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Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 12:07 PM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
this is really good!! would be nice to read more!!
Reviewer: Shiloh Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Favorite Days
Gotta tell ya for your first lemon it was DAMN good!!!
Reviewer: Brandywyn1220 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:27 AM · On: No Brainer
Wow! Hot vampire sex against a wall. Heck yeah! Lovin' it.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
Hi I was getting into the story and was wondering if you were going to continue it?
Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
nawww please update soon, its been ages hehehe
Gem
Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
Argh pls update reely reely soon, i'm dying over here, the little girl needs her Edward fix. Love ya writin
Gem
Reviewer: TinaT (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
wow that was hot
Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Forever Seventeen
That was the sweetest gift. Loved that. *sighs*
Great chapter. Love how you incorporated the title into it. Awesome.
Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 03:09 PM · On: No Brainer
WOW that was hot. Well done.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
I can't wait to read Edwards reaction to the heart beat present! Awesome job! Post sooner rather than later ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I will!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
LOL! Welcome back stranger! Interesting to see this story is no where near over! Yummy
Post again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will, I promise :D
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
Yes, before we know it, it will be May 13th (Rob's bday) and then June 20th, (Edward's). I say we celebrate both days by... by... I dunno re-reading this delicious little story? :-D
Author's Response: Or... reading new chapters? Hmm? :D
Thanks!
Reviewer: keerplunk2809 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
wow.. this was so good!! haha.. but i can't wait for Edward's present
Author's Response: Thanks! Me either, though I'm a little nervous about writing it... ;P
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
Great lemons. It was funny that his present was the last thing on Edward's mind then Bella brings it up and doesn't care either. I love the statement that they have eternity after all to open that gift.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
loved i cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
Great chapter. More, please.
Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
ayayayyyaya!!!! i loved it! awesome job!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Control Is Overrated (V)
Its been forever you're right, but girl.. you made it worth it!! Edward and Bella the humping bunnies is my new nickname for them.
Author's Response: Ahaha, I like that. Thank you!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Edward's Private Thank You
The birthday party was a cute way to humanize the vampires with a cake that no one will eat and to hunt as a family like eating dinner together. I love Edward's reaction because not only was he surprised that his wife would do this for him, but he was totally speechless. His focus was solely on her which was great even though he couldn't quite find the words. I loved that a lot and the intimate scene in the meadow.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Forever Seventeen
I guess we can say Edward enjoyed his birthday. I know I did. I love that Bella would record her heartbeat so he can have the sound forever. Totally romantic.
Reviewer: Temptress_Kitten (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Favorite Days
That was just....YUM! Are you sure that you haven't dabbled in lemons before? b/c that was way intense, way hot, and very well written. You definitely have talent, so don't ever stop writing!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Surprise
Is this the end? is the story over?
Post again soon let me know please!
Reviewer: msashlyjudd8 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Edward's Private Thank You
First I have to tell you this is a very sexy story and I loved it. Second I have to tell you, the part when bella gave him her heart beat, I was almost bawling. That part was so beautiful. It was beautiful and creative and perfect. Great Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 06:05 PM · On: No Brainer
Hahahaha....that was good.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Favorite Days
I love the dirty Edward and Bella dialogue.
Author's Response: Thanks! SIGH I just love Dirty Edward :)
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