Yes the piano thing is getting old. So are the killer robots. Haven't Zakaira and Zakare had their vampire babies removed yet? It's been more than 100 years hasn't it? Its a really interesting story.

Author's Response:

No, it hasn't been a hundred years, but it is getting close: Rosalie and Emmett still have to retch up eggs first. The first set of vampiric babies arrive in 4 more chapters.

Thanks for the review!

It was really cool to see Edward and some of the other vamps interacting with the humans! Great chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks! The next chapter won't have much humans, but the following three will have more humans!

Alice's lie is awesome! I wouldn't either smoke after being told that one!

Author's Response:

Alice does make all of the difference! Thanks for the review!

The piano thing got old many chapters ago. Still, I continue to like your story and hope you have a nice week and are able to update soon =-)

Take care,

Daniela

Author's Response:

Okay, I'll cut back on the piano bit. It was coming to an end soon anyway when the baby vampires start to arrive!

Pretending to talk about aliens and other planets is hilarious.  And I'm glad we still go back to the piano incident.  I wish Edward had really done something to that piano, that would be even better.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I was starting to worry the aliens and pianos were a bit out there. I'm glad to hear that they are still funny!

I liked the solution about the dying children. I think your story has a dark humor.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I love dark humor! Carlisle just kept insisting to me that they had to be dying!

Hey, I saw your story in "R4R" forum and decided to give it a try. I think this start is very interesting. I like the way you took Twilight introduction and twisted it. I don´t recall have seen this before.

Well done. I´ll read more later.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Do you have a story I could review?

I enjoyed reading about Alice's past a few chapters ago, and I'm glad Edward was around when Noah got hurt. Another reviewer noted that you have to be alert to follow this story, and I agree, but it's interesting and I'm curious to see where you take it.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad I'm keeping you on your toes! Next I'm taking the story back to the Amazon for a little Nessie and Jacob.

There might be a little more of Alice's past once Jackson is hatched, or we might get some of Jasper's past. But mostly we will get snippets from violent wars because that is what Jackson likes best :)

edwards relationship with his piano is funny yet at the same time disturbing. i mean its a PIANO for crying out loud. really funny though!

Author's Response:

If you like that, you should read the outtake featuring Jasper's take on the piano incident...

Thanks for the review! Keep reading if you want more pianoy goodness!

I want to see Em and Rose teaching the humans to talk and walk and all the normal baby stuff!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the suggestions! I'll see how much of that I can work in!

Another great chapter with lots of depth! I am keeping up with the technical stuff - just, lol. Thank you for not overcomplicating it.

I can see Rosalie totally melting and becoming a different person when she has her own baby. I expect she might feel differently about being a vampire.

I know it's a way off yet, but I love Emmett to bits and can see him being a great dad. But, I would pay good money to be a fly-on-the-wall when he gives his son (if indeed he has a son) the birds-and-the-bees talk! I bet he'd be most inappropriate. On the other hand, he would be an overprotective dad to a daughter, so I'd like to see him deal with boyfriends.

Rose, of course, would revel in all the girlie stuff, so maybe Emmett would be concerned that she kept that to any girls.

I am sure the real fun will start when Aiden and Allison appear, (are they born? Do they hatch?...?)

Author's Response:

The vampire babies technically hatch: they get so thirsty that the blood coming in from their own umbilical cord calls to them. So they bite the cord, and use it to drink the host dry (hince, the host always dies). Then, once the cord is severed, the hatching instinct sets in and they chew their way out of the egg, and then out of the host. But, Edward probably won't give us any of the bloody details :) And yes, the fun will really start when there are baby vampires running around causing havoc.

Yes, I think Rosalie will look more favorably on being a vampire once she has children, but even with vampiric biological children, I think she would still wish to be human again. Although, if given the choice, she probably wouldn't act on the desire, just so she could be around for her children.

I think Emmett explaining the birds and the bees sound very funny...maybe I'll find a way to work that in. But, he can't possibly be as over protective regarding boyfriends as Jasper was. Don't tell the Cullens, but Jasper drank Zikare's first boyfriennd when no one was looking (he covered it up, and has been not thinking about it in front of Edward ever since. Alice knows, but is keeping his secret).

-Im glad my Noah is the smart good boy, but so sad that he got hit by a car! lol...

-I think Rose will be different from the others were as she will form more genuine relationships and love for the humans they adopt. 

-I think Emmett will get in trouble A LOT for being too rough and playing with his humans. LMAO...

-Hmmmm or will a more gentle side of Emmy-bear come out around the babies? : )

Author's Response:

The most important thing is that Edward saved your Noah! Next chapter Edward will reveal that he prefers Noah to Xavier, even though parents should not have favorites...

I think we just might be getting Emmy-bear! Awesome nickname! Yes, Rosalie will have to be more genuinely interested/love the humans.

 

I love that Carlisle's kids are a peace-maker and a healer, that is so perfect for him!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!