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Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
That's cute!
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Every time I'm in a bad mood, I look up this story. So adorable (and quite tender too). :-)
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was fun, and I love your E pov. Smiles
Reviewer: jackiecoleman1991 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
Lmao!!! That was hilarious!!! i loved it. you don't know me, but alaska rose introduced me to this site, and she gave me a whole list of pennames with stories to check out. You were at the top of the list. Before i actually joined the site, i read sibling rivalry and that was FANTASTIC!!!!!!! i was laughing all night!!!!!! I also read first impressions, and i must tell you that you are very talented. i didn't review them because i hadnt yet joined the site, but i will get back to them, and i guarantee ill read them again, and review!
Keep up the awesome work!!
Reviewer: doodliedoo21 (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
my god that was so funny. I am in tears. I almost choked! Phew man that was great.
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
LOVED it! I love your writing, it's so fun and original to read and the mood and personalities of the characters are so REAL!
Reviewer: Lizzard43 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
I loved this piece! Thank you
Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
THIS is your first story?!? Terrific start!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love the brotherly love.
Reviewer: justwant2read (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GENIUS!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
brilliant
Reviewer: EmeraldRain (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
lmao i had tears in my eyes :) super funnY!
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was very cute. I love how Emmett and Jasper elbowed their way in.
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
heeheheheeee too funny!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
roflmao .. ok I couldnt sleep (its 3:2o in the morning) found this story and i swear i never laughed so hard in my life - I really like it (for a 1st) you really did a good job lol - it was really cute
Reviewer: ichigo16 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was so cute.It actually gives me a whole new point of view of the story.
Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
that was well cool ! x x loved it x x
Reviewer: TheFleaburger (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
Tender and hilarious in equal parts! Loved it!
Reviewer: VanillaPrincess818 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
hahahaha!
this is really good!
keep going!
Reviewer: starbubbles (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it.
Reviewer: redhairedvamp216 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
funny *hee hee*
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good job on your first fluff, I enjoyed it. I liked the way you included the boys and thier chests ...I mean chess game :)
Reviewer: AbruptlyChagrined (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hee hee....those naughty, irritating brothers. I loved the part about Bella saying God made him a vampire and his reaction.......to me that was the very best part of an otherwise funny little tale.
Reviewer: Banriona (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
haha, love it!
Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
adorable I loved it. Can't wait to read more from you.
angel 057
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