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Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 11
Ok, so kind of skimmed this chapter to- Sorry! Don't hate me. It's all really well written but I can't wait to get to school, lol.
Reviewer: Discordia28 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
I loved it, what an excellent chapter, thank you!
I especially like how real Bella's reaction felt, and that she is strong enough to express her feelings and that it is encouraged by the family.
As always with this wonderful story I am left anticipating and longing for more, I love reading your work.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 10
So, have to admit I kind of flashed through the chapter since it was more transitory then most- I'm really looking forward to how Bella reacts in the school environment. Yay!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 9
*smiles with content* that cute little scene with Edward and Bella had me on the edge of my seat. That was just... so sweet, lol.
I'm glad they are getting somewhere with Bella. I'm proud of Jasper to- if Edward could resist her then certainly Jasper can. Great job!
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 20
Ah! What did Emmett buy? I want to know! Great chapter. I was wondering how Bella would handle the news of her impending change and you did it wonderfully. She was angry and it was sad to see what her hurtful words did to the Cullens, but it was also great because she was able to be angry without tyring to hide it. She lashed out not thinking about the possibility of reprecussions. Sorry I can't say more. I'm so tired right now I can barely keep my eyes open. Just know that I loved it. Always do. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yup, it was good Bella finally wasn't afraid of venting, but I think we might see some back sliding. Hmmm....
Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 8
Wow- this chapter was... intense. The sad thing is that this is reality for many girls (minus the vampires) and I really think the way you have approached this is effective.
You handled everything really well. Great job.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 7
I can't even begin to tell you how giddy Alice's vision made me- I literally squealed out loud- which isn't good because all my roommates are sleeping and you can hear everything in this house.
And the jacket was *sigh* for lack of a better term, awesome.
I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next in nightmare land!
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 19
Well, damn. I was just about to comment on how short this chapter was when I looked over to the scroll bar and realized that it wasn't short at all. I'm super excited that I don't have to wait for the next chapter. I seriously need to know what Bella's reaction will be and how Edward is doing. Poor Edward! Man, to know that it would have been you to turn her before she was ready, to know that you couldn't control your self around the fragile girl that you love (even if he is denying his feelings) is just horrible. I can only imagine what he must be going through. Okay, enough stalling ^_^ On to the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
YAY! Edward thinks Bella is beautiful *sighs*
I adored this chapter, even though- like every Edward- whipped woman alive- I wish she was with Edward outside instead of Emmett. But I can respect the fact that you are building other relationships with the family cause not everything is about Edward and Bella (well, at least in this story).
I loved how Edward kept mentally chastising Emmett and vetoing his thoughts. That was awesome.
Also, I thought the little conversation between Carlisle and Edward was hilarious.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 5
Again, thank you for Rose's bitchiness. I can't stand nice Rose- it drives me up a wall. Hmmm... I wonder what Alice was seeing in her visions of Edward toward the end there...
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 4
YAY that was awesome! I loved Edward's intro- I think you captured his reaction perfectly- first with hesitation then acceptance.
I also liked when Carlisle came home with all the food for Bella, that was so adorable.
And of course, then end- I'll loved Edward's, "I can hear you but I can't hear you." Priceless.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, I am so glad that Rose is still a bitch. I started reading another story that was kind of similar to this, except Bella was a little girl and I hated that Rosalie actually wanted Bella. I stopped reading the fic about half-way through.
Again, I'm just so psyched for Edward! The suspense is freaking killing me!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
Alice is a funny bugger. I like the connection that Bella is already feeling with Esme and Carlisle. Of course, I'm psyched about Bella meeting Edward- great job!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really liked this chapter! I can't wait to see how Edward is going to react and find out exactly what is going on- great set up for the story. =)
Reviewer: Blackcatwitchgirl (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 20
Poor poor Bella, I can't wait to see what Emmet will buy though. Thanks for sharing!
-Me
Author's Response: Emmett is taking his usual unorthodox approach to life. :) Hopefully it helps Bella. Thanks!
Reviewer: TS Tammy (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 20
Awesome read! i found this last night and have been reading ever since. Im completely addicted.
