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Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 15

An amazing chapter! I love the glimpses of future vampires, though I feel sorry for all the Cullens when I think how long the awkward stages are going to last, lol.

I imagine it's going to be very difficult hiding little children who do not appear to age.

If Rosalie's baby is calm and Emmett's is anything like Emmett, then I can see Rose's baby being very observant and consequently talking/tricking Emmett's baby into doing stupid things. Maybe things like eating crayons?

Can't wait to meet the baby vamps next chapter!



Author's Response:

The way I see, vampires measure time in longer increments, so to them, the slower aging balances out with their altered time conception, so the extra awkward years do not seem long to them :)

Thanks for the idea about Rose and Emmett's kids. I'll start thinking about what else they can trick the others into doing!

Reviewer: AuroraShae (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 15

I love love love love your writing!  As total nerd, I enjoy your incorporation of possible science and the fact that your story is well written--I was an English major with a creative writing concentration, and I appreciate the minimal grammatical errors in fanfic!  Your creativity and imagination in your storyline are incredible and I LOVE the parental qualities you've bestowed in our beloved characters!  And no, I don't think your use of the "piano incident" is trite--I think Edward totally deserves to be ragged on at every chance!  BTW, Emmett being distracted and letting the kids eat crayons is totally in character!!



Author's Response:

Just wait until you see what Emmett was distracted by: the other babies will be behaving even worse at the time.

I'm glad you like the story and my writing! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AuroraShae (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 4

I think it was a great idea to use two HIV pos kids as the adoptees--the adoption gives them a chance for a longer than normal lifespan (though how normal can a life be when adopted by vampires LMFAO).  I love that you use your pennames for the twins!



Author's Response:

You have it backwards: I needed a penname and had already named the twins, so I stole their names :) And I'm glad you liked the idea of using AIDs babies! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: CharlotteCullen50 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 15

Why is Scryan so much larger than the other three kids?



Author's Response:

Excellent question. The answer is epigenetics: it's the answer to everything isn't it?

Anyway, boy vampires are bigger than girl vampires and male vampires have larger offspring than female vampires. That is why Allison and Jackson are the same height and why Scryan in the tallest, while Ashley is the shortest. Aiden, Carlisle's egg, is almost as tall as Scryan, becuase he too is a male offspring of a male vampire. Lily, Rosalie's egg, is also a female offspring of a female vampire, so she is the second shortest. But she is not as short as Ashley, because Rosalie and Emmett are so much taller than Jasper and Alice.

Reviewer: jasperalice (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 15

Alice's story with her experience with cooking was LOL! If I was Jasper I wouldn't let her use the toaster either!



Author's Response:

Yes, Jasper is too over-protective to let ALice try to cook again :)

Reviewer: OrchidFlowers (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 15

I so want to see the pictures Alice sketched in this one!



Author's Response:

Me too, Me too. But I can't draw :(

Reviewer: halerosalie100 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 15

I like how you showed Alice interacting with her humans at the end there! And I can so see Rosalie demanding visions of babies from Alice!



Author's Response:

Yes, Rosalie wouyld likely become addicted to Alice's visions :)

Reviewer: caiusaromarcus (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 15

I loved the Alice's POV! Especially the visions of the vampire babies!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Dava_Luna (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 15

Yay! LOL it was funny, I knew my name would be in the story somewhere but when I read it, it completely surprised me! Its not every day that I see MY name somewhere that I havent written it. : ) BTW how in the heck do you pronounce Skxawng? Shawn?



Author's Response:

It always surprises me which names other people ask about. I would have thought someone would have asked me how to pronounce Zikare or Zakaira, given that they both have silent letters in them. But Skxawng is from the movie Avatar, and is pronounce Ska- ow- g., just put those three sounbds into one sylable.

I'm glad you liked seeing your name! Just don't get offended when Rosalie brushes your character off to go play with the baby vampires! I hope you do not mind how I did not make the hosts humans perfect: giving them flaws made them more real to me. And I think they all turned out pretty well in the end...except maybe one...

Reviewer: CharlotteCullen50 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 14

All the lies Rosalie and the rest of the Cullens were telling about the new hosts got a little confussing.

I'd like to see Edward lose a finger sticking it in a baby vampire mouth! It can just be reattached!



Author's Response:

I'll make sure to at mention that Edward has losts fingers in their mouths! LOL

Reviewer: halerosalie100 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 14

So if marriage is so frowned upon, the Cullens will draw a lot of attention by admitting that all of the couples are married What story are the other Cullen's telling the humans?



Author's Response:

Good question! Alice and Jasper, as well as Bella and Edward, have not admitted to being married just to avoid the attention it would cause if all of them were married. Esme and Carlisle are a little older, so their marriage is more acceptable in the culture of the future.

Reviewer: jasperalice (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 14

I love Rosalie and Emmett having to deal with the sick babies! It is like a trade off between caring for dying humans are barfing in a bucket. Which would you rather do? Great stuff!

Oh, and I would like to see the baby vampires fighting! Will they go for the kill, or be more gentle in their attack?



