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Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 03:18 PM · On: Epilogue
Wonderfull story and I am so sad to see it end!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 08:43 PM · On: Epilogue
A really good ending to a wonderful story! I had to chuckle at Demetri showing up on Andria's doorstep, and felt for her and Edward when he mated with Ariana. That was really different, that he wanted to live life in a family, but sure picked a good one! It was so sweet that Andria's grandparents passed together that way, and she danced in honor of them to Edward's music!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 06:03 PM · On: Epilogue
'Several years after my change, once I had calmed down and could control my inner beast, Vanessa visited us. She didn't leave.(...) It was three years after her change, once Lucas had fully matured, that he and Vanessa became mates. I was ecstatic for my son and friend.' Nice move! I always liked Vanessa. Hmm... In hindsight, she seemed impressed with Lucas "Little Flirt" in their first encounter. Sooo, did she join to be with her sister-friend forever, or because she already had an eye on Lucas? A bit of both? :-P
Didn't Wesley got weirded out when he spoke with Andria after her grandparents deaths? After all, he knows her since forever, and would notice the enhancements and no aging stuff.
'My strange ability to keep pets continued even after we left Tahoe. There had been several other animals to join our family besides Todd.(...) Despite his horrid past, Simba loved all of the members of his new family, and so did Nala. They loved chasing Jacob's wolf around the yard.' :)
'As the years went by, Alice eventually stopped looking for the Volturi and we settled into a calm life of online courses, spending time as a family, and hunting. Of course, when Alice stopped looking for the Volturi is when we received our biggest surprise.(...) At that moment Ariana and Lucas walked through through the kitchen and into the room. "No, Lucas I will not write your essay for--" her words stopped as she caught sight of Demetri.' Another nice touch. Reforming Demetri and giving Arianna a mate at the same time. Cool!
Quite a ride this one was, Ali. I still think Bella's death was a tragedy, but I love Andria and everything she brought to the family. So, thank you. ^_^
I will be on the lookout for your new story.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 08:51 AM · On: Epilogue
Loved it, loved it, loved it!! I'm so glad that Vanessa and Demitri joined their happy family. I'd have loved to have seen all the kids reactions to them all turning up at school, so much eye candy for the humans, lol. I wonder what rumour they would have started about them all. I can't imagine being nearly 90 and still going to high school.
I'm sad to see the story end but I've loved every moment from start to finish and, as I've mentioned before, I look forward to whatever you post next. Thanks for sharing.
Jane x
Reviewer: Lisalou (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2012 04:45 PM · On: Epilogue
Thank you for writing. I will miss this story. I can't wait to see what you write next. Lisa
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 12:31 PM · On: Summoned
'He said that to the best of his knowledge my gift gave me the ability to incapacitate a predator. He said I was like a sedative to the beast.' Hmm, it doesn't sound as bad as Andria made it. If anything, it's very similar to Alec's power. :-/
'When I snapped at Eleazar and showed him just what a sedative did when it was angry, he and his family took their leave back to Alaska. Good riddance!(...) I took a deep breath and tried to calm down. Meditation was supposed to help; Jasper said so. I thought Jasper was full of shit. I'd like to see him meditate. I wanted to meditate him right off the edge of a cliff. Too bad it wouldn't hurt him; stupid fucker would probably just laugh.' Jeez! What a grumpy lady. I hope she cools down after her first year. ;-P
'My eyes had begun to change into an odd orange color in July, but now they were bright red again. I had slipped.(...) Edward was right, knowing about the boy made it harder for me to forgive myself for my actions, but it made me want to be better - try harder.' Yeah, I bet the overprotective Edward would never have that, if he could help it. But, in the long run, I agree with Andria. It's better for her.
'"'Bout damn time you did that," Jasper said with a chuckle. "Did what?" Ariana asked. "Nothing," I answered, shooting Jasper a glare. "Ew! Gross!" Lucas exclaimed and started rubbing his eyes.' LOL!!! X-D
"They're just a bunch of cock-sucking leeches, why should we bow down to them?" Lucas exclaimed.(...) "Shut it, Jacob," I growled at him, but he just chuckled. "Your pack of mutts ruined my sweet boy." Lucas scoffed. "Naw, Uncle Emmett did that when he taught me what a vagina was.
