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Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 8

Thanks for another great chapter. Poor Bella to have suffered so much and poor Jasper for feeling all of it! Rosalie should talk to Bella, but I can see where she's coming from.

Author's Response:

Rosalie is being Rosalie and taking her sweet time but she'll get there, if I have to drag her kicking and screaming. :)  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh em gee i have been waiting forever for an update! you never disappoint! thanks a bunch!



Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long, techical difficulties, but eight will be out on Monday.  Thanks!

Reviewer: finallycaved (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

ooh!  A little cliffhanger!  YAY!  I'm excited.  I really want Edward to come back... I like Edward's, Emmet's, and Esme's points of view.



Author's Response:

I think you're the first to be excited about the ending of this chapter. :)  Edward will appear more and more, just please be patient for a bit longer.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ilovethisplace (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

I absolutely LOVE this story! Every chapter just gets better, drawing me in even more! Thanks!

Author's Response:

Aww...thanks so much!  And thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 7

She takes refuge in Carlisle and Esme now, she is getting much, much better!



Author's Response:

She doesn't realize it, but yes, she is.  She needs some loving parental figures, and Carlisle and Esme fit the bill perfectly.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 7

ok, that was just mean ending on a cliffie right after telling us you are going to be late updating.  mean, mean, mean!  but at least you got me hooked!



Author's Response:

Mwhahahaha...all part of my master plan. ^_^  I'll actually be able to post chapter 8 on Monday as usual, so not too long for the suspense to build.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 7

no not a cliffie!! please update soon.

xoxo



Author's Response:

Every story has to have a cliffie at least once.  :)  I'll be updating Monday.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

*gasp* cliffie!!!!

Good chapter. I am so in love with this fic it's not even funny!



Author's Response:

Awww...thanks!  And thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 7

omigosh i need an update this was amazing, i can't wait to see more on the development of edward and bella, really well written i love it!



Author's Response:

Patience.  That's the only thing I can say without giving away my plot. :)  Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

oh, poor Bella! It's so sad what she's been through.  And Alice sure is sneaky, haha. Gotta love her. I'm liking the Bella Edward interactiions and that you're taking it slow. I really love this story. It's beautifully written and the story is so powerful. Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^



Author's Response:

Slow and steady wins the race, that's Bella's new motto.  Thank you so much for the kind words, and for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: tigerlily3489 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter! Cant wait to see what edward's reaction will be after being without Bella's scent for days... will edward be the one to wake bella from this mysterious nightmare? cant wait to find out!



Author's Response:

...My fingers are itching to type things that they can't type without giving away plot points.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great update! I really enjoyed this chapter. The whole jacket thing with Edward was my favorite part. I love your Emmett! And that last line... eek! Really hoping Edward is there.



Author's Response:

I love my Emmett too!  And Jasper, and Carlisle, and Edward....you get the idea.  I wasn't even planning the jacket thing, it just appeared on my screen.  As for what happens...well, you'll have to wait till Monday.  :)  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: crazygreenfrog (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 7

Very foreboding at the end. :) This story is so good. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words, and for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: vslibra (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, this story is wonderful.  I am very excited to see where you go with this, although it is a little slow moving (which seems to be intended) the story is captivating and very believable.  It is difficult to set up an alternate universe in which the characters remain mostly in canon and believable but you have achieved both.  Congradulations, and I can't wait to read more of this story!



Author's Response:

I know the beginning is moving a bit slow, but there's so much that needs to happen before Bella can start to behave more normally, so please be patient with me.  Thanks so much for not only your kind words but for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh, I wonder if this turn is what finally starts to pull Edward and Bella together... Can't wait for the next chapter, this story if so good.



Author's Response:

Mmmm.  Can't really say anything, seeing as I'm not sure. *sigh*  Thanks!

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

Good chapter.  I love how Edward is so Team Bella.  I enjoy seeing Bella progress and become more comfortable.  Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Edward's going to be surprised when he realizes why he's so team Bella. *grin*  Thanks!

Reviewer: Mollie (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 7

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! This is the greatest story ever!!!  I NEED AN UPDATE! GAH, horrible cliffie. GAH I need more, more MORE! Please update soon!!!  PS: I love the quotes!



Author's Response:

Monday I'll update.  Of course I'm going to have some terrible cliffhangers, I'm evil like that. :)  Glad to know people are enjoying the quotes.

Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

I don't know if I've mentioned in the last few chapters how touching I find this story. The recovery the Cullens are helping Bella make is amazing to read.

Gah. That cliffhanger!



Author's Response:

Awww...thank you so much!  I could tease and say something about the next chapter...but I won't.  :)  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 7

It's good. Poor Bella, how sad to have to relive that stuff every night. Wonder if Edward will be able to pull her from the nightmare?



Author's Response:

My lips are sealed regarding what will happen next. :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 7

I am so hooked on this. And then you threw in the tease of Alice's vision of B&E married! LOVE IT! Please post more soon. It feels like forever since last time! It's that good!



Author's Response:

Alice has seen a lot that she's keeping from Edward and the rest of the family.  Thanks so much for reviewing, and I promise to update by Monday!

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh, horrible cliffer. That darned last haunting sentence. Yes, I'm definitely hooked. Would it help if I begged for an update? I'm not above holding my breath, you know. Please don't make me turn blue. Gahh!! I really love this story. You made it hopeful and bright and wonderfully uniquely twisted. Thank you.

~Mia



Author's Response:

Monday, I promise. :)  Thank you for your wonderful words and for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 7

Just a little review before I even read the chapter- I love these quotes. You have a knack for finding the most beautiful and meaninngful things for the preludes for your chapters. Wherever do you find them? So touching.

 

~Mia

Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 7

Loved that last line. You are evil. Good chapter. Good character progression. :)



Author's Response:

I'm not evil, I'm misunderstood. :)  It isn't a good story if you don't have the occasional cliffhanger.  Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 7

Thanks for another great chapter. I love how Alice is keeping Edward out of her brain so he won't see the wedding vision. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter whenever you have a chance to write/post! :)

Author's Response:

Alice is keeping a lot of things hidden.  That's a tease, I know, but it's the truth. :)  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 7

This story is sooo good! I love seeing the way everyone treats Bella as a sister. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

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