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Reviewer: catmomdu (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 12:04 PM · On: Saved

I LOVE your story. Very nice premise and so far very nice execution of said premise. Often authors have a good start but then don't know how or are too lazy to expand on and idea. That being said, understand that I don't want to rush a good thing.. but I have to tell you that I'm dying here. DYING I tell you. I must have an update or I will explode. I need it. Please. For the love of all that is good in this world at least finish this story.. it doesn't have to be now.. I understand that a good story takes time and thought.. but please for my sanity don't give up on it. I usually don't worry about how long it takes an author.. they do what they do, but this story keeps coming to me, I think about it.. I worry about it.. All in all good job getting under my skin, as an author you have won, but again, please finish it eventually. I would hate for someone of your talent and creativity to not continue what is a very good start.

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 08:26 PM · On: Confused

oooo... Alice is going to need to do some early explaining afterall...

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 08:15 PM · On: Caught

Hmm... interesting. The visions are creepy.. poor Alice has to deal with it all the time... and who came back? Edward? Please? :)

Reviewer: C_M_Edens (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 08:52 PM · On: Confused

MORE! I love it!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 12:08 PM · On: Confused

Awesome! i love your story...emmett is done in such an accurate portrayal i think...i could see the scenes playing out in my mind...very good detail...i am impressed and cant wait to see what happens next! update soon!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Caught

treally good chapter...i am interested in how she can have visions of them but never has before...what does that mean??

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 11:37 AM · On: Saved

its such a sad story ....i didnt expect her to be raped but atleast she got out of there...i hope that step dad doesnt follow...he doesnt seem intelligent enough too....anyways i am interested in the emmett tidbit,..will he be around or the rest of the cullens? interested so far..great start

Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 09:59 PM · On: Confused

Really great story so far! I can't wait to see how it plays out. It's a very interesting plot!

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 07:46 PM · On: Confused

Wow, quite a different story. Looking forward to the next chapter...

Reviewer: sophdrea (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 07:06 PM · On: Confused

I am loving this story! It just gets better and better. And I love that Bella keeps having these visions. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 06:33 PM · On: Confused

Very, very interesting.

Reviewer: Sapphire2011 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 04:27 PM · On: Confused

Awesome! Keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: livedieyoung (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 04:25 PM · On: Confused

Great story! :) I got sad when I realized that you had only done three chapters so far, but I'm quite ready to enjoy this story from its beginning.

Awesome!

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 04:21 PM · On: Confused

Oh I knew when I picked your story I was going to like it. I can't wait till the whole family comes home. I am glad that they will take her in and make a home for her. We all need some one to love us and be there for us. Now she will have a family.

Lilly

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 02:01 PM · On: Confused

This is just getting more and more intriguing. Why is bella having these memory-visions? will Alice answer her? I think she will, since she's been so forthcoming about the visions and stuff.

can't wait until next chapter!

Reviewer: the_summerwind (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 01:31 PM · On: Confused

i loved it plz write more

Reviewer: moongirl (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 12:29 PM · On: Confused

Just found your story...so far, very different and very interesting. I hope you continue with it!

Reviewer: PulpAddict (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 12:23 PM · On: Confused

Yes! Straight to the point! I like this Bella.

Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 10:38 AM · On: Confused

So cool, I love it.

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 09:22 AM · On: Confused

I love this story! Bella having visions is awesome! Gotta love Alice too!

Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 08:20 AM · On: Confused

Yay! An update already! Love this story, love bella's gift! Excited for more!

Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 08:38 PM · On: Caught

So exciting I wonder who it is?!? I love bella's gift. Love your story so far

Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 08:09 PM · On: Saved

Rough start but she made the right decision to leave the bastard!

Your writing is captivating and you have peaked my interest :)

Reviewer: lizde (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 04:57 PM · On: Caught

Yay! You're back! I was really hoping you'd continue this story (and Consumed too, I was loving that one). I really enjoyed the descriptions of the rooms. I can't wait to see what happens next, unless I have to, which I will, but still... keep it up!

Reviewer: Tabitha Finch (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 03:52 PM · On: Saved

Oh. My. God.

Your premise is gripping and awesome. Your Bella so winsome and brave. One chapter in and you have totally hooked me! I REALLY hope your a fast updater!

Thanks so much for sharing your talent!

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