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Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 07:06 PM · On: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad
I've gotten behind and am catching up... thanks for writing.
Reviewer: patteintx (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 05:53 PM · On: Chapter Thirty Two- Redemption
OMG....I love this story!! I hope there's lots more! I hate to think its over!
I hope I can figure out how to get on a list for any updates to this story! I would
really be pissed if I missed any. Thanks so much for sharing your talent!
You are a brilliant writer, I certainly hope you keep writing!
I didn't critique each chapter. Because I couldn't wait to get
to the next chapter!! :-). But my whole being was sucked into this
fantasy from the very beginning! Thanks again for sharing!
Patte Braker. patteziphone@aol.com
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2011 05:09 PM · On: Chapter Thirty Two- Redemption
Poor, poor Edward, how are they going to cope being away from one another for 6 days. When I was reading the start of the lemon I was thinking to myself that it was strange for Bella to be relinquishing that much control - however was happy to find out that it was a fantasy. I know Bella is loosening up, but I don't think she would loosen up quite that much....lol. Nicole :0)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2011 10:38 AM · On: Chapter Thirty Two- Redemption
lmao taht was priceless...I was like hes gonna pop a stitch and then yo go and make it a fantasy I was laughing so hard my kid though I lost it hahhahahahahahah! Look forward to more I got that foreboding feeling on that last line..
Reviewer: twifam1 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Chapter Thirty Two- Redemption
Poor Edward always looking at the glass as half empty! Why does he feel his time with her is limited? It's apparent that she loves him too! These two are making me crazy....As always looking forward to the next chapter...and I will also be looking forward to your new story!
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 02:47 PM · On: Chapter Thirty Two- Redemption
Now he's gonna have to tell his friends that he broke his dick.
Reviewer: starbubbles (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir
Just so you know, I think I'm never having girl on top sex again and its all your fault. J/K. But I have to admit that I never heard of a penile fracture before and I'm so glad my husband didn't read this because I am getting a little nauseous thinking about it and I don't even have a love stick.
I really like how you wrote Carlisle by the way.
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 12:44 PM · On: Chapter Thirty One- Dante's Infereno
Too funny, this story always has a way of making me laugh at something - and poor Edward can't cop a break from anyone - until the next chapter, Nicole :0)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 11:15 PM · On: Chapter Thirty One- Dante's Infereno
Oh wow oh wow oh wow....I kind of expected Bella to snap on Nana hehehhe protect Esme and win over teh love of teh whole fam I even expected Nan to payt her on teh back and say goes to figure it would take an outsider to grow a pair to me lol.... Oh well I loved it anyway so post again soon Bella moving....Poor Edward he needs to breath lol
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 10:10 PM · On: Chapter Thirty One- Dante's Infereno
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Reviewer: twifam1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 07:40 AM · On: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad
Poor Edward and Bella ! I can't wait for the stitches to be out!! And Rose as a Dom.....hot Damn.. Emmett would be a good sub too!!He kind of already submitts to Rose. He just doesn't get flogged.lol
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 08:51 PM · On: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad
mmmm, red velvet is yummy! My daughter just asked for red velvet cake for her Sweet 16, it was my first time eating it & it was wonderful. This chapter was difficult, funny & cute! I loved it! so will next chapter be Christmas dinner? or are we going past that & will have some flashbacks? either way, I am glad Edward didn't bust his stitches ;) ~Tracey xoxox
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad
squeee!!!! I love me some BELLA!! I loved teh way she handles Em Rose and Jas...although Japser is being an Assper... Love love post again soon we want more Alice I wonder if shes a dom too or even a sub which would make it why she loves to please and take care of things so much! Post again soon!
Author's Response: Hey, Doll!!! I'll post real soon, hoping to finish the XMAS in this chapter and move on LOL
Much love,
~K
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 07:57 PM · On: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad
Was that the last of Xmas? Or do we get to see Edward drunk at dinner?
Author's Response: Nope, we got one more portion and it will be filled with inhibited Edward ;)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 02:50 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Nine- When It Rains, It Pours
Squeee Rose is there and she has a demand that I have a feeling will be entertaining but at least now hes comfy with what he oes that hes not worried about other opinions...or so hes convincing himself hahahah But how will Bella feel outed??? HMMMM Can't wait for more update update update soon!!!
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 05:33 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Nine- When It Rains, It Pours
Great Chapter - Edward is just so funny with his inner ramblings. Looking forward to what Rosalie is going to pick up on over lunch - given she already has her suspicions. BTW where's Angela is she going to make an appearance???? :0)
Author's Response: Hey, Hun!!! Thanks for the review and I swear, sometimes I gotta edit back Edward. He tends to go off on these tangines ;)) As for Angela, she makes an apprearance pretty soon!! Have a great weekend!!
