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Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2011 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 41
I'm still reading, promise! I just haven;t been online for quite awhile and had to catch up on a few chapters. :)
Author's Response: Glad to here from you- I've missed you :)
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2011 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 41
Nice chapter, even what you left out was nice, thank you for sharing it with me :) I think that after 92 years of being searched and not found, its highly slefish to ban hybrid babies...they would take only 7 years to grow! its not comparable to the 15hundred years the vampiric babies would need, and I would love to see Leah & Jacob arguing for their right to have kids.
How are you doing, do you feel better? have the dr¡s been able to find what causes you pain?
Hope you're better and have a great weekend,
Daniela
Author's Response: Yes, I see your point about the hybrid babies, but I also think some of the hybrids want to wait until after the war ends, because they don't know when they will be found. I think Leah and half of the others are on the side that wants babies now, but Nahuel and the other half want to wait. And anyway, the Cullens will be found next chapter, so hybrid babies will be coming very shortly. The problem with hybrids though, is that their time scale in comparison to a vampires is like the blink of an eye. I've been covering a hundred years in a singal chapter, and there could be hundreds of hybrids born within the first hundred years. But I think I'm just going to do one or two per couple and leave the rest to the sequel.
It snowed last night, so I'm doing quite a bit worse today. Within one day my saliva production almost stopped and my tear production is way down. Not that I've had enough to cry, but I was only using the eye drops two or three times an hour. I'll probably be back to every five minutes within the week. Those symptoms are the Sjogrens and they get worse with the cold. The pain is also alot worse today. Personally I think the pain is somehow caused by the Sjogrens, because it comes on with the regular symptoms. But no, the doctors don't seem to care. I think I need to find a new set of doctors and maybe even one who cares. But then I think that a caring doctor is an oxymoron and that goal is a hopeless endeavor. It costs $20 per doctors visit with a specialist and after hitting my head against enough brick walls I've decided that I'm better off keeping my money and spending it on other ways to relieve the pain, like turning up the heater and dehumidifier in my room and turning my house into southern california.
Thanks for asking though, and thanks even more for the review. I hope you noticed I worked another one of the terms you gave me in there :)
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2011 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 41
Yep still reading it :D I enjoy your updates. And I'm just laughing at how long it's taking them to find them xD have they not thought of searching islands? pssssh. They can stay underwater indefinitely! Have they not searched under the ocean? I'll be surprised if they haven't. Are they still communicating with the werewolves? the part with peter and charlotte's second eggs are confusing. they aborted the first two 5 years before arriving on the island, they're gonna gorge up their next 2 tomorrow... but you went off on how the new eggs were an accident and they didn't want them? but they do? they do want children, i know that. but egg blood and were gonna be aborted... oh my head hurts. hmm hmm hmm. nope that's it. :) woo
Author's Response: The Volturi have searched islands and oceans and whatever else falls along the latitude and longitude lines they searched- they did that first, and then they went back and did the likely areas more. But the problem with searching the ocean is that they can't smell when they are in the water. Fish can smell, but they do it by moving the water over their gills. Vampires don't have gills, so they can't smell, so they can't pick up a scent trail and follow it. And the island is not that big. It is maybe a square mile or two of rock and then a square mile more of ice shelf on the northern side during the winter (it was permanent when they moved there, but by now with global warming, it disapears completely during the summer). So I think the Volturi got close, but failed to search every single little island in the arctic and so missed Cullen Island.And they are not used to having to find anyone, because they have Demetri. Aro will figure out how to find someone without Demetri's aid next chapter.
