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Reviewer: sarahaimee (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 12:55 PM · On: In The End : VictoriaPOV

Oooh, I loved Victoria's POV. 

I honestly thought that she was a little bit 2 dimensional in Parachutes, but it was nice to see that you actually gave her a back story :) 

Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 10:15 PM · On: In My Daughter's Eyes

I loved your story Parachute and these out take were awesome also.  Great writing!

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2011 12:17 AM · On: In My Daughter's Eyes

Some well lomg for scenes that we all wanted to have.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2011 05:55 PM · On: In My Daughter's Eyes

*tears sliding down my cheeks*

This was too adorable for words.

It made my heart squeeze and want to call my Dad. Seriously. Absolutely incredible. I think I'm going to read it a few more times <3

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2011 12:22 PM · On: In My Daughter's Eyes

I'm not nearly old enough to be a grandmother (and my son had better remember that), but reading this outtake made me look forward to the day I am.  So sweet!

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2011 11:33 AM · On: In My Daughter's Eyes

Tears Tears Tears! God I love charlie! That was wonderful! I guess they wanted to have more babies right away. I hope they get to visit the Fam. in Chicago often.

Reviewer: Kuuipo (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2011 09:43 AM · On: In My Daughter's Eyes

:) Thank you it's lovely.


Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 12:16 PM · On: In The End : VictoriaPOV

I love the out takes!!!!

Reviewer: Tinny xxx (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2011 04:06 PM · On: In The End : VictoriaPOV

that was amazing wow .. i loved it.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 01:17 AM · On: In The End : VictoriaPOV

I want to feel bad for Victoria but I just can't.

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 01:14 AM · On: In The End : VictoriaPOV

I can't help feeling sorry for Victoria.  I know she was wrong, but she was wronged too.

Reviewer: cullensmistress (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:39 PM · On: In The End : VictoriaPOV

see, i haven`t had time to read parachute yet, and now i go and read this cause i`m just that freaking curious, and now i wanna read parachute!!!

arghh... the dilema!

darn you Shel!!!

I love you writing!

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 05:40 PM · On: In The End : VictoriaPOV

Wow that was an awesome outake from a dead woman she really had nofeelings for her son so sad.

Reviewer: onlyreading (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 12:35 PM · On: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV

Great outtake!


I was actually referring to Jack's disappearance and reappearance though. Are you planning on writing Edward's POV for that? Like you did for Emmett? I would love to read that!

Author's Response:

Ohhh, I get what you're saying! Yes, I am! I still have 2 EPOVs that I want to write for sure: Jack's disappearance and the Fathers Day/birthday scene. As well as teh Nurse Bella fantasy and an Esme POV.



Reviewer: rebirthfry25 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 05:15 AM · On: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV nice..totally diggin it all!!!

Thanks!! Would love some Edward and Bella private moments and some lovey dovy POV...maybe even some father son stuff.....


Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 06:47 AM · On: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV

Nice to see this event from EPOV.

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 02:14 AM · On: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV

Great POV chapter!  I know Edward must've been torn between his relief that Bella was okay and his sadness over Victoria.  You did a great job with that.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 05:54 AM · On: Leave Out All The Rest : JackPOV

Poor Jack :(

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 03:12 AM · On: Broken : EmPOV

You did a great job with Emmett!  I <3 him hard, and I think you did him justice.

Reviewer: onlyreading (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 11:54 PM · On: Best Friend

I love your story! It is one of my favourites.

Are you planning on doing an outtake of Edward's POV from the disappearance and the return?  I really hope so!


Author's Response:

Omg! Yes, totally! It actually just posted on FFnet today! It's in the queue here, so hopefully it'll be up soon! 

Reviewer: BLACKROSE (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Save Me San Francisco

this is a funny little outtake.... i actually live in santa rosa, ca and i go to the city all the time.... thanks for adding a little tidbit about this small ass town... lol i love this story!!!

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Broken : EmPOV

Goooo Em! Be nice though.

Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Broken : EmPOV

Wow, just wow. That was frigging brilliant. You wrote him perfectly and did it so well that I felt for him so much that I had tears rolling down my cheeks!! Brilliant addition to the story!!

Reviewer: claire76982 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Broken : EmPOV

Thank you for writing this outtake. I enjoyed reading Emmett's POV.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Broken : EmPOV

I loved Emmett's POV :)

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