That chapter was awesome! I really liked hearing Embry's pov. I think you should push along and see what happens next.  I can't wait. 

Author's Response:

Thanks tracish!  I'm glad you enjoyed Embry's POV!

Hopefully you'll like what's coming up next!

Tell Mandi thanks for the punch on Mike ;)  I loved the Embry POV-who wouldn't love that sweet unimprinted wolf?  All the angst and pressure on this chapter was worth it because you made it everything that it should be.  I'd kind of like to push along with the story to see what happens next but a JPOV or EPOV would be fun to read too.  It was nice seeing Jake going from silly boy to a man who can be trused to handle these supernatural situations.   

Author's Response:

Hi stephsmith - thanks for the review!

I told Mandi thanks, I thought it was hilarious too! Gotta love that Mike's there for comic relief!

Thanks for the vote of what you'd like to see next - I hope I don't dissapoint you!

You did a great job with this chapter. The dance was great. My opinion is to just push the story along because I am eager to read what happens next.

Author's Response:

Thanks danimcket!  I'm glad you're eager to see what happens next, although I'm sure you have a good guess!

There is a God after all. I'm not that into Jake but I do love this story. I found myself wondering earlier this week if it had been abandoned. Thankfully, you are back........

Author's Response:

Sorry for the scare ruthhazelton!  I had writer's block, then went away on vacation, then had editing nightmares...blah blah blah...lots of excuses!  Rest assured I will not abandon this story before it's done!

Surprise! I think Edward is an asshole.

The hottest part of this chapter is when Embry said Jacob was going to be the first to phase because he wanted to claim a mate. I LOL'd, then swooned, then squirmed in my seat.

I loved that this was all from Embry's POV. Great update :)

Author's Response:

Wordslinger! Thank you so much for your review!  I was so excited when you replied to my review on your story!

I'm so glad you liked that part - it was one of my faves too, and I wasn't sure how others would react to it! I'm hoping to add on to it in further chaps! wink wink!

Glad you liked Embry's POV - gotta love us some wolf boys!

LOVE it!  They aren't moving too fast at all...this totally would have happened in the books if Edward wasn't such a moron.

More naked Jake please!  Can't wait to see what happens at the dance!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I think so too! 

I want more nake Jake too!

Dance chap is almost done!

So sorry for not reviewing since my first comment. I have been reading your fic and I  thoroughly enjoy it but haven't been able to comment since I mostly read it on my phone. So, I'm finally on my computer to leave you a review. 

Your version of Jacob and Edward feel so real. I laughed at the telephone conversation between Jacob and Bella ...can visualize the scene so well. Adore the way Jacob trusts Bella and gives her space... don't make him appreciate Bella's space overly much in the future though! Not that I think you will, based on what you've written so far. :)

I hate the way Edward hangs around when the girls go shopping. I can picture his face hanging outside the changing rooms and it freaks me out, making me want Bella to run a mile anytime he shows up. The good part is that it makes me love your Jacob even more. Just hope Bella continues to feel the same way! 

Will re-read your next chapter over the coming days and review then. In the meantime, thanks for your story. I love it that you're tackling an episode (in time) of Jacob/Bella in detail before he phases. This way, they've established a good, healthy relationship first. 

Its all good, and I am really enjoying the story.

I don't think you have taken Bella OOC at all, in the original books she could barely contain herself and it was angstward that was all "No, No, No, No, No" so it makes perfect sense that with Jacob who is clearly willing and able that she would want to take things further.

The only thing I think is maybe a little out there is how competent they are and how totally unworried about the whole being caught issue - It was a long time ago, but I seem to remember that was a major issue in my youth, so there was a lot of sneaking about, straining ears and doing stuff outside - LOL fond memories! 

Anyway, keep with the writing and don't make us wait to long and more nakked Jacob please.

Ness

wooohooo I loved it!

I think It's sam.  and eww! lol Great Chapter!

Author's Response:

"and eww" - hahahaha.

Yeah, I know.

LOL

loved it!

YES! I was hoping you would use Jake's pov next! I would love to know what he's thinking! Great chapter!

I am totally loving the story.  I can't wait for more HOT NEKKED JACOB!!

Author's Response:

Sigh, hot nekked Jake.  If only we could all have some hot naked Jacob!