I'll have to take another look at the Peter and Charlotte section- thank you for pointing that out. It is supposed to be that Peter and Charlotte had eggs in the year 5 BDA (Before the Death of Amun) and so are having the next set in 95 ADA (After the Death of Amun) and 95 yerars have passed during this chapter. They did not plan these eggs, because they did not know about eggs, but they want them. They don't however want anymore after these, so they are starting the egg-blood. They know they have to start it right away now, because Eleazar and Carmen had an accident. Eleazar and Carmen disgorged eggs soon after Amun's death, but did not want them. It was Eleazar and Carmen who aborted their eggs, but they didn't start the egg-blood soon enough. So Eleazar and Carmen had an accident and have another set of eggs on the way, which they don't want either. Sorry for the confusion- I'll have to go back and make that more clear.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 05:01 PM · On: Prologue
That would be great! I would love to read what u wrote...also, its a shame to waste hard work :)
And...you know...the exchange rate between US $ and BsF is unbelievably favourably to you, everything there would be really cheap for you and your family and its a place you could consider for your next hollyday, may be if you like to run away from snow hehe just saying 8)
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 02:45 PM · On: Prologue
The Denali's are two thousands year old homebreakers...I would more than love to hear Jasper's rantings LOL I really appreciate the effort you're putting into creating that scene (and the whole story) thank you so much, whatever it turns out to be I'll be happy. My bday was great, thank you, I rented a boat and spent the day with my closest family and boyfriend at the Caribbean Sea and a long weekend on Morrocoy's Nationa Park (check it out, its amazing!My family is from Barquisimeto and it was really nice to be there all together...here's something to make you curious http://www.venezuelatuya.com/morrocoy/indexeng.htm?)
Have a great week,
Daniela
Author's Response: That looks like my type of place- I can tell by the shade of the water. Iy sounds like you hada wonderful day :)
Maybe I'll just email you Jasper's rant as an outtake- he's mad because Carmen and Eleazar aborted their eggs.
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Prologue
Thank you! its really sweet of you to satisfy my curiosity hehe glad to be of some use and that u found a useful idea on my review =-) Im sorry I lost track of Seth and the other couples you mentioned, one of these days that my schedule stops spinning around I'll read the story again from chapter 1 to capture and remember all the details,so dont be surprised if I start reviwing again from chapter 1 xP
Have a great week,
Daniela
Author's Response: Actually that reaction scene isn't going so well- I was trying to write it from Jasper's POV and he just started ranting on how much he hates the Denalis. I didn't know he hated them, but in my head he just keeps ranting about them. Then he went off on the hybrids. I must have been in a really bad mood when I was writing it, because I had to scrap almost all of it. So I'm still working on your b-day present and it will probably be quite off from your request. How do you feel about a scene from the day Peter and Charlotte finally disgorge eggs? Jasper is in a better mood that day.
And don't worry about forgetting the hybrids- they are forgettable. I would have left them out if it weren't for the fact Edward and Bella have a hybrid. And it doesn't help that I changed their names halfway through the story, when S. Meyer released the names of Nahuel's sisters.
Have a good birthday!
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 40
Hi!its been a crazy crazy week, thank you for adding the extra chapter before the reunion with Nessie, it was really good. Nice to know Leah is not steril after all, I think given that she and Nahuel are the only other hybrid/shapeshipter known their children should have similar abilities to the ones I sugested for Jake/Nessie's (you chose with whom or if to use them of couse): to be skinwalkers, meaning they have the ability to shift into whichever animal or person they set their mind into. Also, as Nahuel is a lil bit poisonus, it would be cool to have poisonus breath...imagine to just have to talk closely to anybody and being able to (depending of the intention): a- induse a cathatonic state. b- drug (cause allucinations,amnesia,temporary obedience). c- poison (not turning but killing the person, although I think Leah/Nahuel's children should be able to turn people by bite). Another spin of that one would be to be able to create a fog, but just with ability b, or it would be just too much.
In the names department, how do you feel about good old Daniel/Daniela? its a nice biblical name that means 'my only judge is God', I think with that name comes a strong personality (hehehe). Another name I think you could use is Alejandra/Alejandro/Alexander, it means 'the protector of men' and it would fit the quiloute heritage. Any of these would also work for Jake/Nessie's kids, although I dont understand how they would be able to have children with Nessie being unable to change that much,you would have to really explain how it happened and why it happened now and not in the last centuries...I believe it would be best to simply let that ship sail, I mean, not every human couple in real life get to have kids (I've even known a couple that tried for over 10 years, and together couldnt have children, but after they separated and tried with other partners conceived..)
