yes this is a good  book

Sure looks as if Seth has imprinted, with the sister of his good friend from Portland. This could be real interesting, as I doubt Ali knows her friend is a shapeshifting, giant wolf. Never mind that her new boss, Dr. Cullen is a three hundred seventy year old vampire! Yeah, life is going to be very interesting for both Alicia and Courtney!

Unpleasant as it may have been, I'm thinking Renessme is glad to have had this talk with her parents. She has gotten them to admit she is maturing and has a right to make her own decisions, at least most of them. Her father isn't about to let go his fears of her and Jake getting too serious, too soon. Every father's largest fear, I'm guessing because dads used to be young guys , so know what they're thinking! Payback's a bitch!

I can just picture Embry holding his breath to see how Leah will react to the way he feels for her. Actually, I think it's kind of neat, Leah deserves to be happy, after all she's been through.

Though nothing has been decided, at least the imprint  story is out in the open and can be dealt with by Ness. She took it all pretty well, even the part where Jake once loved her mother. That has to be just a bit strange. Now Leah has called for help with Seth, makes me wonder what the problem is with her little brother.

Ah yes, those dreaded teenage years! Even vampires have to deal with those, I guess. From things said and Nessie's attitude, I'm guessing she doesn't yet know about Jacob's imprint. Hope she doesn't freak when she finds out they have all kept it from her. That would have a big impact, similar to finding out you were adopted.

Edward he can be such an ass. lol  He needs to remember how much he owe's Jake and that he might not have his happy family if it wasn't for Jake protecting Bella when he left!  Well Ness made progress at least!  The good thing about Edward being in Ness's head is that he confirmed to her that her feelings for Jake have changed so thats good!

Another wonderful chapter!

Dixie

Author's Response:

Aw!  Give Edward a break.....he's just being an overprotective dad!  ;-)  Soon he is not going to have a choice....Ness is growing up...and falling in love!

Plus as you pointed out, he did somethign good by making Ness aware of her feelings! :-)  Now the question is what is she going to do about them?

:-)

Ahhhhh!!  You're going to make us suffer for a while aren't you..lol.  Well I can't wiat to see where you take this sory and how you bring everything to a close.  I have a feeling it's going to be a fun, bumpy ride!

Take care, Dixie

Author's Response:

Haha!   Don't worry I hopefully won't make you suffer too long! ;-)

you are right about one thing.....it is going to be a Fun but Bumpy ride!

Thanks for the reviews!  :-)

I like an older Seth.  He's my 2nd favorite wolf.  I can't wait to read more about him!

Dixie

Author's Response:

Yeah!   Another fan of Older Seth!  :-)  I just thought he needed to grow up a bit, catch up with the rest of the pack!  I have had a LOT of fun writing him too!  He makes it easy!

I have a lot more in store for him! Don't want to give it away but I'm sure you will like it! ;-)

I hope it goes well!  It drives me nuts when Edward treats Ness like a little kid when clearly she isn't!  lol

Dixie

Author's Response:

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You’re really good at guessing what’s ahead! :-)  Edward is just being a typical protective dad...but that can definitely cause trouble.  Especially when Ness is going through her independence phase of life!  He just need to learn to back off a little!

I sat and read all the chapters you have posted here and now that i know you have them on ff.net i am about to head over there to read the rest.  I'm LOVING this story, there is so much going on, so many different storylines I'm anxious to see how they all fit together!!

Author's Response:

Yeah!   I'm glad you like it!  :-)  Hope you found it on ff.net ok!  If not let me know....

I wanted to write a story that wasn't just Jake/Nessie.....I LOVE that storyline, and things sort or revolve around them in a way but I also wanted people to see the rest of the Pack.  I have always been a fan of the pack dynamic...and this give you a chance to see what they are all up to!

I have a lot more to come, so I hope you stay tuned!  :-)

I was looking for the secret vamp, no time to write reviews then ? But this is a great story, and Embry, for the love of... now the whole pack knows ? it wont be easy.

Author's Response:

Secret Vamp?  Who said anything about a Secret Vamp....yet ;-P.  LOL!   You may be on to something....but you are getting ahead of me!  Can't reveal too much yet! :-)

As for Embry...the pack does know now.  Well they will know once they phase.  But they won't be too hard on him!  If anything Leah is the one who needs to worry....she is breaking poor Embry's heart!  His Pack brothers won't like that!

I'm glad you are liking it so far!  Lots more to come so I hope you stick around to read more!

P.S.  I was a little confused by your "no time to write reviews" comment.....did I miss something you reviewed earlier?