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Reviewer: RogueAlly (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2015 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 47

So this was incredibly sweet on one hand, sexy as hell on the other, and heartbreaking with the parts about Carlisle an Esme. I loved it.

Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 13

If your readers don't like this, then they REALLY don't need gone on this site. Plus, the rating is nc-17. It's all good! Great chapter!!

Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 7

I think I need a cold shower. Just saying.

Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 4

You make me want to read...and I already read all of the time.  I love the tension between your characters...

Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 2

I absolutely LOVED Pride and Prejudice and Zombies!! Most people think I'm just this little fic you have going....

Reviewer: SheaBunny (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2012 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 47

Beautiful story love. Thank you. It was such a pleasure to be swept away in it.


*~* Shea *~*

Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2012 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 9

I admit that it's quite painful to read a fic with Carlisle dead, especially after watching BD part 2! I love him too much :( And poor Esme! My heart bleeds for her. That being said, your premise and the way you've put this story together is phenominally done. You truly are very talented. I'm just not sure I can keep reading with Carlisle dead. The movie made my Twilight heart fragile :( I do really love the story, though, so maybe I'll sleep on it, and come back later. Either way, thanks for sharing this beautifully written story.

Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2012 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 3

Wow, I'm so enthralled with this story so far. The atmosphere you've pained so vividly right from just the prologue is just so captivating. And the way you've written Edward...that mysterious, enticing feel...Wow. Brilliant, brilliant writing. I like how you have struck the perfect balance and added just the right amount of detail without over-embellishing. It really draws in the reader. You are very talented.  

Reviewer: stella sin (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 47

Holy hell in a handbasket. I think I need a cold shower now, or ten!! Wow you writre as good lemon!



Reviewer: dbg (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2012 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 47

Great story. I recommend it

Reviewer: kellsbells32 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 16

ive read clipped wings and inked armor. its an awesome story!!! yeah, i know im late reviewing ur story but u caught me off guard with that story rec. i LOVE this story, btw!!! (i mean ur story, for whom the bell tolls). i dont too much like that carlisle is dead, but, hey, u cant have everything u want!!! its still a great story without him!!! the letters to him is a great way to keep him in it!!! oh, btw, i like to go back and re-read some of my favorited stories and clipped wings and inked armor isnt available sad!!!! pls, dont take this one down cause i know im gonna wanna re-read it!!! :)~

Reviewer: Dozey212 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2012 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 44

Hi, I just read your author note for chapter 45. Asking for contact about suicide if need be. I'm seventeen. My boyfriend has attempted twice, suffers from depression. Have you ever been in a situation similiar? No one I know has been. Thanks heaps, Ash.  

Reviewer: Mellark (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 6

Such an interesting story. I am definitely enjoying it.

I feel rather dumb for not getting the Jacob Teen Wolf thing in the beginning, but once I saw your AN at the end I started laughing so hard.

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2012 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 37

I'd left this story when it looked like it was abandoned but was delighted to find it again and yay, it's finished!  I'm loving catching up and arguing with myself about whether Bella should be around this horny, dangrous Edward or wait until he calms down.

Reviewer: tellytubby (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 47

I loved it!  Well done and thank you for a great read :)

Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 09:56 PM · On: Prologue

So sorry to hear about CyraBear.  Thank you for writing great stories and allowing me to get away from real life sometimes. Thank you so much CyraBear! You will be missed.

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 12:27 AM · On: Prologue

I thought I would let everyone know that CyraBear's sister posted on Twitter today (March 26) that she passed away March 18 after a courageous battle with cancer. Our hearts go out to her family. We are grateful she shared her talent with us.

Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 47

Interesting. Very different.

Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 01:36 AM · On: Prologue

Awesome opening, particularly for a book lover. Also one of the best Author's Notes ever!

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2012 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 47

beautiful story, and I'm so sorry I didn’t review before now I was simply to caught up to stop reading which I suppose is a good thing in a way. I couldn’t leave without telling you how much I loved reading this story. It's one of the best I have read in a while. thanks for writing :)


Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 47

I enjoyed this story vey much - especially the lemons lol! Well, thank you again for sharing it here. I know I am late to the FWTBT party, but I hope when you read this review that you are well and that  it makes you smile! Take care, and I can't wait to read more of your work!


Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 17

I really can't believe Jacob would attack out in the open like that! What a dog! Must be because the newborns lack tact and reason. You said it! It's on now! Can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hello. This is my first check in since starting to read this yesterday. Just want you to know that I am enjoying it immensely and cannot wait to read what happens next! I wonder how long it wii take for Bella to break down Edward's defenses....

By the way, I think you are a very gifted writer, and poet. 

Thank you for giving us this great story!


Reviewer: Blacklily (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 3

Uau. I am completely at awe. You are amazing. I love it. 

Reviewer: Blacklily (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

Amazing, the style you write is simply amazing. There are a lot of people who writes well and I am spending a lot of time here reading. It is how I learn my english as I am from Czech Republic. But you, you are as good as real writers and with unique style. I love it. May be one time people will learn your books in school.

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