Hope you find any of my ramblings useful, have a great nigth
Author's Response: Daniela is a good name :) There have already been too many Alec, Alexander, and Alexzandrias in this story, otherwise I would agree with that one. I like the idea of the poisonious breath- I'll have to think about that more to see how to work it into the story. Leah and Nahuel will get one child who can turn humans with her bite, but she will be there very last child born to them, which won't be covered in this story. You'll have to wait for the sequel.
Don't forget there are two other hybrid couples too- Seth and Jennifer and Embrey and Maysun. And the reason those three couples have not gotten pregnant is that Jacob, Seth, and Embry have been taking birth control (I metioned this at least once before). And if it was physically impossible for a female vampire hybrid to get pregnant, then I think they would produce eggs. But, from how Meyer describes Nessie, as soft and fragile compared to the vampires and with human colored skin, I have always thought she was closer to human when it comes to reproduction. And she does grow and change, just really fast, so I think she would be more than capable of carrying a baby to term. I think the same thing happened with the original shifter hybrids, from Jackson's story- Dancing light was no more human than Nessie and she was able to give birth to hundreds of children. Although, I do agree with you that it would be better if some of the couples were infertile. Like Aro- no one wants a little Aro walking around.
Happy birthday! I'm still working on a scene for you- how Eleazar reacts to the eggs- for next chapter. But it's not nearly done yet, so you'll have to wait a little while longer.
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 40
Can the hybrids be any animal? I totally wanna see Dragons >.> fine, Gyrfalcons is my second choice. awesomeness. Or giant snakes! Powerful little buggers. hmm... Or could do a +Anima kinda thing... that's a not-well-known manga. I like it. Names names names... Yalu, Ignoli, Hira, Erun, Quale, Linkovo, Marial, etc etc... Yes those are just random letters I made up on the spot. Cept Link. I couldn't get that one out of my head. hmm... powers! um... curses, they're all already used. Laserbeams! More weather controlling!, Power-sapping!, Fire-starting! Time-traveling! Yes I'm pulling this from xmen and Gakuen manga! ~_~ so sue me, lol. well, that's all i got. /sadface. I liked the chapter, especially Nessie trying to get her siblings to behave. Seeing the origin of hybrids was neat too. so shifters made hybrids like Nessie? am i right? the characteristics looked awfully familiar.
Author's Response: Thanks for the names/powers- you'll have to keep reading to see which ones I use :)
Any animal, as long as it is or was a real animal. So Komodo dragons are in and prehistoric reptiles, but not mythological dragons.
I'm glad you liked the Nessie bit- I've been wanting someone to set Masen and Eliza straight for centuries now, but I was saving that for her, mostly because Bella and Edward weren't doing it.
The shifter hybrids and the vampire hybrids are very similar, but they aren't the same. The shifter hybrids are like a cross between Nessie and Jacob-
like a Quileute wolf, but the hybrid traits are not activated at puberty, but always there. The similarities between the two types of hybrid are the reason they can interbreed so easily.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nali-who-didn't-sign-in (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2011 01:56 PM · On: Prologue
woops! Didn't mean to forget to send in a name :x but then, I also suck at names. Big time. >.> And I can't remember the other names so I'd probably end up saying one that they already have! haha ;- ; um.. okay... lemme try and string random letters together.... savklo >.> well, that didn't work. see? I'm bad ; ; powers... well i was gonna say flight but then i remembered one of the kids can bend reality or something and kinda achieve that. darnit. >.</ ~_~ I kinda wanna see one turn into different animals (but with all the vampire characteristics - granite skin, super speed, etc) but... I dunno how well that would fit for a hybrid ~_~ lol. Maybe I'll come up with some actual good ideas later. If I do, I'll send em! D: ttfn!
