Bella is starting to get integrated into the Cullen family and grow a little closer to Edward, so it was sweet and fun to read.

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 21

Wondering what the arrival of the Denali sisters (well I'm guessing thats who they are) will bring.  Fab as always.

Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 21

oh god not tanya!! please update soon. can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 21

That was a cruel place to spot lol.

Sorry that you're sick. That sucks. Jasper totally makes Eclipse. This is why he should have had more lines in the other two friggin' movies lol

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 2

you should check out Nightlight.....It's a Twilight spoof.......it's pretty funny too!!!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 21

Ohhhhhhhhh can't wait for the next chapter!!

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