*mwah*
~K
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 02:19 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Nine- When It Rains, It Pours
whoa, what a family! so glad those aren't my in-laws LOL. I love that the twins were flirting with Bella, they are going to be a force to be reckoned with when they get older LOL. glad Edward is finally admitting he is ok with being a sub, but then again I don't think telling all his family at dinner is a good idea :) can't wait for next chapter! ~Tracey xoxox
Author's Response: LOL!! I know, right!! Those little guys are going to be a bunch of little heart-breakers. The next chap should be interesting and things finally come to a head...Will he or won't he spill the beans at dinner? We shall see ;)
Thanks for reading!!
~K
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 12:02 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Nine- When It Rains, It Pours
First you got me waiting for intros to Jasper and Rosalie. When all along I should have been worried about Nana. I'm glad he had his epiphany, now Rose can't hold it over his head.
Author's Response: Tee hee!! Right! She really needs a good flogging or some time on the horse. That'll straighten her out in a jiffy ;))
As for Edward and Rose? Well, all I can say is that she'll get one hell of an eye-opener!
Thanks for reading!! Have a great weekend!
~K
Reviewer: VincentP (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 06:29 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Nine- When It Rains, It Pours
I am so looking forward to the Rosalie/Bella showdown. I don't think Eddie has anything to worry abnout. Bella is going to do the verbal smackdown. Of course, Eddie will worry and end up in the corner hyperventilating into a paper bag. The poor up tight smuck. Nothing a good flogging won't cure. Thanks for writing this.
Author's Response: LOL!! He's such a little spaz. I think he's freaking out over nuthin..but then again, he might surprise a few people. Bella will put Rose in her place if need be...Rose may be the head honcho in her world, but wait until she tempts to step into Bella's ;)) Muhahahahahaha!!
Thanks for reading!! Have a great weekend!
~K
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2011 02:43 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly
OMG OMG OMG lmao he forgort all about the twins hahahhahaha Post again soon can't wait for everyone to meet I wonder if Rose will show up to the fanily dinner I know your story doesn't have them related so I am curiouse how she plays her barganing chip..
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2011 04:04 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly
of course the lil twins spilled the beans!! I really thought it would have been Carlisle but then remembered those guys. So glad Edward has been talking to Angela :) I was pleased that Edward told Bella she would be the only one Edward would be bringing home to his parents, ever, just putting more thought into Bella's head that she is it for him. Looking forward to next chapter!! ~Tracey xoxox
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2011 01:51 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly
I'm glad you're updating soon. Because I've been waiting for X-mas at the Cullen's for what seems like forever.
Reviewer: twifam1 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2011 07:36 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly
Hahahaahaha...Edward gave away his own secret! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: LST425 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2011 10:08 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir
I literally tripped over this story just looking around for something new to read. Boy am I ever glad I found you!! I am enjoying it so much, and then some. ;) I have missed the twins and look forward to seeing them next chapter. I hate to go against your husband but, I have to admit to chuckling when Edward's dick got broken. It was funny on Grey's Anatomy too! I have been able to spot a number of these "tributes" in this story and have enjoyed each one. Especially 'laterz", though you changed the s to a z. I got it! MOTU is one of my all time faves. So, what will Jasper say at Christmas? Will Emmett and Rosalie be there too? OMG! What will happen if Rosalie does know Bella? Damn. I really hope that you can give us a new chapter soon. Until then, I will be re-reading the last couple and waiting...
Author's Response: Aww, well thanks for checking me out, Hun!!! I'm so glad you've caught on to the little things I've added to this story. There is so much out there that influneces me as a writer and I like to pay homage to that. I'm waiting on my beta to validate my chapter. It's been a week now and I've been thinking about re-directing readers over to FFN to be caught up. It's a lot quicker of an update.
Here's the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6122874/1/Chocolate_Brown_and_Leather_Whips
Anyways, thanks for reading!!!
~K
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 07:14 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir
Yep, those twins should be a trip at Christmas LOL. that was just too weird how his dick had to be fixed, I was on edge of my seat hoping it was ok. That was more detail that I was expecting. Have no idea how he is gonna keep it in his pants for the next week tho LOL. ~Tracey xoxox
Author's Response: LOL..oh, hunny, I'm sorry. I hadn't expected to go into so much detail either, but I knew that I needed to just so I could express how serious of an injury Edward experienced. Thank God he's such a trooper.
Thanks for reading and I'll see ya next update :))
~K
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