Author's Response:

Hopefully if the baby vampires went for the kill, the adult would be there to stop them. But they will definitely fight with each other :)

Reviewer: dmegsiseggs (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 14

woah geez. it seems to be not only the volturi would see this as building an army but to me also. if the cullens wheren't the cullens this would seem sinister



Author's Response:

Well the Volturi will be coming for another visit soon! And when they find out, they will think the Cullens are building an army and declare war. But that is still a ways off.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 14

Aw, Rose was always going to be one holy hell of a mother! And I've always thought Emmett would be a perfect dad

LOL, I love the idea of marriage being frowned on.

I imagine with baby vampires running around they may have to watch out for the neighbour's cats and dogs.

Oh, and Catholics are Christians, they just think they're better at it than other Christians,lol.



Author's Response:

I've always thought Emmett would make a great dad too! And the humans are only the warm up for the vampire babies :)

The Cullens are such a marriage oriented family that I thought it would be funny to show them having to deal with a new culture in which marriage is taboo. And society is already leaning that way :)

Well, there will not be any neighbor's where they are going. There will be wolves, but I kind of don't want to go there. But I'll work in something where they go after other local animals...maybe some birds.

I thought that Catholics were Christians, just with a pope? Truthfully, I have a very low religious aptitude and have trouble following religions. I am a big fan of the flying spaghetti monster though! He will protect us from the calculator eating witches!

Reviewer: OrchidFlowers (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 14

This was the most complicated adoption yet: the Cullens sure went to a lot of work to get the TB babies.



Author's Response:

Yep, but Carlisle just could not bear to watch all of those dying TB babies and not do anything about it

Reviewer: OrchidFlowers (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 13

Edward's story of Emmett hitting him is just soo Emmett! I love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I think Emmett would take full advantage of Bella's shield after living with Edward after all of those years!

Reviewer: caiusaromarcus (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 14

I'm glad Rosalie got the human babies she wanted! And she only had to wait 200 years. I'd like to see the baby vampires trying to hunt any mice that wander too close



Author's Response:

Well animals in general are going to shy away from the babies, but I'll try to work something like that in!

Reviewer: CharlotteCullen50 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 13

Jacob's story was Sooo funny! I can't believe that Jasper almost took off his hand in front of the humans!



Author's Response:

I can't believe Jacob still has the use of that hand! Jasper wasn't kidding when he said he has a "I kill anyone who touches my wife policy!"

Reviewer: halerosalie100 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 13

LOL- Explanating vampiric parasitism as anal probes and alien implantation was hilarious!



Author's Response:

Glad you like the aliens! They are here to stay, as the humans will continue to buy that explanation until their deaths!

Reviewer: jasperalice (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 13

Great chapter! I really enjoyed hearing about some of the things the Cullens and Wolves did! But I would like to hear more about Nessie's past



Author's Response:

I'm not going to go into too much detail into Nessie's past, as that is a story of its own (maybe Stephenie Meyer will write it someday)! But there well a few bits here and there about Nessie :)

Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 13

Mmm right now I cant think of an embarrasing story about my childhood (selective memory hehe) and I dont think you're interested on any dirt from my parents or siblings (from them and many other family and friends I do remember many)...so I'll call my mom in the morning and ask her what she remembers and I'll get back to you xP I enjoyed reading your story a lot so I feel you earned that piece of honest information =-)

Have a good night,

Daniela



Author's Response:

Thanks! i'm glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Dava_Luna (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 13

As a child I was particularly clumby and for some reason completely failed to put my hands out out when I fell. So that left me with 4, yes 4 broken noses. One from falling off a bunk bed, one from running into a goal post, one from tripping over a curb and into a car, and the last... running into someones forehead because my bus was leaving without me. 

 

In case you were wondering, yes I did miss the bus. I was unconscious.



Author's Response:

You sound like a good source of stories for Bella! I hope your nose is alright: that sounds really painful

Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 13

I don't know how you managed to come up with so many stories! Very entertaining.

It sounds like your whole family are entertaining! My little brother was always gatting the best of me because he was stronger. So when he annoyed me, I would take one of his toy cars and bury it in the garden. I don't think he ever knew, but it made me feel better, lol. They are probably still digging them up at our old house!



Author's Response:

I wrote the stories a little at a time: this chapter took me a lot longer than the others for that reason.

Your toy car story sounds really cute :) But you should have given them back to him eventually!

Reviewer: caiusaromarcus (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 13

I love the stories with the wolves!



Author's Response:

Thanks! We'll see the wolves a few more times before the end :)

Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 12

Ha ha, pretending to be aliens!!! PMSL!

He might be a lazy slob, but you have to feel sorry for poor Xavier.

Very clever! I'm always amazed how authors think their way out of situations. (I guess next time I need a story plot I should talk to my Mom - She-of-the-Twisted-Mind, who is brilliant at cryptic crosswords.)

Well, you did warn us the piano would come up again and again, lol. Yep, still funny!



Author's Response:

Xavier may be lazy, but no relative of Alice's could be called a slob! She would never allow it.

I'm glad you still like the piano gag. But, unfortunely Edward will not own a piano for much longer: As soon as Elizabeth arrives, the piano will go...

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