Author's Response: LOL If you are thinking flight as the power, then might I suggest a flying animal? Perhaps a bird, bat, pteridactyl, or an insect? Adriel can't quite fly, so flying is still available. Plus I think it's okay to have more than one character with the same power
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 39
:3 neeat. I really liked the chapter!!! (ps. yes this is the only story that refuses to put my entire review through if i space it out. grrrr. how do i report this?) very convincing phone call. :) :o can't wait til the Volturi arrive and see just how many new additions have been added... heh. Alec became a father huh >.> wow. o: not surprised at all that Aro would want a Hybrid too. hahahaha he's infertile =-= ... just thinking of him holding back enough to have sex with a human... and right under his mate's nose to boot.... well then. that's a little scary. :x hmmm see you next time! thanks for updating so much :)
Author's Response: Aro and the others are not infertile, they are all in para with eggs. You can't knock someone else up when you're already knocked-up (that's also the reason Maria never knocked Jasper up). That was a bit of misguidance from Carlisle to keep Aro from finding out about the eggs.
I think the wives are so under Corin's spell that they don't notice anything, not even Aro and Caius cheating. They were just happy when Alec brought them a baby and didn't even question it.
BTW, you'll have to click on the "contact us" tab and send Edward a message letting him know the problem. Which browser do you use? I use firefox and I haven't had a problem.
Thanks for the review, but you didn't send me a hybrid name :( They are all going to have boring names at this rate. Maybe Jacob will be one of those egostistical manics who names all of his sons Jacob. Jacob Jr., Jacob III, Jay, Cobby, Jake, etc.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2011 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 38
Fantastic chapter!!!really nice =) I would love to see a chapter about what happened in the other houses with the other covens, how they reacted/adapted with/to the kids,etc...could you please consider it?as a bday present for me xD pretty please? (tomorrow Oct 14 I turn 24) it would also give you extra time before the reunion with Nessie and the whole hybrid baby thing hehe
About that, I think it would be awesome if Nessie DNA activates the whole shapeshifter cassettes and their kids have the talent of turning into any animal or person they want (do you watch trueblood?I mean something like Sam Merlotte and his brother, without the killing part to become a skinwalker of course), keeping the pack mind regardless of the shape they take.
Btw, we received my mom's test results back: no metastasis!!! xD we're all so happy. How have you been?has the dr been able to determine what causes you pain?where/how do you hurt?
I'll pray for you and really hope you get better, have a nice evening
Daniela
Author's Response: Happy early B-day! I do have another chapter planned from Carlisle's POV, so I could write you in something there, but you have to tell me which vampire, which child, and how they are reacting. The Denalis, Irish, English, Amazonians, and remaining Egyptians are all at his house along with Aiden, Carl, and Adriel. I'm leaning towards something with the English, because they have a newborn and an umated male, for Maggie.
I've never seen TrueBlood. I was imagining shape-shifter genetics to be like vampire genetics- vampires only have one skill, but over generations their skills build up, so the hybrids would all get one shape. In the next generation there could be shifters with two shapes and in the following an omni-shifter, but that would all be sequel material.
Wow, that's really great news! Give your mom a hug for me!
So far the doctors have been able to determine that I have an autoimmune disease called Sjogrens, which is normally a really mild disease that doesn't set in until the late 40s or later. But my disease it much more severe than normal and I'm only 28. I have really bad back pain all along my spine, but the doctors don't really care because it's not killing me and I'm young. The specialist even said he didn't want to treat me, even thought the blood-work came back positive, because I'm so young. A$$h*le.
I'd rather you didn't (atheist) but thanks for the sentiment- Amanda
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Prologue
LOL I meant Benjamin xP I have no idea why I wrote Jonathan, but I bet I made you research LOL so sorry, did you -in the research I think I induced- found anyone interesting worth saving?
And thank you,your chapter was the highlight of my day, your story made laugh while in the dr's office (they're checking my mom for metastasis, results on Thurday)
Have a nice evening =)
Author's Response: I did pull out my guide and flip through the table of contents for a Jonathan and I opened up my file with my cheat-sheet of characters in this file, but that only took me about a minute and I didn't find anyone else worth saving. I will, however, try to save Benjamen and Maggie.
