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Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 13 (V)
Great chapter! Please update soon :-)
Reviewer: Twilightlover4ever (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 13 (V)
yea!tahnx for updating its been awahile...and this is a really goood story
Author's Response: I'll hopefully be back to my regular updating schedule after this next chapter. Thanks!
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 13 (V)
love your story.
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 13 (V)
Oh I love your story, but only one edward interation? C'mon show him some love. (pout) Anyway... :) I love seeing Bella show some guts and stand up a bit for herself.
Author's Response: Edward's lurking in the background. He's being sneaky and difficult to catch. Alice is determined to poke and prode Bella along until she's comfortable with everyone. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 (V)
I am so loving this story!!! Great writing!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 13 (V)
I appreciate how you're going slow and building up Bella's strength and perseverance. You're not neglecting the importance of her development. And this will only help to fuel the inevitable fire that will burn between B&E. I'm loving every word!
Author's Response: A person has to figure out who they are before they can even begin to contemplate being part of an 'us'. Bella will get there eventually. :) Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
I absolutely love, love, love this fic. Its one of the few AU vampire fics I actually read. I just came to this section just to see if you updated. Everything is so fantastic. I love how Bella and Edward interact. They already care about each other so much but its not love at first sight, but its sweet and perfect for them. I love her interactions with the family too, that seems to be the real heart of the fic, how they just go out of their way to make sure she's safe, comfortable and content at all times. Its just so heartwarming! I can't wait for more! Looking forward to the next update please come back soon! :)
Author's Response: I know everyone is anxious for the ExB to happen, but first Bella has to feel comfortable with herself. The family has been very careful with Bella, and while I'm not saying that everything is suddenly going to change, they can't wait for the day when they dont' have to be so careful around her anymore. Glad you're enjoying, and hopefully I'll be updating this coming week.
Reviewer: AlmostLoverXO (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oh my gosh! I love this story! More please!!!! lol. Are you still writing it? I hope so cuz it's amazing!!!!
Author's Response: Yup, still writing, just had to take a few personal days off. I'm hoping to have the next chapter up by Tuesday. Thanks!
Reviewer: AlmostLoverXO (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oh my gosh! I love this story! More please!!!! lol. Are you still writing it? I hope so cuz it's amazing!!!!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 12
Yay! Good job Bella!!! Great chapter! Sorry it took me so long to get caught up in my reading! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It'll hopefully be out Tuesday. Glad you're enjoying and thanks for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 8
i 've been reading this and thinkin 2 myself , waaht could the possibly want from her , what could she possilby offer. I NEVER tought they would rape her. that is clod thing to do. well imma go head and finish the rest great so far
Author's Response: It's not so much that they wanted anything from her, they just wanted to be...jerks. I'd insert another word, but that will work for now. I promise she gets better! Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Reviewer: Ivanesense (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 12
I love this story! please write some more!
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 12
Great story!! (:
Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 12
I am so proud of Bella! I'm so glad that she made it through the entire day and ran straight to Esme. I can't wait to see Mike's reaction to Bella's shirt! lol!
Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 12
This is such a fantastic story. I just started it today, I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 6
Awww!! I just love Emmett.
Reviewer: Blackcatwitchgirl (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 12
Yay for Bella! I am so happy she made it through the day. This is a great story. I really want to see Emmett's plan, so update soon please.
-Me
Reviewer: Shiba (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
great chapter. Poor bella, she kept all her anxiety in the whole day....even after the circumstance she's stubborn...please update soon!
Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 12
awww she just wanted to be safe and at home with Esme.. my gosh that made me cry it was so sweet!!
I loved it.... I love that bella truely sees her as her safe zone and as a mother.. Go esme!!
I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: *offers tissues* As long as those are good tears we're good. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
I absolutely love your story! I read all of the chapters today in one sitting. Please post soon...
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 12
That's so great that the family is all helping her on her first day of school. It shows that they're family and that they care. Good job!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 12
Again, just really good work with the pacing and POV and character development. :) Books
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 12
Squeal home is where the heart is!!!! This was an awesome chapter! I am so looking forward to the next! Please post again soon!
Reviewer: crazygreenfrog (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 12
Fantastic chapter! Poor Bella, that had to be so incredibly hard for her, but she did so well. I can't wait to see how Bella progresses. Great work!
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 12
I adored the "I'm made of pure sugar," line by Jasper. I LOLed so hard, and then imagined a sugar Jasper... And Alice's comments about having to do something nasty to Jessica, and something nice for Angela... AWW. Mike's degenerative thought train is hilarious.
For some reason, I adore when someone 'flits' around. And Esme flitting... heh. Lovely.
Wonderful chapter!
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