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Reviewer: GuiltyPleasure83 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2012 07:16 AM · On: Epilogue - Six months later
FoxxyJ, you are my favorite author. If you have other writing I would love to read! This was another beautiful story that, though using Twilight names and some cannon pairings/character traits, was not really "Twilight." This is a GOOD thing, as it made the story beautiful on its own merits. I don't know what else to say except thank you for sharing your story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun reseaching life in the circus. I learned a lot. Thanks for stopping by. :)
Reviewer: byrd3-13 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 06:59 PM · On: Epilogue - Six months later
reading this had made me want to watch 'water for elephants'
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 05:20 PM · On: Epilogue - Six months later
I loved the movie WFE and I loved this story. I continued to read it because it was so good and as much as everyone likes the chase with a couple, everyone also likes the intimates moments as well. job well done will be looking for more of your stories
Author's Response: Oh thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. WFE was one of my fav books and then when Rob was cast in it...*THUD*...dream come true! :)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 11:52 PM · On: Epilogue - Six months later
perfect! wonerful! now i am goin to read the original story that i was sent to read from ur profile. thx for sharing this wonderful story with us!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing so much. I still love hearing reader's reactions to chapters. So thank you for making me smile.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 11:23 PM · On: Coming Together
loved it! loved it all! i hope slut whore maggot infested twatty tanya is found in a dumpster!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 10:40 PM · On: The Tigers' Lair
whew! i need a drink after reading tht chapter. i loved chrlie's role all throughout this chapter. gladx winny i ok...lucy deserves a feast for what she did.....loved them finally comming togetherf as one and being n love...awwww............... but my most favorite part was renee beating the shit out of james with the whip! tha wa pure gold!!! EPIC!!!!! PRICELESS!!! golden baby....golden!
Author's Response: Renee was so annoying thru most of the story so i figured she had to have a use eventually. I loved that she went crazy on him too!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 08:43 PM · On: Something's Got To Give
once a white trash slutty whore....always a stupid bitch white trash slutty whore!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 08:06 PM · On: Closer
this is making ME sexually frustrated.......agh!!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 12:26 AM · On: Practice Makes Perfect
oh....oh...oh...pick me pick me PICK ME!!!!!! i want to kill Tan-cunt with a ground stake....one that holds down elephants!! hehehehe
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 11:34 PM · On: Flying High
loved it! i giggled when bella was caught by emmett....sooooo happy for her!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 11:15 PM · On: Under The Spotlight
jealous of a camel....lol cmu! i totally sniggered lying n bed while reading that....it's 1:14r am........i should b asleep....i just can't put this story down! loved bella's confidence with james.....i hope she doesn't ge stuck with him. and can we please chok tanya? gosh i hate that bi$#h!!!!!!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 10:02 PM · On: Costume Capers
i love it i love i LOVE IT!!!!!! i havn't been able to put it down. sorry i haven't reviewed more....i hit 'next' before i know what i'm doing. this is a very creative story....not predictable, and just different. like i said......I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for reviewing. i still love hearing what people think of this. I'm really glad you are enjoying it. THank you.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 09:55 AM · On: Epilogue - Six months later
Cute story; not one of my favorites but definately worth the read. Had trouble picturing Edward in spandex being hot but found his assumptions regarding Winston HILARIOUS :)
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 12:52 AM · On: Epilogue - Six months later
So Good!
Reviewer: mjwc77 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 08:33 PM · On: Epilogue - Six months later
that was awesome! it was the first fanfic that actually had me laughing out loud! great job...thanks for a fantastic story :)
Reviewer: hughug (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 08:30 PM · On: Dinner For Two
holy hell i need a smoke after that chapter
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 03:38 AM · On: Epilogue - Six months later
Hi Foxxxy, loved your story (I started reading it after the first few chapters of your other fic), it was funny, sassy and very sexy - can't wait to read more of your work, Nicole :0)
Reviewer: Tabitha Finch (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2011 06:26 PM · On: Take A Bow
Okay, let's go back to the first cliffie. I was sure that Edward was going to say that of course Tanya's baby wasn't his because he was a "no-glove-no-love" kind of guy. Earlier in the story, somebody -- one of the horse girls or Tanya herself -- was talking about Edward and they said "he'd be gone before the condom hit the wastebasket". Now we're finding condom use is spotty? Ugh! Tell me he "protects his angel" and gets tested before he and Bella consummate their relationship! Pretty please?
