It has been a pleasure reading your alternate.  I hope to read the next chapter soon.  As a "wolf" fan it is always a pleasure to read of spirit warriors, instead of Hollywood half-beasts.

As other reviewers have mentioned, your treatment of Paul was delightfully funny.

Author's Response: "Hollywood half-beasts" :) I actually snorted when I read your review! Thanks for taking the time to review. I hope to update soon!

Next chapter please.  think its great that paul is speechless.  so to speak.

Author's Response:

Hahaha - working on it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Im loving this story....please write more.

Author's Response:

Thanks brpalmer!  Not to worry - I'm about 3500 words into the next chapter.  Trying to figure out if I'm going to make it longer, or split it into another chap. Hoping to have it out to my beta within the week!

Thanks for taking the time to review!

wowzer!!!! lOVED IT!

Update already! Im getting withdrawl symptoms here.

Author's Response:

Me too! Lol!  Sorry for the wait.  I am working on it - albeit slowly!

this is such a great story!!! please write soon! I can't wait to see if Paul can talk again? if Bella will take her place as the alphas mate and how she will react to all of the legends! 

you are a great write, with an awesome imagination!

Author's Response:

Oh Paul - such a hilarious secondary character - the fun we can have with him!

Thank you so much for your review - rest assured I will finish this story!

It would be nice in your Chapter notes before the story to tell us what happened last chapter.  Since there is such a large amount of time between chapters many people won't be able to remember what previously happened. 

Author's Response:

That's a great idea Amanda-lee.  I'll be sure to try it in the next chap - thanks for the suggestion!

I don't think that they recorded their legends on scrolls.
By the way, adding your own lore in your fanfics isn't always a good idea. However, if you do have to do it, keep it simple at least. You mythological background is becoming more and more convoluted.

OH wow! This is awesome! So hoping you update more soon. No cliffhangers like that please!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hahaha - I'm really getting in trouble for that cliffie!  I'll try to refrain from having one in the next chapter!

Thanks for reviewing!

OMG how could you stop there?  That is just plain mean! lol  I can't wait for the next chapter!  Bella is turning out to be quite the perfect mate for the alpha.  I'm glad Sam was there to distract Jakes wolf! lol

Paul is such a loveable ass! I love to hate him...or maybe it's the fact that I picture Alex Meraz every time....yum!

Update soon!  Dixie

Author's Response:

Eek - sorry about the cliffie!  To be honest I just really wanted to get a chapter out, and it seemed like a good place to stop!  I hope you won't hate me forever!  I'll try to make the next chap cliffie free.

I also picture Mr. Meraz when I see Paul, he's one fine wolf!

Loved it! 

PLEASE update soon.  Love the bit about the alpha mate!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much - I'm hoping people will be open to it instead of the whole imprinting thing.  I'm not such a huge fan of it, and I wanted my Bella to not feel like she's less than everyone around her all the time - that got old!