Reviewer: Mizuki8D (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2013 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Vampires, Werewolves, and Humans...Oh My

Oh Snap! Shit just got real!

Reviewer: Mizuki8D (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2013 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 Leaving

Awesome!!!

Reviewer: Maranda (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 Leaving

Wow, i did a oneshot similar to this. I could never find a JacobxEdward fic so I wrote my own. I love that I found this. :) thanks

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 16 Happy Ending 2 Honeymoon

its over? how sad! will bella, jake, and edward come back from the island with any souvenirs? its such a fabulous story!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed my story.  I figure that with the honeymoon, the story pretty much returns to the story line in Breaking Dawn.  Bella will be pregnant by Edward (who had sex with her just before Jake did).  The only difference is that Jake doesn't imprint on Renesmee.  I say Seth as taking over that spot.  I don't know why, it just seems like a great fit to me.

 

As for me, now that I've finished this story, I plan to turn my attention to an original vampire novel of my own...a romantic thriller with a vampire protagonist and his mortal girlfriend, along with supernatural evil nasties galore.  I know, it's probably not the most original thing, but it (like this one) it is a story I want to tell.  Wish me luck :)

Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Happy Ending 1 - Wedding

That chapter seemed far too short! I can't wait to read about the honeymoon and see what happens - if this story line follows closely to Breaking Dawn or if it goes in a completely different direction. Please update soon!

Reviewer: sisteria27 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Happy Ending 1 - Wedding

Very sweet ..Im glad Alice apologized to Jake..I really loved the wedding and i cant wait till next time;)X

Reviewer: LadyGrelka (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Operation

lol Bella is right, once Alice relizes that she has someone else to make over she is going to be over the moon lol.  Rose on the other hand is going to HATE this what with all the wolf smell and all hehe.  I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: VMReiche (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Found

Noooo! update sooooon please

 

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 1 Leaving

holy CRAP!!!  I didn't see this coming....I thought he was gonna imprint on Charlie! (which would be efifn' hilarious, IMHO!!) 

Mmmm...does Edward swing both ways? Is Bella up for a wolfy-vampy-girly threesome????  This could get interesting....

Reviewer: handsonu (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Fight

Interesting, but Jake sounds like a bit of a pussy.

Reviewer: stwin315 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 Leaving

ohhh shooott i think i may love this already lol

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 Leaving

SLASH. SLASH. SLASH. Please change your summary to warn readers.

I read chapter 1 and your reviews, and I'm following Disneyvampire out the door. I know you mean well, and obviously you like your story if you're still writing it, but it just doesn't feel right. Mortal enemies to imprinting in ten seconds? It doesn't take their personal histories with each other into account and doesn't honor the function of "imprinting" as "finding your perfect mate." Jake and Edward would never hurt Bella so. I don't have a problem with slashfic, but this idea, with these characters, needs to be fleshed out in a whole different way. I think you could do something with this idea- it just sounds like what you're doing with it is odd. You need to make this story believable in its unbelievability.