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Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 31: Moving Foward (Ninapolitan)
The toxic farts scene was hilarious and SO true! Not only do I live in a house full of boys, I teach 3rd grade--Fart City.
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 31: Moving Foward (Ninapolitan)
So NOW Masen comes out to play! AWESOME!
Great chapter, as always!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
Aw, Bella is too cute when toasty, and Edward got lucky Mason wasn't on his game!
Reviewer: tasteetreats419 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
I just found your story and read it within a few hours, and let me say that this has quickly become one of my top favorite stories that I have read. I love the dynamic that each boy brings to the family, Jake just about melts my heart everytime. Thank you for writing such an awsome story, I look foward to reading more. =)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
Oh Edward! You are a riot lol
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
OMG! He played the Mom card perfect!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
haha! As i have said before, I LOVE MASEN!!! I was wondering what I was going to do without an Em without all the jokes! But your Masen certainly leaves me wanting nothing on that end!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
Love this story and your characters. I bet Edward can hardling wait for the "no-sex zone" to be lifted. Looking forward to your next update.
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
Loved it especially the mom conversation
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
It's so obvious that you put your whole heart into this story. I appreciate it! Your characters are real and the emotions are so authentic.
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
Well done! I'm doing my happy dance that Masen is moving closer because I love his character...well, I love them all, but I think he's fuck-awesome! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Edward says that he will ship Masen to you. Air Express. Yeah, I like Masen too. He's a pain in the ass, but I have a fondness for pain in the ass boys. He reminds me of one of my nephews. He's a pain too, but I love him.
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
"Just so we're clear," I said. "My bed is a no-sex zone."
LOL! Poor Edward. So near, and yet so far!
I'm glad Bella cleared things up a little for him!
GREAT chapter, as always!
Author's Response: He just put his foot right in his mouth, didn't he?? :p
Reviewer: LauraEmily18 (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Mom Card
N'aww! Great chapter!
I'm really looking forward to more. In all fairness, I just love the fluff of it, mixed in with the emotions and reality of it all. I prefer it when it's Bella, Edward and the boys :) I hope there's lots of them to come!
How often do you update? And how long do you think the story will be?
Just a little curious as to how long I have to wait and how long I can continue to enjoy for ;) x
Author's Response: I am thinking about 80 chapters maybe? 64 chapters are completely written and I know exactly where I'm going with the rest and parts of those are written as well. There will be bigger time leaps later on in the story. For example, chapter 63 will take place in April of the following year. There will be lots of big changes for these characters, but in a good way. This is a happy story with no unpleasant surprises. :p Unless you count Masen moving closer.
Reviewer: LauraEmily18 (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 29: That Forever Kind of Thing (Ninapolitan)
I've got to say, I love this story. I find it hard to believe I've only just stumbled across it and I love it. You've really captured my heart with each of your characters; Edward, Bella and the boys! Each of them, especially Jake, are just so cute.
I think it's an excellent story. I cannot wait to read more. I've already read all of the outtakes, desperate for just that little bit more. Just to let you know you've had me both laughing and sobbing from this story.
I can't wait for the next chapter! please don't keep me waiting too long!! ;)
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 29: That Forever Kind of Thing (Ninapolitan)
Excellent story I love it all and am looking forward to more.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 29: That Forever Kind of Thing (Ninapolitan)
I'm going to give Bella a pass on that, because truly, with four kids and a deceased husband, they probably took the lions share of getting to know you talk. I can see brother being lower down on the list, and maybe she just never saw the right opening for the conversation.
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 29: That Forever Kind of Thing (Ninapolitan)
So glade they got their feelings out there. Cant wait for more!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 29: That Forever Kind of Thing (Ninapolitan)
Will's story was heartbreaking. Edward and Bella admitting they are falling for each other...OMG! It couldn't have been more perfect :) Fucking awesome *thumbs up*
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 29: That Forever Kind of Thing (Ninapolitan)
Awesome--as always! Love this story!!
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 29: That Forever Kind of Thing (Ninapolitan)
I had both army and marine in my family, and FUBAR was a staple phrase in our home growing up. :P Nice chapter.
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 29: That Forever Kind of Thing (Ninapolitan)
Loved the way you had them tell each other about their feelings. THat was fuuny how Edward ran and locked himself in so he could talk to Will. Wonderful as always. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 29: That Forever Kind of Thing (Ninapolitan)
oh I like Uncle Will (sure I will like U Josh)..can't wait for them to show up! Goes without saying I love your Edward and Bella!!!! I just love them all!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 29: That Forever Kind of Thing (Ninapolitan)
Ah, the mystery of Uncle Josh is solved! Loved the chapter. Poor guy is going to have his balls fall off one of these days!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
BTEC Day!! Has a ring to it!! ha
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 28: National Holiday (Ninapolitan)
ok so I read all 28 chappies and love this story.....Edward's inner voice is a trip.... and "dick" is just hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!! going to finish outtakes now and be totally caught up
Author's Response: Sorry the latest update took a while. I had a family emergency. But hopefully we're back on track now! Yeah, men and their dicks. I say that with all fondness you understand, LOL!
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