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Reviewer: laaura (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Preparations

ummm.. are you gonna finish this story or what?????

Reviewer: ILEAMC (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Preparations

Awsome chapter

Reviewer: hihi (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Detention

I HAVE A QUESTION. ARE YOU GOING 2 TRY 2 FINISH THIS STORY CAUSE I WANT 2 KNOW WHATS GOING 2 HAPPEN NEXT???? AND I'M NOT TRYING TO SOUND RUDE SO DON'T GET MAD @ MY QUESTION PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: eLii (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Detention

i totally loved it!!! please update soon... please!!!

Reviewer: jacobishot (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Detention

hey can u pleez pleez update? i was really enjoying the story but it just stopped.

Reviewer: stupid shiny volvo owner lover (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Detention

please update soon!!!! i'm loving this story and need more!!!!

Reviewer: Emma Goldman (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Detention

i love this story! please write more!!!!

Reviewer: missycullen2010 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Detention

Hey, This is really good.... I cant wait till you write the next chapter. I am so interested in you story that it leaves it as that.... I really cant wait. You are a good writer.

Reviewer: Hisa (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Detention

Nice!! It is a really nice story!!

I can't wait for your update. Good luck to your story and good luck on me looking for the favourites and alerts buttons grrr....

I'll be putting this one up on my favourites if I got my luck..

cheers!

^_^

Reviewer: irishdaydreamer (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Detention

I love this story! Please update soon!

Reviewer: bear783 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Detention

i love this story WAY funny and i can like see this happening in my head keep writing i've been checking like every day waiting for you to add another chapter please do = ]

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Preparations

Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Shazarabbit (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Detention

So gooooooooooood!

Update soon, I wonder what Alice will say when they get home. Then again the bet didn't really include out of school did it?

Cannot wait for an update!

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Detention

Lol, Love the trust exercises! That was great and very funny to see just how wrong the students were when reading their body language towards each other. he he

Great chapter! I love that you've made them longer, I never want them to end but of course they have to. lol. I can't believe it's taken 6 chapters for them to have finished one school day! lol Can't wait for the next chapter! I look forward to seeing how the story progresses. I admit they have more self control then I thought they would but I'm still not sure they'll last so long. he he

This is brilliantly written, in both pov and a real joy to read! Thanks. :)

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Observe

I think with the amount of tension you've built up over the course of the 6/7 chapters it would seem like a little bit of a let down if you just skimmed past that bit but of course you should only write what you feel most comfortable with. I'm sure most would be happy with whatever you decide to include or not include.

Anyway, great chapter! Wasn't expecting it to be Emmet behind the scene in the cafeteria, I really did think it was just too much for Edward and Bella to handle, but of course it makes sense now, knowing that jasper upped the anty a bit. lol Swimming in pe chould be interesting too! No doubt it'll bring memories back to Edward and Bella of their wedding night but also the students will have a field day seeing them in bathing suits. lol

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Urge

As I say, I love reading in Edward's pov but you handled Bella brilliantly too! It felt natural. I'd almost rather it stayed to just those two but I have a feeling you'll be able to do any other pov just as well as Edward and Bella!

Great chapter! I especially LOVED the beginning, where Alice tackled Edward and Emmet tackled Alice. That was hilarious! Utterly brilliant! lol. I love the way Edward's self control just went completely out of the window at the sight of Bella, I can only imagine what it's going to be like when they get home. lol

Great chapter! I wonder who followed Bella to the class room, I have a feeling it was Jasper, but I guess I'll have to read on to find out for certain. ;)

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Distraction

>.< Wow the want was almost tangible! The description of their longing and jealousy was brilliantly written. Fantastic! Poor Edward. It must be twice as hard for Edward then Bella to keep control of himself when he has to watch the fantasies of other men, bless him!

Anyway, great chapter! I love how it's going. Can't wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Gossip

I'm really enjoying this! I love the humour and competitiveness between E/B and R/B. I'm almost surprised at how lustful Edward and Bella are but thinking back on the book, I shouldn't really be surprised. lol.

I can't wait to see how it conintues. I just know there's going to be lots and lots of jealousy going on. I'd rather it stayed in Edward's pov coz I love the way he can read other peoples minds as well, but maybe it would be good to have it in Bella's pov a couple of times too to show her jealousy as well? Hmmm. Anyway, whatever you think is best. Great chapter! :)

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 04:21 PM · On: It's On...

lol Brilliant! I love the bet! That is deffinately going to be entertaining to read. he he. I imagine there's going to be a lot of jealousy and a week of celebacy for Bella and Edward when they loose! LOL.

Anyway, great chapter! I really can't wait to see how this turns out! :)

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Preparations

Brilliant! Great first chapter! You seem to have Edward very nicely in character. I can't wait to see how this continues! :)

Reviewer: laaura (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Detention

this is just awesome! i love it! :)

you have to write the next chapter soon, im dying here!! :)

keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Preparations

Great first chapter! Looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Elessae (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Urge

This is so fun. I cannot stress it enough. And well written too! You handled lusty Edward and Bella with so much grace, and avoided making it look cheap or merely hormone driven, and I can actually feel the need and the want and the love between them in all their physical exchanges and thoughts. That is unbelivably awesome, and we don't find many of these in the Twilight fandom!

Please, please, please update, and soon!

Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Detention

OH wow, thaat was relly something, a big something. I never knew anybody could be so sexually active DAMN they are some freak a leaks haha, i still hope they win. i need updates GIVE ME UPDATES

Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Observe

it going great but i think it would be better to speed up the pace just a little bucasue5 chapters in one school day is kinda long but the detailing is really good

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