I admit that it's quite painful to read a fic with Carlisle dead, especially after watching BD part 2! I love him too much :( And poor Esme! My heart bleeds for her. That being said, your premise and the way you've put this story together is phenominally done. You truly are very talented. I'm just not sure I can keep reading with Carlisle dead. The movie made my Twilight heart fragile :( I do really love the story, though, so maybe I'll sleep on it, and come back later. Either way, thanks for sharing this beautifully written story.

Holy hell in a handbasket. I think I need a cold shower now, or ten!! Wow you writre as good lemon!

 

Sin~

ive read clipped wings and inked armor. its an awesome story!!! yeah, i know im late reviewing ur story but u caught me off guard with that story rec. i LOVE this story, btw!!! (i mean ur story, for whom the bell tolls). i dont too much like that carlisle is dead, but, hey, u cant have everything u want!!! its still a great story without him!!! the letters to him is a great way to keep him in it!!! oh, btw, i like to go back and re-read some of my favorited stories and clipped wings and inked armor isnt available anymore....so sad!!!! pls, dont take this one down cause i know im gonna wanna re-read it!!! :)~

Such an interesting story. I am definitely enjoying it.

I feel rather dumb for not getting the Jacob Teen Wolf thing in the beginning, but once I saw your AN at the end I started laughing so hard.

I loved it!  Well done and thank you for a great read :)

I thought I would let everyone know that CyraBear's sister posted on Twitter today (March 26) that she passed away March 18 after a courageous battle with cancer. Our hearts go out to her family. We are grateful she shared her talent with us.

Awesome opening, particularly for a book lover. Also one of the best Author's Notes ever!

I enjoyed this story vey much - especially the lemons lol! Well, thank you again for sharing it here. I know I am late to the FWTBT party, but I hope when you read this review that you are well and that  it makes you smile! Take care, and I can't wait to read more of your work!

Chyla

Hello. This is my first check in since starting to read this yesterday. Just want you to know that I am enjoying it immensely and cannot wait to read what happens next! I wonder how long it wii take for Bella to break down Edward's defenses....

By the way, I think you are a very gifted writer, and poet. 

Thank you for giving us this great story!

Chyla

Amazing, the style you write is simply amazing. There are a lot of people who writes well and I am spending a lot of time here reading. It is how I learn my english as I am from Czech Republic. But you, you are as good as real writers and with unique style. I love it. May be one time people will learn your books in school.

Congrats!   You finished.  Cute ending.   I enjoyed your story.

When you write "excretions", I think you must be referring to "secretions." If you think of the word "excrement" as in feces, it takes on a whole different...flavor, doesn't it? DJ

Author's Response:

Hahahahaha!  You could be right.