Just wanted to let you know that you are now my favorite fan-fiction writer—after reading more of your writing (Unwanted and Unloved—as well as Unwanted and Unloved Divergence). Since you said reviews are like heroin to an author I thought to provide you with another one. The only thing that bothers me is in Unwanted and Unloved Bella is reminiscing about Charlie’s explanation and his foray into criminal trespassing. This only bothers me because of my occupation but Charlie did a heck of a lot more then criminal trespassing. What most people don’t know is that as soon as you cross the threshold into someone else’s home uninvited (whether you take anything or not) you have committed Burglary.  Add to the fact that he also removed items from the home, he actually committed Burglary in the 1st degree which is a class C felony and carries a sentence of 10 to 15 years in prison. Now if he also walked into the home with his firearm—or something as simple as a utility knife he committed Robbery which carries a sentence in line with un-premeditated murder. Like I said this is just nit picking but it adds to the fact that Charlie did something that is completely out-of-line with his cop character. And in case you want to know criminal trespassing is a simple violation which means that you have stayed on public property after you’ve been asked to leave (like loitering in Wal-Mart) or you are on private property without permission (without actually stepping inside a dwelling). I can’t ever say that I would make a decent beta because grammar is not my strong suit but if you ever have any legal questions I can certainly answer them with some degree of authority. Once again I love you writing and am really hoping to see NEW chapters of Full Moon Rising ASAP. Have a great day and know that at least one person on the planet has had a brighter day because of you!

lynngower@kycourts.net

I must say that this is one of the most original storylines I have ever read! I love SM, but THIS ROCKS!!! I would love to have your talent (although I must say that I have never attempted something of this nature--and I TEACH English)! I have been making my way through you work, and I am hooked on your characters. Can't wait to start Divergence!

nooooooo!!!

That was an awesome story. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic!

So I read it all straight through, and I have to say, I enjoyed this story. It's got the HEA without too much of the sappy. I have to say, I like the storyline for the Romanians better in this version than in UUD. Not that I like seeing Edward and Didyme tortured, but there was just more intrigue, and I liked that. I love what you did with Charlie, and while he's never been much of a talker, these last two chapters were perfect. I will happily recommend this story to others.

i like felix better XD

An absolutely beautiful story. Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us.

Ah, well. The Felix ship has sailed then. Bye, Felix. It's been nice.

Reading about Edward and Bella's near-sex encounter makes me all sad for Felix. Poor guy. Even though I really want him to, he just can't win, can he?

Wow, who needs the Cullens when you have Felix?? I'm so impressed with how completely awesome this is. I have class in the morning, but I just can't put the computer away.

So Interview Wtih a Vampire-ish lol I love it! Totally unexpected.

Holy shit this is so intense. I think i'm gonna call off work to read it. ;)

Another great chapter, are u planning to write more to this? if u are i cant wait to read more.