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Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 04:09 PM · On: Preparation

hells yeah...time for an ass kicking of epic proportions!

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 01:45 AM · On: Preparation

okay now we are all out here on the cliff and it is raining and the mudd is slipping and  and..... Hello!

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 12:53 AM · On: Spy

Alrighty now you have screwed up our return of Edward, so who will save him? Bella?

 

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 12:22 AM · On: Mate

Well finally.. Edward is !

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 09:23 PM · On: Contact

Well well, Edward has sex who would have thought. Now if they do the deed we shall all be in shock.

 

Ahh yess no Reneesme on this one. I am glad.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 08:05 PM · On: Repercussions

Well, well who would have thought so much emotion from the Volturi?

Two mama's, Two Papa's and two uncles.  She will forgive them it is her nature.

Reviewer: ginger_sith (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 06:59 PM · On: Preparation

Ok, I really really really love this story!  I am actually giddy with how you protray that vampire world.  Also, that last few chapters have had me locked to my computer all afternoon, I was just consumed by your story. Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 09:13 PM · On: Preparation

I would've loved to have seen the look on everyone's face.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Alaina

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 10:38 AM · On: Preparation

Awesome chapter. I loved it!!!

Rox

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 01:51 PM · On: Preparation

having read this chapter on the other site, I must now say I thought that the introduction of a live Didyme was a really inspiring idea.  How wonderful that Marcus could potentially have a happy ending to his grief.

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 11:12 AM · On: Preparation

Even expecting, knowing and visualizing that huge scene where Alice rushes in to inform everyone that Edward and Didyme are alive - especially the mind staggering response from Aro as he sees it... STILL did not take away from the scene you played out inside us readers heads as we experienced it through your magic words.  :-)

I loved Caius's reaction regarding Aro... although even with that I think Aro was manipulating and expecting that reaction.  Not that he wasn't since... but that he had to predict Caius's reaction given the circumstances.  I loved Jasper's reaction - and Aro would not be doing Jasper's character a justice if he doesn't use Jasper's military stradegy and leadership superiority in leading this attack.  And who cannot love Emmett's reaction, huh? :-)  AND for that matter the special bond that developed between the witch and the bitch.  (grin)

Bella had been vindicated... and for that matter, Marcus as well.  It'll be interesting to read Marcus's reaction in the next chapter.  Hopefully he won't be too hard on himself for not turing over that particular stone.

Bella's "precision" shielding and new combined power she has (with Jane and Alec) is quite amazing.  But she is going to have to have a bodyguard or two protecting her as she weilds it.  :-)

Finally, we'll get to see Jacob (shapeshifter) vs read werewolf... a battle I haven't ever seen played out in a Twilight fanfic.  

I remember commenting once awhile back about how incredible the combined strength of the Volturi and the Cullens would be with their teaming... and who could possibly defy them.  Of course I pondered this without considering the Romanians given I didn't consider the werewolves involvement.

Thank you again for sharing your tremendous talent and I must admit quite painful between chapters.  :-) 

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 10:21 AM · On: Preparation

i need to breathe a huge sigh of relief after reading that. you my dear are a genius!

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:17 PM · On: Preparation

Outstanding update.  I love the drama, the hope, the way that Edward got Alice to see him and Didyme.  It is great to see the Volturi, Cullens and wolves working together. Emmett is a riot and I actually like Jacob in this too.

I hate how they are torturing Edward but I like his determination and the way that he is not only dealing with his pain but trying to help Didyme.

I can't wait for the war and I look forward for the wolves to tear apart the horrid, brutal Aribert, Stefan and Vladimir's, and they followers. 

 I look forward to more soon.

Reviewer: xxsiriahcullenxx (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 04:33 PM · On: Preparation

oh whit wat a cliff hanger  i just want to see edward back and with his family

xxx

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 10:30 AM · On: Blindside

oh my goodness! oh my gosh! i can not wait to see what else your wonderful brain has thought up!!!

Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Blindside

ACK!!!!!  More please!  Seriously, I LOVE how you have been protraying everything.  I actually like everyone, the world seems SOOOOoo much more interesting, the story is bigger then teen love, and I respect the hell out of what you are doing writting two concurent though divergent stories.  What possessed you to do that?

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 07:30 PM · On: Blindside

Holy freakin crap!!! The end threw me for a small loop. I know they are captive but it makes me so freakin happy at the same time.

Alaina

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 07:42 AM · On: Blindside

wow! amazing chapter! I cannot wait! I love that Didyme is alive!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 04:46 AM · On: Blindside

Wow!! What a cliffhanger! Didyme!! ooo I love this stoy!

Reviewer: samieve2408 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 06:55 PM · On: Blindside

Holy shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I did not see that coming! Wowsa! You are going to keep me anxiously waiting for the next chapter! OMFG! I love the cliffhanger you left us at! And I HATE cliffhangers!

Reviewer: mollytx (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Blindside

Please post again soon!!!! This is soooooo good! I love Marcus and can't wait for him to be reunited with Didyme!!!

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 03:47 PM · On: Blindside

OMG!!! Didyme? I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Rox

Reviewer: Much2shy142 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 03:23 PM · On: Blindside

i love this story! i read both versions and im so glad u decided to write both versions. I love your writing style too.  Please keep up the fantastic work!

Reviewer: The Greek Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Blindside

oh my god!! i cant belive how good this is plz plz plz write more! i never thought that Didyme could still be alive its such a good story cant wait to read more so plz hurry up and write!! :DDD

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Blindside

You rock, babe! I'll say that til my dying day!!

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