Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
Poor Edward...he's Bella's bitch lol. And seriously, Froot Loop? I call one of my friends Froot Loop because, well because she's nuts lol
Author's Response: My youngest son wants to get a rabbit and name him Froot Loop. he's quite determined on the matter. So I had to use it!
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
Good God. Poor Edward! Hahahahahahha.
Author's Response: He's a goner. And he knows it!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
Well, I guess you don't get that loving for free! But as scary as the kids were to win over, the adults should be a breeze!
Author's Response: Except for maybe the Colonel, LOL~
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
Loved the conversations between Charlie and Edward and Renee and Edward. I can't wait to hear what Will has to say!
Author's Response: And here he is... Will's a sweetie. He'll be nice. I promise.
Reviewer: angelrob (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
Poor Edward. Having had a dad who thought sitting on the porch cleaning his shotgun when dates picked me up, I can empathize :-)
Author's Response: So you know Bella's pain. :p
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
HAHAHA Loved the Phone Call with Mr and Mrs Swan. Think I giggled the wholetime. Cant wait for more.
Reviewer: mara west (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
Poor Edward!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
haha! I like the way Bella got him to talk to her fam!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
Poor Edward... he is getting it all around. Jake is so funny with his food choices. Thanks for a great up and can't wait for Charlie to visit.
Author's Response: The parentals are always a challenge, and when Charlie is a Colonel... Well that just makes it worse! And now there's Will. Oops!
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
Poor Edward, being thrown to the wolves like that! He's handling himself so well!
Great chapter, as always!
Author's Response: He's tough. He's a soldier. He's also scared to death. :p
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
Poor guy and his crusty underwear! Loved the chapter.
Author's Response: I think he's happy to have crusty underwear, LOL!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 27: Hurts So Good
I love the feminine comraderie and the hilarious male banter!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 27: Hurts So Good
Poor Rose :(
Reviewer: janefanatic (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 27: Hurts So Good
It was great getting some insight into Rosalie's character this chapter. I loved the way it was presented; from different people, all different perspectives, and no input from the character being described at all. It's probably the most trustworthy method of character description there is!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 27: Hurts So Good
Awesome.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 27: Hurts So Good
Ah, brothers. They just never grow up, do they? Poor Rose, but in a way, it might be for the best.
Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 27: Hurts So Good
Masen is just hillarious I would go crazy with a brother or sister like that..... lost it with him saying "I know you didn't chip your own wood" lol:D
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 27: Hurts So Good
Awww... they are just too cute!
Is there a bubble bath in their future, maybe??
Great chapter, as always! Please update again soon!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 27: Hurts So Good
Love this story. Masen has some pretty good intuition. Poor Rosalie, I can relate as my mother was very sick most of my childhood.
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 27: Hurts So Good
I love how you've adjusted the ages and made Emmett and Rosalie teenagers. Great idea. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 26: Closet Games (Ninapolitan)
Hahaha Love Bellas Explanation!
Author's Response: She wants what she wants...when she wants it!
Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 26: Closet Games (Ninapolitan)
Lol.....Bella is warning Edward that she's going to be loud when they do the deed. Edward better get started on find that private place. At least Edward got a taste of what's to come between him and bella. Thanks for the update
Author's Response: I think Edward is pretty motivated to give Bella what she needs. LOL
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 26: Closet Games (Ninapolitan)
Loved the line about residents of an old folks home...hysterical! Can't wait for more. I love this story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I love writing it, so it works out well.
Reviewer: WellMadeMistake (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 26: Closet Games (Ninapolitan)
FINALLY!!!! I love this Bella!
Author's Response: She's no shrinking violet, that's for sure!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 26: Closet Games (Ninapolitan)
Ahh some much needed sexual relief! Thank you Jesus lol
Author's Response: Edward says AMEN!
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