" HAHAHAHAHH!!! X_D
'"Interesting, I cannot read you. I wonder," he whispered as his eyes slid to me. "Is your beautiful wife protecting your thoughts?" He let go of Edward's hand and grasped mine with a speed I did not register until it was too late. I snarled at him, but he merely waved me off with his free hand. "No need for that," he said before he frowned. "She is still silent to me."' Wow! Her shield couldn't choose a better time to come back. I was really affraid Aro would learn about Vanessa and have a "legitimate" reason to punish them. :)
'Demetri shook his head. "No. Alexandria leaves with her family. She belongs with them. I've stood by in the shadows following your commands without question, but not this time. Not this order."(...) "Sometimes, if a vampire can overcome the desire to kill their singer they will develop feelings for them. It doesn't alway have to be deep love, but sometimes just an intense desire to protect."' Definitely didn't see that coming. Who would say that disastrous first meeting with Demetri would result in salvation? And to think I wanted Edward to reduce him to rubble... ^_^
And, of course, Andria was right about it being a trap. Aro must have planned to provoke her from the beginning, and somehow hid it from the pixie. Thrilling chapter, Alice. A pity this will end, but I'm eager to see your next work. :)
Reviewer: Luvrobpattz (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 11:10 PM · On: Summoned
Love it, Love it, Love it!!!
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 02:34 PM · On: Summoned
It's so sad this story is ending. I've loved every minute of it.
Lol, Lucas is so funny looking into peoples minds, he's going to have to bleach parts of his brain if he keeps looking at what his parents get up to and as for Emmett teaching him about vaginas.......bwahahahahaha!! Andria will be ripping her hair out.
I loved that Andria turned the tables on Jasper and Emmett when Esme washed her mouth out with soap, I'm sure they more than deserved it, lol.
So Andria's theory on Aro was right, he did want one of them to stay behind and it happened to be her. I didn't bargain on Demitri however and neither did Aro. It's good to know that other good things can come out of being a vampire's singer.
I'm intrigued with your new story, I look forward to reading when you post.
Jane x
Author's Response: Lucas will certainly be a handful. I'm glad you are intrigued by my new idea/story. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 12:24 AM · On: Summoned
I like that you didn't have Andria easily adjust to being a vampire, after all, only Bella had unusual control from the beginning. The summons to Volterra went about as well as Andria feared. Aro did everything he could to provoke a confrontation he could manipulate. The idea he could force Andria to stay there knid of blew up in his face. Good thing Demetri came through for them. It could have been really nasty, otherwise.
Author's Response: Andria having unusual control would have been too much like the original Twilight and no fun to write, in my opinion. Her normal newborness makes her exciting. Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 10:33 PM · On: Summoned
Now THIS has me excited! I was looking forward to another update to this story some time soon and lo and behold! Here one is!
I am so excited to see this story continued and taken along to it's natural course. I think you write so well and have a great plotline in this story and was sad to not see chapters for so long. I am glad that you are back! Thanks for the story!!!
More! More! More stories....Never satisfied are we? (wink, wink....what can I say? We love your writing and can never get enough.) I hope you are going to be writng more stories. I will watch for them, if so. Great stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 09:55 PM · On: Changes
'"I understand that soon you won't be able to come see us again, but I want you to keep in touch - phone calls, emails, something." Granny said.' I'm sure there isn't a never implicit in that sentence, right? 0_o
'Jacob said they would be spending a lot of time down on the Rez, and while I trusted the wolves with my kids, I was scared to hear what new foul words they would learn.' Aahh, I bet her ears will burn. Oh, man, imagine if someone imprints on them? I wonder how Lucas and Leah would get along. :-P
"I don't like pulling you away from the family, especially the twins, but tonight is special.(...) I feel as though I've been waiting for this moment since the night you asked me to stay in your room in Forks." What a change of outlook! But, after all he lived, if he was the same I would be very pissed. ;)
'I tried not to scream as Edward moved to bite my wrists and ankles. God I tried, but the burning was too much and an agonizing scream tore from my throat.' Ouch! Yeah, I almost forgot, the tough part of the deal. :-{
'It felt like much too soon the pain lessened dramatically.(...) Jasper stormed into the room, his jaw clenched and his hands balled into fists at his sides.' I should have known... :)
'We stayed like that for two and a half days until Alice ordered us out of the room so she could change Andria's clothes and fix her hair.' Pratically standard duration change. He should have used the injection in her heart. :-/
'If Bella was watching from heaven, I know she was jealous of Andria's jeans after Alice had put her in a dress.' HAHAHAAHH!! Totally. X-D
'Trying to get Andria accustomed to noises and movements was another effort. She was a lot like a skittish terrier(...) The day Rosalie revved the engine of Jasper's truck while tuning it, Andria had literally crawled up the wall and perched on the mantel above the fireplace.' LOOOLL!! X-D
'My family and I were all amazed when, just as Carlisle had described a year ago in New York, the predators eyes fogged over. The growling stopped and, he seemed to be frozen in place.' Well, part of her gift is there, at least. What about that erratic mind shield?
