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Reviewer: amvel (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
I am so glad your beta is back on track!!!! I've been following you on fanfiction regardless - the withdrawel was killing me!
I loved this chapter - so high school - as it should be. So glad it was "innocent" sex, nothing worse then the porn acts with 2 inexperienced kids! Very glad your keeping the story realistic. I am loving it and can't wait for the next chapter and the experenecnes they will learn together!
I checked out "I watched you Change" - Vampward?? You mean Badward!!! So far I am loving it! Love the Badward!!!
Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
That was amazing! You don't know how much I have enjoyed reading a story that has mr popular liking a not so perfect girl. HS is usually about the stereotype magazine perfection & although I know it's fiction, it's nice to read that there really are people out there who are attracted to types not usually considered attractive. Am I making sense?
Anyway, I love this. Edward has made Bella feel good about herself & accepting that she is worthy of love. How cool is that that he's the hunk of high school to boot?!?!
Thanks for a great chapter! So worth the wait!
Reviewer: kschelte (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 30: Need
Very nice! Can't wait for your next update..I love how you update so often! This is with out a doubt my number 1 story on Twiligted
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Thank you for the playlist, I listened to each one. Loved this chapter, love the more bold and confident Bella who can tell her man what she wants. GAW!! Love that Edward is equally caught up and besotted, can't do without, can't live without. It's like their time in the motel is a time capsule of their love.
Author's Response: Aww thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the music. She's still working on it but eventually she'll get there, haha. And I never thought about the time capsule motel room of love...haha thanks for that!
Reviewer: whitestripe (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Perfectly balanced sweet and sexy.
Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
"Chubby chaser"!!! OHMYGAWD! *ROTFL* He better be nice that's all I gotta say!!
Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
Poor Bella. This was a hard chapter, hearing insults are definately more devestating from family then from strangers. Charlie is a good father, but he needs to keep his promise and not make Bella see the grandfather again. She's a dutiful daughter and she would willingly subject herself just to please her dad, he's gotta keep that promise!!
Reviewer: whitestripe (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 30: Need
Lovely Valentine's Day presents and events.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
I just love them. And who doesn't love some sexing time with Edward for breakfast? ;)
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Glad our girl got her groove on. :-)
Reviewer: Jarbles (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
YAY!! Playlist :) Thnaks!
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Aww they are so sweet!!! I have a feeling that Tanya will try to do something to hurt our happy couple and that Drake may somehow be involved.
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
OMG
DIEDED.
They should just never leave the hotel.
Reviewer: Koffie (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Loved the chapter but i went over to find the story your co authoring and i couldnt find it. Some help to find it would be much appreciated.Thanks and nice work on this one !
Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Ah. Thank you! And since you asked after my last review, yes, it is possible for a girl to 'get hers' the first time. I guess I should consider myself a very lucky woman! *winks*
Great chapter. They're so sweet together! Thanks for the song list too...
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Well done!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOHOO!!!!!!! I am so proud of them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Oh my lady. You had me rolling my eyes with the romance at the start. Was it really really thick or was it just me? Feasting on her breast was a nice touch. I could give you many MANY many more adjectives to extend that bit. To you girls they might just be an inconvienience most of the time but to us guys they are ultra sexy soft curves for desire.
Nice of you to extend this into the morning. :)
Author's Response: No no it was definitely laid on a little thick. They just needed to get it out in the open, now they can move on. Haha.
Why don't you share some of those adjectives and similes over in the forums? Ey Ey? Haha
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 30: Need
YAY Bella for stepping up to the plate and making sure things are just right for her. Yay Ed for not feeling ripped of for him not making arrangements.
How the heck are you going to resolve the Tanya issue. If they were blokes your good mates would sort it to with only minor bruising.
Author's Response: Haha thanks and I have no flippin' idea. Bella seems to have a couple though, I'm gonna let her take the reins and see where this roller coaster rise is taking me.
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
AAWWW... she's so damn lucky!
Reviewer: hart_of_ice (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Love it Love it Love it!!!!!!!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Aww she's so shy! Another great chapter!!!
Reviewer: Gnaea (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 31: Again
Great sexin but I have to repeat myself again.
The music is.....not good. Very Schmalzy and very mainstream, and just not very original. Would I have been a guy then Enrique Iglesias would have made me go limp. Please, put a bit more creativity in the songs, they are just so cliché, and I am a music snob and should stop right here. lol
But apart from that a good chapter :)
Author's Response: Well if the only thing you have an issue with is the music then, I'm okay wiith that. If I can explain my choices however I would love to...Bella and Edward are in high school. I don't know about you but when I was in high school I listened to more main stream songs that were identifiable. As they mature and grow however I'm sure they're taste in music will as well. Promise.
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 30: Need
Lol "Stop Cock-Blocking me" that made me giggle, it was great!!! :D
Author's Response: haha thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed that little quip.
Reviewer: msamazing (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 30: Need
Gah! I love this entire story!
Author's Response: Aww thanks!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 22: Truth
OH leave it to Tonya to screw something up.
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