I hope it's benign. They are getting better at treating cancers. I think the coolest treatment in the pipeline so far is directing viruses to target the cancer cells, without harming the body's cells. I don't think it's approved yet, but new treatments are being approved all of the time, so there is always hope.
It's a bit of a coincidence really, because I got home from my doctor's visit to find your review. I got bad news (***** wants to start taking me off the pain meds, without having found the cause of the pain) and your review almost distracted me from my internal rantings. Stupid doctors X-(
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 37
Great chapter!kuddos on the quick update =-) I dont mint the Volturi getting to the Denali coven first, but I would like all the amazonians and pack to make it to the island. Also, Maggie and Jonathan would be nice aditions too. Wha a ticking clock you created!? hope the celphones and internet are quick enough to warn everybody...if Aro has not taken the decision yet and has to wait to touch Amun Im guessing there are at least a good 48hours for Nessie, the amazonians and the pack to get a helicopeter to walrus island, sink the thing and swim underwater the rest of the way.
Have a nice week,
Daniela
Author's Response: Um, whose's Jonathan? I think the only John in this story in John, the human from chapter 5. Is there a super-awesome fanfic out there with a Jonathan that I don't know about? Is Jonathan Maggie's mate?
You can thank RedChevy for the quick update, it was all her :)
There will be more than one phase to the Volturi attack, so most (but not all) of the Cullen friends will make it to the island next chapter, but that doesn't make them safe long term and that goes for the Cullens too. The only vampires that are gaurenteed to survive are Jasper and Alice, because without them, I can't satisfy objective #1.
Thank you for the review- it was the highlight of my day!
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 37
That last sentence... spells foreboding. I'm not sure if you meant it that way, but I rather suspect you did heh. /shivers. Nessie is definitely being saved... the Irish coven might be saved because of their talent willing things to happen, but... hmm. I wonder. :) Yay Volturi is coming /o/ how old are the kids now?
Author's Response: The kids are between the ages of 900 and 700, which translate to 10-8, from Allison to Adriel.
It was meant to be a little foreboding, but this is just the beginning of the war, so there will a lot more lives to loose in the final battle.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 36
oh... i give it 500 years max ;) volturi problems wooo! you update fast =o me like! :3 let's see... what else can i write... oh, right xD i loved just how big the kids are getting. 8yo in the body of a teenager? sitting on their laps? oh classic. just a lovely image :) i wanna see that sketchbook of vertebrate evolution... >.> that would be fascinating. um... see you next time i guess! (:
Author's Response: Yes, my beta has been validating faster than usual.
Amun isn't going to last 500 years- he's still stalking Sonja and he wants her too bad. I want to see the sketch book of Jasper's past the most :)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 35
Good to know we're finally going to see what happens :) dont get me wrong,all the fluff was great,but I think we were all ready to see the kids grow up and the story move forward. Really good chapter, have a great weekend. Daniela
Author's Response: I know, I too can't wait for the Volturi to come already- I just couldn't have the Cullens as sitting ducks with a baby on each hip when they came. Now they'll have a chance of defending themselves :)
Thanks for the review! As always, it was good to hear from you.
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 35
sweet! volturi problems! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It's really nice to know someone is still reading :)
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 34
So cute :) You updated very fast. Neat! (takes special care to not hit enter again so not only the first sentences goes through >:( let me know if it works!) okay! sooo... i loved all the bits about cheating lol. they've never managed to pass a single test without an F, have they? hahahahaha! xD hmmm. when they get older will they possibly go to high school? i forget what time (if any) you said they'd stop growing. nah the volturi will attack long before then... awww. woulda been fun to see them through the absolute horridness of blending in, hahahaha. okay xD see you next time
Author's Response: It worked!
A few of the kids may have brought home an A or two in their preferred subjects, but yeah, there are a lot of Of floating around.
