THat was AMAZING!! Thanks so much! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens at home!!

I loooooove this story.

well written. hope you update soon. :)

ahaha SPECTACULAR!

i really and truly enjoyed this chapter. I found myself laughing out loud, and giggling almost the entire time i was reading. There is the perfect amount of tension and lust travelling between Edward and Bella. You capture them both so well I am seriously having doubts as whether or not you aren't Stephenie Meyer in disguise.

The idea that you may be extending chapters makes me squee and I really, really want you to, even if the update time is longer. It'd be worth it.
And HAHA you finished their first day! Your novel is a quarter way finished! XD i love it! it goes in to the perfect amount of detail. Keep it up! I want to see at least 20 chapters by the time this is finished haha!! 

I'm glad you didn't do a lemon. PG-13 means you have a wider selection of readers!
and in turn means more reviews.
and we all know reviews are like crack!

Keep up your always amazing, perfect, splendid and spectacular work.

xx

yay! I love this story and I thank you for keeping it PG-13 =)

I love your story!  Its a nice break from all the lemons and it reminds me so much of the way Stephenie would have put it herslf!  Your an awesome writer and i look forward to reading more from  you soon!

Ooh, im kinda disapointed that there was no lemom, but the joy of your update wasnt ruined by that, since you promised a really,really,big one shot (ok not the big part but ill be expecting that :) ) and about the 20.000 i spend twice as over my firsts days of school. LOL.

Oh, I loved this chapter! It made me all giggly! I adore the English teacher, was he inspired by a real person or did your awesome brain conjure him up on your own? I can't wait for the oneshot! That was a good compromise for the story. I was laughing through the whole trust exercise- poor Edward and Bella. I hope you update soon!

You have got me completely hooked! Great job!

As for the whole...do I change the rating thing....I think that your best bet on this kind of story, I mean, to keep the feel of the story, take a page from Ms. Meyer's book and imply but fade out...if you want to do that kind of thing.  Then, if you really need to get the details out...make a new story along the same plot line...but shorter maybe?  But so far, I really like the way this has been written and I think that if you change the writing style, the appeal will be less so? I hope that makes sense...

what happens next???? haha no joke this is really good

 

 

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I really enjoyed this, I thought it was great, please please write more. I to am undecided on whether it needs lemon but I think it is great just as it is at the moment. please write more love from Victoria xxx

I think you are doing an awesome job with the story as well as the pace of it.  As far as adding a lemon, I fine with that as long as it doesn't become a porno.

Cute story!  I'm enjoying it so far.  I vote for a chapter from Jake and Nessie's perspective- or at least include them more in the story.  And I'm fine with the PG-13 rating... leave things hinted at, but unspoken as you have been doing.  Let us readers use our imaginations!  ;-)