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Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 45: Runaway Moments (Ninapolitan)

wooot!!!!

sexy time is comeing!!! sexy time is comeing!!!!

bout fucking time!

Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 45: Runaway Moments (Ninapolitan)

Awwww. What a great way to write a committment chapter. Can I take you home and keep you, too? Reading your writing makes my day so much better.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 45: Runaway Moments (Ninapolitan)

Well they might as well go to the jp now and make it official! If I were Bella I'd be crying my eyes out and picking out silverware!

Reviewer: MaryAliKent (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 45: Runaway Moments (Ninapolitan)

Awww. Sigh. Great chapters! Thanks for the quick updates. Sweet and funny, just the way I like em. Keep it up!

Ali

Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Excuse Me While I Lose My Mind (Ninapolitan)

Sounds like you've made long driving trips with kids!  Had me laughing so hard I couldn't see to read!

Reviewer: twifan07 (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2011 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 45: Runaway Moments (Ninapolitan)

Seriously...best start to the week :)

Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 4: Suspicious Minds

As an Army brat, myself, I love this story!  You have it absolutely right in the feelings and tone.  It's nice to see it done right.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 45: Runaway Moments (Ninapolitan)

Poor Jake. Kids take things to heart, but glad that Bella talked to Jake and Edward. More please... Is it 6 weeks yet?

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 45: Runaway Moments (Ninapolitan)

Aaawww...

And next chapter, we meet Will?

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 45: Runaway Moments (Ninapolitan)

Wonderful! Everyone is keeping everyone else, and I'm full of happy feelings because of it. Thanks so much for such a nice chapter, and for updating all the time. This story has such a great feel to it, and it's one of my favorites. :)

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

He has finally seen what he has missed.  Family noise, laughter, love, commitment and everything that makes it work.  Life would be so emply without all of it.

 

So no one is getting younger here and if you love them, you love them.

 

 

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

Time apart is getting harder and harder! That's a good thing!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 43: Finders, Keepers (Ninapolitan)

Oh how I almost cried when Jake asked if he could keep him! I asked my great aunt if she would be my grandmother when I was little because mine died, so I know how that felt!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

Loved it

Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

Some of my current favs are Hamartia Rocks, Harvest Moon (content1) and Basking in the Light of our Love.  All very different but equally awesome. Closer Cold Desert and anything by lostluggage are great RPFs.   Oh yeah, Gateway to the Heart and What Drives Her - two more goodies!  Guess with a favorites list of 350 stories, I read a bit of everything!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

Aww Masen isn't so bad of a little brother lol. Poor Edward's nuts...I'll take care of them in Bella's absence lol. Loved Edward's end epiphany :)



Author's Response:

Well, you know...little brothers are - well, they're little brothers no matter how BIG they are. :p

Reviewer: REDHOTANGELS (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

aaww i loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

Emily seems like a sweet dog...

Recs? Hmmm.. One I've been doing beta work for lately is My Facebook Reunion by EternallyCullen. She has 30+ chapters up on FFnet, and is just getting started here on Twilighted. Tell her I sent ya!

Hmmm... My Viking is totally owning my ass right now, but I don't think that is one that would be considered "little known"....



Author's Response:

Emily is a sweeatheart and based on our Maggie, who went to that Rainbow Bridge a while back. I'm reading My Viking. LOVE it! I just added Facebook Reunion on your rec and love it so far! :D Thanks!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

Hi

As always I love your story.  This Chapter was awesome.  It showed what a normal boring life is with a family.  But BORING is awesome with family..  Thanks..  Hope you have a great New Year!  Have fun tonight.  I 'm having a old fashion Family and friends night with excitment of a New year and chapter in my life..    Thank you Leona (Smiles)



Author's Response:

Normal and boring can be sweet and soothing. And having Edward around wouldn't hurt either! :D Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

All for the love of a good woman...and a house full of noisy boys!  Loved it.



Author's Response:

You have to love a man who loves your sons too. Especially when there are so many of them to love! Yikes!

Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

Great Chapter. Im in love with "you are the only exception" and "soverign six" by hollister1980 but its on ffn, "Make your own kind of music" was great by Lazykate "Clipped wings and inked armour" was beyond words

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 43: Finders, Keepers (Ninapolitan)

The part with Jake...magic!  Love this story.

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

Happy new year to you and yours. I'm reading Heat of a Blue Flame by 107yearoldvirgin on fan fic. Really a great read and angsty. Twenty chapters done so far.Not sure how long it's going to be . I try not to look ahead in the chapters. Stampeed of a thousand pulses by ss10 on fan fic is supposed to be good too but I haven't started it yet. So many stories and not enough time.....

Great chapter yet again. You do such a nice job with this story. I love the whole family & dog bits so much and I enjoy Masen . So funny.

Merrily

Kat

Reviewer: Jolinar (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

Great chapter!

Thanks for updating and Happy New Year!

Reviewer: Red Koolaid (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 44: Discussions Before Dawn (Ninapolitan)

Love this story (especially that little Jake kid) and so appreciate that you update often. 

 

Other stories I love: The Plan by QuantumFizzx; Never Enough by gray_matters; Angel of God by Korissa and Righteous and Wickedby xcherryblossomsx. 



Author's Response:

Angel of God is amazing! I've got The Plan on my list and now I know I need to get to it. I'll check out Righteous too. Thanks!

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