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Reviewer: Froggy (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 25

Great chapter!! The part with Eddie and the gang in the mountains was hillarious, especially his reaction and the whispered "we were going to break it to him gently" ROFL! hehe I love your story, I'm always eager to read a new chapter! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: heldtoransom (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 25

"Seventy years with Edward and no nookie?  Death would be a gift," Tanya nodded.

has to be the best line ever, I loved it and the girls talk.

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 25

personally...i had a complete giggle fit at Rosalie...man, she rocked in this chapter!

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 25

liked the "meeting" when they tell Edward Bella's his mate...Tanya was actually helpful who knew:)

Reviewer: flabella (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 25

Well, shit! I'd be crying too if I was dating (?) Edward Cullen and he wouldn't have sex with me. Good grief.

I loved this chapter, girl. One of the best so far! The interaction between everyone was just ... hilarity!

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 25

I think this was my favorite chapter yet. The talk in the woods? Hilarious. OMG! Space cadet Irina? Classic. So fun.

Now, what is the dog going to say? And if Bella goes after him....

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 25

I love that you made Irina a space cadet and Kate a potty mouth.  It gives them character.  I wonder what Edward has "learned".  Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 25

I love your story! Thank you for writing it and Happy Birthday and Happy New Year!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 24

Edward didnt let me down bella did,,,,,edward is always painted as the bad guy but the only one who looked like an asshole in this chapter was bella,,,all she thought of was herself,,,,she only thought of her needs and how she feels and not how he would feel if he killed her just if he tried to sleep with her,,,does she really think he would ever forgive himself? she should feel flattered that ghe cares so much for her,,,but no she only sees how she is affected,,,,i am not mad at edward i am annoyed at bella



Author's Response:

LoL.  I guess we know whose team you're on!  Try not to be so hard on her...she's struggling to understand her new world.  She tends to get mad when she's confused or hurt.  And she's working on making it up to him right now. :)

Reviewer: raquelnjake (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 23

Oh MY GOODNESS! LUCKY BELLA!Q

When will Edward get his turn?



Author's Response:

Soon, soon, soon...

Reviewer: raquelnjake (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 19

Oh my this story is sooo good. I can't stop reading long enought to comment. My only issue (and this is just me) sometimes Bella comes off a little..rude? IDK, but this is YOUR story and nonetheless, well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

*sniff* Carlisle...



Author's Response:

Yeah, I've noticed that she tends to get mad when she's hurt or confused.  Funny how the characters do what they want and I figure it out after the fact...but she's working on making it up to him.

Reviewer: flagrad (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 24

so good...sexy edward lovely...can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 24

Ah, I am glad Bella put her foot down. Slammed her thighs shut. Something. About time, darn it.

I think it's good to send him off to hunt. And I cannot WAIT for the Edward/Emmett convo. :D

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 24

It still breaks my heart every time Edward writs to Carlisle. I wish he were alive almost as much as Edward does.

 

And good for Bella for kicking Edward out for a few days, even if it wasn't out of spite. I'd be angry with him too.

Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 4

Your Author's Notes are almost as interesting as your story.  Once again, thank you!

Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 3

I am so very intrigued about what happened to Carlisle.  You've mentioned Forks briefly, and "the memory of Carlisle", now Edward is journaling to him.  I am very, very intrigued by this. 

Great job!~

Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 2

I agree with you on Pride & Prejudice & Zombies.  Fanfiction at its silliest, but a good laugh if you're up for that sort of thing.  You... Miss "I don't write 'em, I only read 'em", should definitely be writing them.  This is wonderful.  Thank you. :)

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 24

Aw, I'm all caught up with thiss story now... I can't wait for the next post!!

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 23

And it just keeps getting better.. damn!!

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 22

Woohoo - it was more than ok. :D

Reviewer: Cynali (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 24

I loved it!!! The suspence is so killing me! Asking Emmett is great, can't wait!

As for Microsoft word... I am NOT suprized!

Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 24

I love this story so much.  You do an amazing job at making Carlisle feel so missed.  Whenever Edward writes to him, i just want to cry.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 24

Love love love this story! Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 20

That was just yummy :)

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