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Reviewer: SkittleE (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 10:27 AM · On: Blindside

Curse you and your accursed cliff-hangers! You'd just love to torture us and make us beg for the next chapter wouldn't you? Well you are! Please please please please please please update soon!

Reviewer: crumb1991 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 10:08 AM · On: Blindside

Gah! I've loved this story (and the divergence as well!) from the beginning:) I love that Didyme is alive...I've always wanted some kind of happy ending for Marcus!!!!

Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 09:43 AM · On: Blindside

I knew she was alive!!!!! As soon as Marcus said he felt the same way as Bella, the pieces all fell into place. Great job can't wait to see how this unfolds!

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Blindside

Truthfully... wooow - never saw that coming.  Incredible... and kind of supports what Marcus told Bella, doesn't it?  AWESOME... AWESOME... AWESOME.  What an incredible tale. 

I expect without the werewolves around, Alice should be getting a glimpse of Edward in the near future... and I wonder, with a smirk, how Jacob would fare against one of those true werewolves.  :-)

Thank you so much for sharing such an incredible talent of yours - I'm humbled by your prowess to spin such an incredible tale.

Reviewer: K474R4 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 06:24 AM · On: Blindside

I knew she was alive! As soon as Marcus mentioned it. =) Loving both this and Divergence so far keep it up =)

Reviewer: Jasperslover (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2011 11:55 PM · On: Blindside

Yay Didyme is alive so Marcus feelings were true, he misses her but he can feel then bond still there.. I hope you make Bella bad ass Bella and for Jasper to train her ass. Give her something useful with her shield and Edward. Something far fetch like a mind link between them only activated during stress like now. I hope you update soon =)

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 11:45 PM · On: Blindside

This was a painful but enligtening update.  What they did to Edward was horrid but I love his strength and determiantion. I hope that Stefan and Vladimir get brutually destroyed by the same wolves, after suffering horribly for what they did to Bella's Edward.    And the fact the Didyme is alive is wonderful.  Update soon.

Reviewer: badkfare (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 10:03 PM · On: Blindside

I knew it! The moment Marcus told Bella that he still felt his wife I knew she was alive! Great chapter and I cannot wait to see what you have in store. Question though...If Bella could smell werewolf on the girl messanger, why didn't she tell the others (Alice) that's why they couldn't see Edward? Looking forward to the next update, have a great weekend!

Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 08:59 PM · On: Blindside

Didyme? Did not see that coming!

Reviewer: Julieta (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 07:34 PM · On: Blindside

I love the story lines you weave! Fresh and different from many other fics out there while staying true to the characters. You rock, lady!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 09:49 PM · On: mourn

Poor Bella, she can't exist without him!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 09:38 PM · On: Spy

Holy crap!  I didn't see THAT coming!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 11:02 AM · On: mourn

The Native Americans that share our state with us, which is Idaho, Fully believe that the owl foretells death. So as soon as I read that part I knew something was up because I have always been the superstitious one . or however you spell it.

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 02:49 PM · On: mourn

not edward, but hasn't bella suffered enough??

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 09:38 AM · On: mourn

Hi hun,

Just voted for you in the awards.  I see Elise is in there too, as is Miriam and a couple of other favourites!  You're all such wonderful writers - am so glad you're getting the accolades you deserv.

Sammi xxx

Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 08:22 PM · On: mourn

I have loved this story since discovering it and have read it almost non-stop.  I must say even though I'm certain Edward is still alive and being held captive right now.  I couldn't help but to cry while reading  this last chapter to date to feel everyone's grieve at believing Edward is dead and how Bella has responded.  I can't wait until you bless us with the next chapter.  Love this story. =)

Reviewer: twihardacctant (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 12:57 PM · On: mourn

What an awesome chapter...i hate cliffhangers but i really dig your style! Don't let the angst and grief last too long!!!!!

Reviewer: Cathrine1604 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 08:13 AM · On: mourn

Still crying.. Please give us info about Edward soon - if he's dead for real, this is the worst story EVER :-)

Update soon! Love, Catherine

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 04:04 AM · On: mourn

Wow.. Outstanding chapter.  Tears in my eyes and everything.

I am going to guess that a deception has been perpetuated using the ashes from the fifth column/spy vampire and some of Edward's venom. Evil thing to do for the Romanians.

But a  great headgame.

 

Your portrayals of everyone here are exemplary.

Reviewer: rach_88 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 03:55 AM · On: Betrayal

loved the chapter and i just have to say thankyou so much for your support for the queensland flood victims. i am from western australia and the tragedy of these floods are being felt across the whole country. up north in west aus there was a flood in carnarvon, and lots of crops, houses etc hav been destroyed but at least there were no deaths. however in queensland there have been 20 people reported deceased so far, many still missing and it is heartbreaking to think of the loved ones lost, the livelihoods that will forever be affected and the thousands of people that have lost everything they have ever known. but the stories of courage and bravery that are coming out, from people that have made rescues to people that are just intent on getting on with their lives and facing the hard times ahead are really inspiring and make me real proud to be an aussie. so please guys, support this cause because i can guarantee you every cent would be appreciated and help to rebuild lives!

Reviewer: badkfare (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 12:39 AM · On: mourn

What a great chapter! Now please tell me Edward's still alive? I mean that's mean to put them together and then kill him...im just saying! I know he's still alive and the reason Alice can't see him is becasue of the wolves. I love Marcus and Bella and if i had to pick an outtake that I would to read it would one of Marcus and his wife. I think it would be really sweet and would give us a little more insight into their relationship! Can't wait to see what you throw at us next! Have a great weekend.

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2011 10:45 PM · On: mourn

The way that you wrote Bella's grief was absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking.

I also loved how you brought Jake in to be her light. I sat with a tissue to my eyes and nose through the whole chapter. I really look forward to the next chapter.

Rox

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2011 09:21 PM · On: mourn

Sad chapter...

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2011 07:56 PM · On: mourn

OMG. So freakin sad. Plz, next chapter soon.

Alaina

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2011 07:22 PM · On: mourn

An amazing update but deeply  heartbreaking....Bella, the Cullens and Marcus' pain brought tears to my eyes. Jacob is so wonderfully protrayed here.  I also feel for Aro for he must be in his own hell. Very eager for more.



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