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Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 01:59 PM · On: It Should Happen This Way

  *sigh*  And I finally catch up with the story.  I understand why some people only read stories after they are complete.  :(

  I kind of liked that Angela didn't go away crying when she realized Ben was with Leah.  Specially since it would be, essentially, a misunderstanding.  :)

  Well, I was expecting Ben's admittance into the Cullens would be something less emergencial than that, that he and Angela would be allowed to discuss the possibilities; but I guess this will do.

  Ah, our beautiful Bella!  She was the last one I was expecting to sire Ben.  I hope the fact she was able to stop give her more confidence that the trapper won't happen again.  :-]

  I don't expect problems from the Pack, since this was made at the request of one of them.  But I fear for Jacob; will Sam see as fit to punish him for that?  :(

  From Jacob, I expect him to tone down his anti-vampire speech from now on.  Hmm, well, no, not exactly.  I just want him do admit the Cullens are a exception to the rule.  :-/

  Angela?  Right now, she is either chasing Leah, or running away from her, I can't decide.  But I think that, when she comes back and learns what happened with Ben, she will find a way to blame herself for it.  You know, contamination from Edward's venom...  X-}

  For the record, it is not what I want to happen; I'm just guessing.

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 09:09 AM · On: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

  Leah?!?  Eyeing Ben?  Oh, man!  As if things weren't messed enough...

  Seriously, I'm not up for a girls fight!  :(

  Which is exactly what I gain.  And if...mean, when Leah loses Ben for good, she will be devastated again.  She already lost so much...  You are cruel!  X-(

  Holy...!  Ben' description of what he is suffering is eerily familiar, isn't it?

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Ain't Nobody's Business

  Ah, finally!  She is going to see him!  Perfect!

  Well, Edward is still being stubborn, but I'm sure he is begining to see the logic of Alice's illogical meddling.  Angela's memories of the wedding being the key.  :)

  Alice, Jasper and Bella should corner Edward more often. ;)

  Please, let the next chapter show some Angela/Ben moments...

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 08:16 AM · On: Ain't No Sunshine...

  Poor Ben.  He must be down, not knowing how to find her.  Another loss in his plate...

  "Exactly, Ang. He already knows and he isn't running. Talk to him. Even if it is only to say goodbye. But don't run away because I am telling you now, that if you do, this will haunt you for the rest of your days."  Your Jasper is a well of wisdom!  :)

  What would I do?  Well, I sure know what I want Angela to do.  ;)

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:53 AM · On: Take A Look At Me Now

  I wonder where will Ben look for her.  Does he know about the Cullens?

  That was depressing.  Taunting Jacob to fight him...  I expected more of Edward.  B-[

  Still better than a conspiration, though.

  Harsh?  Harsh?!??  Harsh doesn't cover it!  That was absolutely cruel and without a hint of compassion!!  Jacob should look in a mirror before accusing someone of being a evil creature!!

  But maybe there is a good side...Maybe Angela isn't so inclined to depart anymore.  And, in staying, she will be even more tangled with Ben.    X-)

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:19 AM · On: Even Now

  Well, I guess it answers my prior question.  Jacob just now learned about Angela.  So, Ben didn't knew either.  Hoped, who knows, but didn't knew.

  Hmm...Edward vanishing from Alice's sight, someone sneaking on Jacob...What the heck?  Will Edward conspire with Jacob to keep Angela and Ben apart?

  *Tsk, tsk* If this is the case, he didn't learn to not make decisions concerning other people's lives all by himself.  How sad!  How infuriating!!  B-[

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:49 AM · On: Tough Talk

  'You know, Angela, I really believe that some of Edward's self-loathing seeped into your body when he turned you!'  It crossed my mind too.  :)

  Alice may be annoying, but I love her all the same.  And if it is to put Angela, one of my favourites, and Ben together again, I hope she keeps interfering!  :-P

  'She's a walking freaking corpse that enjoys nothing more than a bloody Mary, and I don't mean the drink!'  Oh, really?  And I suppose the same applies to Bella, your dearest friend?  *evil grin*

  Sooo...Ben is an initiated.  How better can this be?  Perfect!  I can only assume that, if the red-headed vampire he meet was Victoria, it was just before the final showdown with the Cullens, and she managed to elude the pursuing Jacob.

  What Ben will do next?  Why, ignore Jacob's warnings, what else can he do?  P-)

  Just wondering...  Did Jacob tell Ben Angela's real fate before he saw her in the cemetery?

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:03 AM · On: What Might Have Been

  Ben!  Oh, man!  This will be will be utterly good or awfully bad!!

  Of course, there is room for both.  ;-P

  So, Ben and Jacob are chaps now, huh?  I bet Jake will try to put some blocks on this road...

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 05:36 AM · On: Peace

  Good bye, Rev, good bye...

  ACK!!  Angela, the first unaware vampire in history!!  How didn't she sense this one nearby?  Between smell and the sound of heartbeats and walking feet...  Hehehe, this promises to be interesting;  it is always funnier when they don't succeed in isolate themselves completely.  :)

  And I see little Alice was aware of this little slip.  Mischievous pixie!  :)

  I trust Alice's judgement over Edward's anytime.  So, let the chips fall where they may.  ;)

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Fly Away

  What do the Pack know about Angela?