'Andria, noticing the animal, sat up slowly and watched it with a smile.(...) When it was within touching distance, Andria slowly reached out her hand and the crazy fox bumped its head against her fingers.' Wow! That I didn't see coming. Hmm, maybe someday she can befriend Apollo again. Except she won't mount, but race with him. And, of course, there are Mocha and Bear. :)
Definitely not a tame newborn, our Andria is. But I guess that, since she had her time to brace mentally for this new life, it won't take long for her to have a grip on herself.
You're right, Alice. This is one of the ones that deserves the tag THE Chapter. ^_^
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2012 03:43 PM · On: Changes
Lol, they crashed through the floor, now I bet that would have been something to see, hahahaha!!
Andria definitely seems to be full of surprises in her new vampire body. Her gift is more amazing and for a newborn she can show such control as to keep a pet without wanting to eat it but then she's crushing lego and door knobs like there's no tomorrow.
I'm glad that she's finally a vampire just as she's wanted but it's sad that she won't have as much contact with her family and Vanessa.
Jane x
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 11:03 AM · On: Changes
Andria's change was sure different from Bella's. It must have been hard even with Jasper projecting to Edward and Emmett. At least she acted more like the newborns Jasper was used to dealing with. Her talent was amazing, especially when she adopted Todd! Maybe it won't take a whole year until she can have the twins back in her arms. It's so great that her family all know what she is now, and she won't have to give them up.
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 09:58 AM · On: Secrets
Im glad everything is working out for them. Is Vanessa going to fall for Lucas? Her best friend can be her daughter in law. I think its time for nessie and Jacob to get married soon.
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 09:55 AM · On: The Big Day
Beautiful wedding. I was kinda hoping that one of the wolves would have imprinted on Vanessa.
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 10:03 AM · On: Father-In-Law
Im glad Charlie thinks she is perfect for edward.
I was wondering how old Renesmee is. i know you said Bella had only been a vampire 3 years and dead 2 so that would make her 5 but how old does she look? Had Edward had to give her the talk yet. I want to see that if he has not or at least a flashback of it.
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 05:49 AM · On: Discussion
You would think he would have learned his lesson with Bella and be more willing to change her.
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 05:48 AM · On: A New Start
Hi, When i read the summery of this story I was so excited to read this. My name is Andria, Andi for short. You dont see the name spelled this way often and my eyes just about jumped out of my head. lol. I told my husband that i finally found a story where Edward cullen was going to fall in love with me, of course he just rolled his eyes and laughed but hey a girl can dream right. I am already several chapters in but my Ipod would not let me review for some reason. But i like it. Im not one of those people where is HAS to be Edward and Bella forever. Things happen and people die and you are meant to move on. I just love that its with me. haha. Looking forward to more.
Andi
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 04:44 PM · On: Secrets
'"Ariana wants to see Jasper," Edward interrupted before I could say something back to Alice.' "Hello, uncle Jasper. I have been hearing about you since I was born. It's a pleasure to finally meet you" :-P
'The next day Lucas said a full sentence, and Ariana told Alice she wanted to play mechanic with Rosie instead of dress up.' Hahah! Disappointed aunt Alice, thrilled aunt Rose. :)
'Charlie came to visit often and loved to play with the twins. We had to remind Lucas to not bite Charlie because he wasn't like his family, he was like Mommy.' Now, look at that! Good to know he's still part of their lives. Really, very good! ^_^
'It had been six months since the birth of the twins, who now looked about eight or nine years old.' Whoa!! Slow down, miss. This way, they will be adults before they are two years old. :-]
"At eleven o'clock last night, police were called to a local lawyer's house after their neighbors reported hearing two gun shots. After an investigation, police report that Daniel Deangelo shot and killed his wife Denise and then shot himself in a drunken rampage." Crap!! That stinkin' excuse of a piece of trash... At least, Andria made peace with her before that. :-[
"What are we gng to do?" Rosalie asked. "If they come here and Andria isn't five months pregnant then they will know something is strange." "I won't lie to them anymore. They are going to meet my children, and we will explain everything to them."(...) "it's okay, Edward; so far it will all work out just fine,"Alice said calmly. "Vanessa is going to call. We can't lie to her anymore either." YEEEESSSSS!!! Now we are talking! :-D
"Vanessa. Edward and his family are different from you and me.(...) My grandparents and you weren't even supposed to know about it, but I couldn't hide it from you; you’re my best friend. So I started emailing you, but you weren't ever supposed to see me again. For your own safety and the safety of my new family" "Why?" "Edward and his family are vampires." When Vanessa tried to leave the house, outraged, I thought it was the end. Man, blessed be little Lucas! :)
"I'm an old man, Alexandria Fosten, but I'm not stupid or blind.(...) Besides those factors, no adoptive children have the exact same, and strange, color eyes as the two adoptive parents. I thought I raised you better and not take me as a fool."(...) "With that being said, I don't care to know what exactly makes the Cullen family different or what they are." HAHAHAHAAHH!! Very good, old man! I really like Andria's grandfather. And I think he and Charlie will get along too. ;-P
*sigh* Excellent time with her children. Both halves of Andria's family put together for good. What can I say? I'm happy! ^_^
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2012 06:47 PM · On: Secrets
Wonderful chapter. Bravo!
Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2012 06:44 PM · On: Secrets
Loved this chapter....especially Andria's grandfather. He was a riot ;-)
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 03:42 PM · On: Secrets
Wow! This chapter was chock full of good stuff! The twins are amazing, in their growth and talents, in so many ways. Andria's loss of her mother was a shock. What a tragedy, to make her peace with her and then have no time to enjoy it. Her step-dad really was a crazy bastard! I'm glad Andria told Vanessa the truth and Lucas convinced her to accept it. The grandfolks were smarter than she thought they were. How like them to notice the difference of the family. This should make life so much easier for all concerned, no more secrets!
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 02:12 PM · On: Secrets
So Vanessa ? Gonna go vamp or die too? Love the kids gifts.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 12:31 PM · On: Secrets
Oh it's so sad that Andria has lost her mum just when they had started to get to know each other again.
I thought for a moment there that Vanessa was going to leave, but Lucas saved the day. Lol, Andria's grandparents are no fools, what about their reaction to Jasper being actual family? How will they feel about Andria becoming like the rest of her new family?
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Jane x
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 04:55 PM · On: Unexpected
Congrats for the graduation, Alice! May you be happy in your chosen career. Just don't forget to always reserve some time for fun, too. We wouldn't want you to lose your spark, would we? ;)
'Edward and I spent a few more days in our house in Bordeaux before my abdomen was apparently larger than expected and Edward was worried something was wrong.' Here was the part where the idea of twins crept into my mind. P-)
'Edward estimated I was almost two weeks pregnant, but at two weeks I looked more like five months. The baby was very active, and I was overjoyed every time I felt him kick.' Yeah, I'm sure she felt that way, until the first cracked bones. :-P
'“That’s great, Alice, but where is Nessie?” I asked. Edward frowned at Alice. “Why is she with Jacob?” “She’s having a hard time coming to terms with Andria’s pregnancy, Edward,” Carlisle answered.' I should have seen that coming. But, even in her jealousy, she still had a place in her heart to take Andria and Edward's side in the nursery question. Good girl! :)
"He has, in every gory detail, but I wanted to talk to you about me staying human after I have the baby, at least for a while. Everyone said Nessie changed so fast. I don't want to miss something because of my change, or the possibly that I can't control my vampire side." That I saw coming. Heh! Edward have a talent to pick mates that want to do things differently. ;)
“The Volturi won’t like that we’ve added two new talented members to our coven. Three if you count Andria,” Alice commented. Andria huffed. “The Volturi can go fuck themselves. I couldn’t give a rat’s ass what they think of us or our family. We aren’t looking to take over anything so they can keep their creepy noses out of our damned business.” HAHAH!! My girl. But, seriously, Aro and company probably will put their creepy noses in this. Eventually. :-/
'Jasper groaned. “Please don’t inflate her ego anymore. I’m afraid I’ll have to renovate the bedroom door so her head can squeeze through.”' LMAOOOOOO!!! X-D
While Alice's idea is good, I'm still rooting for Vanessa to enter the Cullens' inner circle. ;)
And now we welcome Lucas Masen and Arianna Isabella Cullen. Be their childhood interesting. And I'm curious to see how it will be for a human mother with two hybrid children. :)
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