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Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh I really liked this! My favorite chapter too! I'v been waiting to see Emmett interact with Bella. Too many authors skip over their relationship and I love that you're spending time on it.

And I thought the conversation betwen Emmett and Edward while Bella was taking her time getting outside was brilliant. You could feel the love in their hearts and Emmett being so impatient was hillarious.

I feel bad for Edward. He wants to be close to her, but he can because he's afraid that he'll hurt her. And he's also sad because he's afraid she'll never be comfortable around him. *sigh*

Great chapter, Great story. The emotions of these characters are so real. Usually, I don't like third person fanfics, but I reall like yours. You do n excellent job with it ^_^



Author's Response: I plan on exploring her relationship with off the Cullens, and hope I do them justice.  Thanks!

Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love Emmett's last line--it made me smile. I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 6

Loved the last line. Excellent chapter as usual.

Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 6

Very sweet Emmett and Bella scene. Can't wait to see how Edward begins to aproach her, I can see the atachment growing already even if he is bearly registering it.

Reviewer: thot-2 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 6

Thank you! I enjoyed reading this chapter and cannot wait for an update.

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh Babe, the best chapter ever. Left me with a huge silly grin after reading it.

 

~Mia



Author's Response: That's what I was hoping for.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 6

cute.  great chapter.  i love emmett.

Reviewer: stargirl (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 6

aww....emmet is so sweet

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 5

Another great chapter, I like that the plot moves on in small steps, this just would not sound right if you rush forward in the story. Bella needs her time and you're allowing her that (not that I'm not impatient to see her relationship with Edward develop, but I see that will still take quite some time).

Hopefully Rosalie feels some remorse once she realizes Bella has gone through the same as she did while human.

Great job, update soon!



Author's Response: ...There are so many things I could say that would just be a tease right now.  So I'll settle for Bella is making progress at her own pace and doesn't care what I have to say about anything.  And thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 5

i love this story. i love that you show all the characters thoughts in the one chapter without resorting to different POVs. its interesting to see what everyone thinks.

keep writing. please update soon.

xoxo 



Author's Response: Thanks!  That was one of the things I was afraid I was messing up, glad to hear it sounds okay. :)

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 5

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for updating!  This update is exactly what I needed!  I read this chapter yesterday.  (I read it on my phone but sadly can't review on my phone, so I'm back revewing now...)  Let me explain why this was what I needed. 

Things aren't great right now.  I'm constantly pushing back the tears and plowing forward, only wanting to escape from it all.  So, yesterday, on my way home I couldn't take it any longer and pulled over to the side of the road (I have a LONG commute to and from work and school) to just have a good cry and get it over with.  I happened to look down on my phone and saw that I had an email, an alert, and it was your story that had been updated.  I opened your story and began reading.  I was so involved in the story and it truly pulled me in and made me forget everything.  Thank you so much for that.  by the time I was done reading this chapter I was strong enough to go on, for just a bit longer.  I really can't thank you enough for that.  It's like you and your beta knew I would be needed this at that moment. 

Now, I do love Alice in this chapter.  She is so wonderful and I laugh every time about her "seeing" herself trying to make Bella's dinner and giving her food poisioning but as an assistant everything turns out alright.  Also, Alice just waltzing into Carlisle and Esme's bedroom is great!  I'm looking forward to more!  Please keep up the wonderful work!



Author's Response: *hugs* Hope everything gets better soon. It's...humbling to hear that my story helped with your day.  As for Alice, she and Emmett are full of hijinks they can't wait to play out.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tigerlily3489 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 5

Rosalie obviously doesn't know that Bella suffered the same fate as she. I can't wait for the remorse and guilt to some crashing down on her once she realizes how poorly she treated Bella, Rosalie'e ego needs to be knocked down a peg! Yet another great chapter!

Author's Response: ...I can't appropriately respond to this, as that would give away later events in the story.  Suffice it to say Rosalie will act better...eventually.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

I'm absolutely addicted to this story. I love that Edward's already protective of her. What did Alice see?! I want to know! haha. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: The first step to recovering from an addiction is to admit there's a problem...but I don't want your addiction to end. :)  Alice isn't telling anyone what she saw.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 5

Excellent chapter once again.  I hope the relationship between Bella and Edward starts soon. 

Author's Response: Bella has a ways to go before she's ready for a romantic relationship, but I"m just as anxious as you for them to get to that point, and I know what's going to happen!  So I'm writing as fast as I can.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 5

Again, very good job with this chapter. I really do admire what you are doing with your characterization of Bella. Can't wait to read what you do next. :)  Books

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Oddly enough, I'm having to fight with just about every other character but Bella and, oddly enough, Jasper.  Thanks for reading and continuing to review!

Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 5

Nicely done! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 5

Another great chapter!  Leave it to Rose to get everyone to stop walking on eggshells.  I hope that Bella can start sharing some of what she went through.  It will be intersting to see how this story develops.

Author's Response: Bella needs a bit more trust before she can open up, but it's coming, I swear.  I don't know what I would do without Rosalie either. :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wonderful story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Your Bella is incredibly well written. I love it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 5

Sheesh, Rosalie, don't feel like you have to sugar-coat anything... ;) Actually, she provides a nice counterpoint to the rest of the family's reaction to the Bella situation.  And, of course, it's perfectly in-character. 

Poor Bella...the glimpse into the abuse she suffered was interesting, but painful. 

I can hardly wait for the next update!



Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't feel Rosalie was too over the top.  I can't wait to post the next chapter, it's my fav so far.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 5

Very interesting, can't wait to see how thing go with Bella's ajustments to the Cullens.

Author's Response: The ride has just begun. :)  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

I feel so sad for Bella. She must be hurting so very much. I hope she starts feeling more trust after she sees how good they are to her. And Edward? I wonder what Alice saw? Probably something involving him and Bella. I'm super excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I have to brag...chapter six rocks.  And man, that was a tease. :)  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

finally edward's in story! this chapter was so good. im glad bella finally came downstairs. emmett <3. cant wait for an update.

Author's Response: After I dragged him kicking and screaming into the story. :)  Awesome Emmett and awesome Bella will continue.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: queenspuppet (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

This story is fantastic so far. You're handling the trauma and their patience incredibly well, especially since it's such a heavy topic. Well done and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: KissinCullens (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Bella. My heart is breaking for her. I cant wait to read more of the interaction between her and the family. I realise it will take some time for her to relax around them. I love this story and plan to keep reading and reviewing =D

Did the Volturi actually find James and Victoria and kill them as Carlisle believes?



Author's Response: Yup, James and Victoria are dead.  Bella is slowly working on some family interactions.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 4

I absolutely love this story! It's fascinating to watch how Bella takes small, small steps toward recovery although she still is scared stiff of almost everything. Good thing that Edward could control himself although she smelled good, she would have been totally petrified by him smelling her. Loved the way Esme takes care of Bella, she is just the person who can gain Bella's confidence considering Esme's background and past experiences.

Keep up the good work and update soon!



Author's Response: Slow and steady wins this race. :)  Esme is demanding mom time at the moment. Thanks for reviewing!

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