Author's Response: Welcome to the circus! Wow, thanks for reading and leaving me a review or two. That's great. Let's just say that in the heat of the moment he may have forgotten a couple of times! silly boy. But don't forget his dad - Dr C - regular testing for sure with a son like that! Hope you enjoy the rest.
Reviewer: Tabitha Finch (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2011 03:01 PM · On: An Unexpected Friend
Wow. That was talking a lot in one day for Bella? She must have been a mute the rest of her life, poor kid!
Your story has really got me. Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Epilogue - Six months later
I truly laughed when you referred to Edwards "deviances" and thought to myself "Yeah, more like deviant dalliances". OMG and once I looked on You Tube at one of your suggested videos. What I found there was a Be.Still.My.Heart. moments as I envisioned Edward in the costume of a trapeze artist. Before I knew it I was folding a paper fan to cool off. What a sight to behold within the mind's eye.
Loved the hea all the way around. A little tee hee may have escaped when I read the fate of the dogs with Renee at the helm. Seth's move up filled my heart with a bit of pride. There is a part of me that hopes he outgrew the silly nicknames. Loved the addition of Emily and Sam. And Jake. I am so happy for him and his girls. What can I say, even Winny gets an hea and his antics were the most fun to read (after E/B of course).
Loved that Edward and Bella have grown to love one another more with each passing day. She truly was the girl to settle him down.
I may have never attended the circus, however, having read Step Right Up I feel I have been part of it. How can you top that, right?!!
Sandra
Author's Response: Sandra, Thank you so much for getting my review count over 300! You did it and i really appreciate that. I'm glad you enjoyed the new show and loved Winny joining the gang.
I told you E would find out eventually what Winny was! Yes, Renee had her own journey on this as well. She might not be the mum B wants but she's fierce when it comes to standing by her girl.
Thanks again for all your lovely reviews. It really was fun watching you discover their journey. xxxj
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 12:54 PM · On: Coming Together
Certainly I am not the only one to find the E/J interaction quite humerous. But once again Winny stole the show when he met Edward. At first I thought Wnny might be jealous of Edward but his defending Bella made me laugh all that much harder.
Tanya. Will that girl ever quit? At least she is gone this time but that does not stop my visions of her plotting revenge in the future.
Edward and Bella certainly have wasted no time gettin' busy. They have so much time to make up for.
Oh yeah ... And may Aro have smooth sailin', for a while anyway.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 04:40 PM · On: The Tigers' Lair
Boy Howdy I knew I like Lucy. What is that saying? What goes around comes around? Well James did get his comuppance and then some and so did Tanya to boot. And if Lucy's wrath was not bad enough, James had to face Renee. Personally I would have rather faced Lucy.
Jake came through like a knight in shining armour for Bella, for Lucy and for Winny. Hmmm. I'm thinkin' he might make a nice replacement for James. Loved Seth in this chapter too, after all he did solve the case of the baby daddy.
And Winny. I thought for sure Carlisle would have to use his human skills to same him. It doesn't matter who saved him though it only matters that he was.
Aro surprised me when he announced the 2 day cancellation. I really did not expect that and it goes to show that deep down he is a good guy afterall.
Bella and Edward finally got that special time alone and with blessing too. This was a great way to tie things up. I guess it will be fluff from here on out. Angst followed by fluff is a good way to lead to the hea.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 06:22 AM · On: Take A Bow
Bella's performance was classic and just like the audience I loved it.
Now about all this drama. Baby mama drama just barely covers it, lol. Tanya is sure playing it to the hilt. Does she not realize that sooner or later she is going to have to come clean. And Renee? WTH? She really needs to go back to mama 101 class. I can't believe I liked her in the beginning. What was I thinking?!! Loved Charlie though, and Edward too.
Well time to check on Winny. Do you suppose Carlisle can help him?
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 08:02 PM · On: Something's Got To Give
No I did not expect this at all. You are right though in that we knew something was coming up.
Seth, as always was very funny in this chapter. And will Edward ever get to meet Winny? Won't he be surprised.
Author's Response: Thank you for continuing to review. I love reading them. Yes, Winny and Magic will meet...eventually. I love Seth so much, even in the books he was one of my favs. Thanks again.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 10:43 PM · On: Closer
I'm thinking here Foxxy that you need to get these two together pretty soon or it could be pretty hazzardous to their health not to mention everyone that depends on Edward in his line of work. And Renee is much more controlling than she needs to be. Remember when I liked her? I did laugh when Bella called her dad for help.
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