The Volturi will attck during elementary school, but there will be life post Volturi and I'm planning on sending them to Junior High in the sequel.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 11:07 AM · On: Prologue
not really a review, but... everytime i send one in to your story, it seems only the first line goes through... :( where's the rest of my reviews!? ; ;
Author's Response: I don't really know what to tell you, other than to report the problem to the site. I sure wish I know what else you wrote though!
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 33
lol crazy dream xD i love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback.
Reviewer: AmazingMets (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 30
I wish you'd update. I saw on fanfiction you deleted a bunch of chapters, so why is it taking you months to update?
Author's Response: The reason is twofold- firstly, I have been doing major revisions to this story. It was my very first story, ever, and it sucked. The new version doesn't suck and is much longer. This reason accounts for about 5% of the lag time in getting the chapters out.
Secondly, and this reason accounts for 95% of the lag time, is that this story is being betaed. My beta can take over a month to approve a chapter. I submitted the next chapter the day the last one went up and I usually get the next one up within a week. There is nothing I can do about this besides pull the story.
I could repost several chapters right now on fanfiction, but why? Up until you left me that message a couple days ago, I had no clue that anyone was even reading this story over there. It is hard working in a vaccuum and no one reviews if I post the whole story over there all at once, trust me, I did already. And I can't just repost the eniter thing, because the last ten chapters won't make sense until I revise them too (I made some minor changes to go along with my new plans for a sequel).
Thank you for the review and I really do wish I could get this story to you faster- believe me, there is no one it bothers more than it does me.
Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 32
Emmett's had to grow up and learn some self control. I can so see him surrounded by girls. If he had a son I think he'd revert to a ten year old again. They do say you get what you need, lol. What a sweet family they've turned out
Author's Response: Yes, Emmett has definitely grown up a lot! I'm glad you like the family shapters, because up next will be more of the same, just with Carlisle's family!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 31
As usual, a very clever reason behind the bickering. If he is equivalent to a two year old I don't think he would have too much trouble speaking, as long as he is convinced to try. My brother was the youngest of three for five years, and didn't have to talk properly because the older two guessed what he wanted all the time. When he did eventually speak, it was much better than you'd think.
I'm sure two isn't too late for a human baby to learn from scratch. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: My daughter had hearing problems until the age of 3, so she didn't start speaking really until 4, and no one else, besides me, could understand her until the age of 5. So I have some experience with speaking problems in humans and I know that young children are remarkably resilant. I'm sure that if Masen were human and had some speach therapy, he would be fine. But vampires grow more slowly than humans, so a year or two in humans is the equivalent to a hundred years or two in vampire. And none of the Cullens are speach therapists and Masen is a bit more stubborn than is good for him, so it might take him a while.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: faeking (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 28
I only started reading this fic because of the shiny sparkly gif. LOL I was browsing Twilighted and it caught my eye. Then there was the sentence of Jasper being pregnant and i was Sold. So all in one night i've read to here I'm intrigued interested and am in awe of some of the big words you've used.
Mi bad, i might have skimmed a few of them... I felt like Uncle stupidier for a few paragraphs... LOL can't wait to continue reading.
Author's Response: Well the best way to increase your vocabulary is to read- a professor told me that after I bombed the vocab section on the GREs (I got a 50%), so I picked up a book and started reading, and when I retook the test, I got a 90%. So I hope you learned a few words last night, even if you didn't learn them all. Maybe I should include a vocab list in the end notes, LOL.
Thanking for taking the time to review, I really appreciate hearing from you. I'm glad you found this story and I hope you keep reading. I still have another pregnancy, err parity (vocab word), for Jasper to go, but I'm saving it for the end, so that I can continue it into the sequel. I can't possibly have a sequel without a knocked up Jasper :)
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2011 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 30
i still have the feeling emmett and possibly rose have another egg(s) on the way.
i liked the newest chapter :)
Author's Response: Maybe, but pregnancy tests don't work on vampires. Right now Emmett and Rose don't even know how to test and see if there are eggs on the way, so it will be years before Alice or Scryan sees.
Thanks for the review!
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