Author's Response: Thanks! And glad to see the first few chapters didn't scare you away. That's always my fear. Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 20
Wonderful story. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 20
Awesome. Again a great chapter. You treat this so well. I await the next.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm always afraid that I'll mess up and offend someone who has suffered abuse, so I try to keep this as realistic as possible. Glad you're enjoying and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 20
/grin
I love how you included the bodily functions being so easily heard throughout the house. Though it's never said by anyone (except you), I have always thought how weird it would be... and awkward.
Author's Response: There is no topic that I consider off-topic. I will address it if it adds to the story. :) And it's always bugged me, just how much the Cullen's would hear. Ugh, no thank you. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 20
so glad I found the story over here!!! I like this site way better than Twilight Archives!
The story has progressed greatly! I really like how the turn of events have played out! There have been different things brought up and thrown into the mix....at a very good...suave...casual rate! Nicely written!
Also...I know you will "hopefully" get there....but I can't wait to read about the developing feelings lingering between Edward and Bella....I can't help but see a bit of foreshadowing going on...there are the notices by everyone including teachers, and the fact that Edward almost "killed" Bella. It seems that all the chain of events that led to their relationship in the book have somewhat came to play out in your story. Now it seems like all we are waiting on is the closer personal relationship between the two of them...and then they could get together!
I don't know...enough of my rambling thoughts now...it is your story!
Update ASAP!
Author's Response: Glad I could help you find this wonderful site! And yes, I have thrown in some foreshadowing. I know everyone wants the romance, but this story was never about just ExB, but about the healing process a trauma survivor goes through. I do swear there is ExB coming, I can see several big moments in my head...my fingers just can't type fast enough. :)
Glad you're enjoying and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: starsplash (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 20
I have sympathy pains for Bella I have the worst cramps! Something you might want to add in the story is that if you take birth control you can skip your periods that might be interesting since then Edward and Jasper wouldn't have to worry about their reactions :) I can't wait to find out what caught Emmett's eye! I hope you update soon!! :)
Author's Response: I know that is possible. It's just something Carlisle hadn't really considered yet. He didn't really think about the stress of having a female human in the house. I promise its on his mind now, though. Glad you're enjoying and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: BabyBlues (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 18
Yay! An update!!
U did an amazing job! Hoping to see another chapter up soon...
have to admit that I can't wait for Bella (& Edward) to feel attracted to each other!
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 20
That was awesome, as usual! Terrific chapter. I love how original your plotline is and how true to character the people are if they had been through these circumstances. Very nicely written! :o)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed! And I try, even though this is an AU world, to keep the characters as true to themselves as possible. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Suzabelle (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 20
Your fan fiction is the first that I have read and admired so much that I want to read it again. There are so many beautifully written moments I have to re-live them: when Bella first steps out into the sunlight after 3 years, when she considers Esme to be home, when she calls Carlisle "Dad" in her sleep, when she lets Emmett ruffle her hair without flinching, the list goes on and on. You've captured the essence of each character. You've also represented Bella's trauma and recovery in a realistic way that is heartbreaking and inspiring. I can't wait to see where the story goes next. Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try to keep everyone as true to themselves as possible, regardless of the AU world. We've quite a ways to go and a lot of ground to cover. :)
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 20
Loved this chapter. It is exactly the reaction I thought she would have. I miss the Edward/Bella interaction, but I understand why there was none in this chapter.
Poor Bella. I wonder if this will set her farther back than the Christmas thing did. And I wonder if it will lead her to do things that she might not normally do...you know, "I'm gonna die one way or the other" type of mentality...I know it's outside of her character as it stands right now, but she's an abused child and temperments can change so very quickly.
Really good writing as always. I did a little happy dance and clapped my hands when I saw this updated. It's one of a few stories that I kinda flip out over when I see it updated, so thanks.
Author's Response: I don't even know that Bella knows how she's going to react just yet. I havent' started the next chapter, so I'm usually surprised by what happens when I finally do sit down to write. Glad you're enjoying and thanks for reviewing!
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