  Well, at least now I know what happened with Renee and Phil.  You don't like her very much, do you?  To turn her into such a sorry excuse of a mother...

  "Bella, I don't brood."  AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!  It hurts!!!  X-P

  I'm relieved by Rev's reaction.  Blessed be Edward and his gift!  I knew he was not a zealot!  I guess this last meeting gave him the peace denied to him in the last fifteen years.  So bittersweet...  :-|

  And I hope his gratitude towards Edward gives this wannabe martyr some rest, too.  :)

  Very good, Eyes.

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 09:29 AM · On: Home

  Poor Angela, this will be hard!  If she hadn't the family to lessen the blow...

  To see her mother and be unable to confort her certainly didn't help.  I imagined Angela could bump into her or her siblings, in making this visit.  :(

  And, now, the Rev.

  Eyes, as a rule, even when I don't comment something directly, most of your text, the little details, descriptions and interactions, is simply a pleasure to read.  I hope my ratings state it clearly enough.  You are one of my favs.  ;)

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 08:29 AM · On: Remembering When

  When I asked if Rev Webber would have some relief, it wasn't what I had in mind.  :-/

  She have beautiful memories of her father.  Which makes what is about to happen even sadder!  :(

  Your question is hard to answer, if even Angela doesn't remember if he had opinions about this kind of myth.  She didn't paint him in her memories as a zealot, however.

  He grieved for her for fifteen years, so he could very well be soothed knowing she didn't die, that his little girl is going on with her life, and go in peace.  But, in case he sees her as damned creature... Geez, his rejection would haunt Angela forever!

  I hope for the first option, of course.  :-]

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 07:54 AM · On: Learning to Fly

  Nice memories.  I enjoyed them!

  I like Rose's honesty, if a little blunt.  Maybe if they stressed it for Bella after her change, despite the fact she already knew about it before, that accident with the trapper could have not happened.  :-|

  "Alice? What's wrong?"  Oh, heck, what now?  Tell me it's not her father...

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 07:04 AM · On: Broken Wing

  Ah, nice!  I was hoping to see her first moments in the new life!

  Her awakening was mostly like I expected.  When she crumpled to the floor, it was heartbreaking.  :(

  'I would never allow myself to become attached to a human, knowing I would either have to watch them age and eventually die or choose eternal damnation to walk alongside of me.'  I think Edward's venom tainted her with his ideas.  :-P

  Rev Weber...Fifteen years, and his pain is still so strong?  And Edward thought the human memory was like a sieve (New Moon).  Will he have any relief?  His grief gave me a knot in the stomach.  :(

  I wonder what would Angela do if she knew about her old man's suffering...

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 06:22 AM · On: By Myself

  'The Angela I knew would never hurt anyone and would go out of her way to help anyone who needed it. She was intelligent and thoughtful and kind-hearted. That same girl is sitting here, right beside me, albeit a lot less fragile and a lot feistier, but you are still you, Ang. You just have to find your way back to her.'  Wise words, master Jasper!  I wish you could shove them into Edward's head too.  :)

  She is trying to walk with her own legs, huh?  Angela is a gentle soul, like Bella.  It would be strange if she couldn't do that.

  So, she is the odd one in the family now...  I hope she find a new someone for herself.  Or maybe someone not so new, perhaps?  ;)

  If Carlisle and Esme are right?  You tell me.

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 03:44 AM · On: Prologue

  "Maybe he'll adopt me."  I can't imagine how many people must have said something similar.  But what can one do?  Fateful words,  fateful words...  :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 06:35 PM · On: It Should Happen This Way

I'm so proud of Jake!  He chose to save his friend, even if it ment he would be turned into what he hates....That takes a lot of guts.  I hope he is rewarded for this and finds a happy ending in this story,,hint,!

I think at first Angela will be mad but then happy, she has Ben back.  Another question is how will Ben take being changed?  Maybe the title of the stroy is in refrence to his decision to find angela...

I can't wait for more!  Dixie

Reviewer: zannesg (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 05:16 PM · On: It Should Happen This Way

Wow.  Nicely done chapter.  I think that Angela will be both cautiosly thrilled that Ben is able to join her in her new life, but also regretful for what he has lost.  At least he does not have any close family that will mourn his loss and Jake will still be able to talk to him and visit when they are near.  The pack and the elders should be able to accept Bella's biting Ben since she was saving him from Leah and the wolves are supposed to protect others at all cost.

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 03:32 AM · On: It Should Happen This Way

I always knew Ben would be changed, but Bella was a surprise!

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 01:57 AM · On: It Should Happen This Way

have to admit, was surprised it was Bella that turned him...but sensible that Jake, even 'hating' what she was would call her over any of the others...

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 06:40 PM · On: It Should Happen This Way

Angela is going to be mad i think, but happy at the same time. I think she is going to think this is all her fault and feel guilty as well.
Wow this was one hell of a chapter, lol.
well until next time

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 05:58 PM · On: It Should Happen This Way


Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 05:31 PM · On: It Should Happen This Way

Either kill Bella, or just hunt Leah down for causing Bella to have to do that.

Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 11:30 PM · On: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

Yay Ben's a part of the family! What happened? Was it Leah in her uncontrolled state as a wolf? Can't wait to see his reaction to his changed state of being. Happy belated birthday!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 01:57 PM · On: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

love it as always

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