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Reviewer: ginginlee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
That made me cry! It was so sweet to see Charlie tryiing to console Bella.
Author's Response: Charlie's a good dad!
Reviewer: ginginlee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 10: Party
I'm guessing that Jacob won't be going after Bella also, then, right?? Love triangles get me down...but I'm sure I'd deal if there was one! I'm so glad Bella's found a friend in Rose. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Haha...no love triangles in this story!
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
nice chapter! I liked it!
Reviewer: ginginlee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 6: Reason
Drake was definitely a doucher, that's for sure! I hate that Bella had to go through something like that, and that Edward unknowingly upset her. I'm looking forward to some more B & E time!
Reviewer: ginginlee (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 2: Acquaintances
Great story so far! I saw this rec'd on another Twilighted thread (Let's Get Physical, we were discussing fics with "big-boned Bella"), and I can tell already it's going to be a good ride. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Haha thanks! Hope you enjoy the story! I'm looking forward ro your future reviews!
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
Great chapter! :D
I almost cried, but that's do to having my heart broken :(
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm sorry about your heart break. IN my opinion our hearts grow back bigger after a heart break so that the person who decides it's perfect has more to love. Keep reading!
~Tru
Reviewer: stellar128 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
ooooo!! whats he gonna do,True?! lol
Author's Response: find out in the next chapter...i promise it won't get too angsty, LOL!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: Arrival
I'll keep reading ;-)
Author's Response: Update is coming soon griff! Can't wait to get your review!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Arrival
You know I did read it, and it doesn't float my boat. I think that it seems to lack substance for me.
Author's Response: What if I told you it gains substance in a few chapters....I promise...like seriously.
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
Oh I saw that coming, but that's one of the reasons I started this story. It's one thing to have him 'learn' to like her. It's quite refreshing to have him just lusting for it. Yay!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you approve. Some of my readers had mixed feelings and some were all out pissed. Thanks for reading!
~Tru
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
OH hell, my favorite one was when my grandmother would make the most fattening meals ever, tell me i had to clean my plate, then geve me crap for being heavy. Or if I ate too much, then it was horrible, too. Ugh
Good for Charlie.
Reviewer: twlightforever (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
great chapter
Reviewer: 2journey (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
Awh....good chapter but think that E could just tell Be that there was a change in the date for going to dinner with her. If B takes this too seriously, then she's too shallow.
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 3: Lunch
I know how she feels. Poor girl. It's so easy to be convinced that everyone is talking about you. I also make eye contact as little as possible. I've gotten more confident as I've gotten older, but it's a bad habit I've never been able to break.
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 1: Arrival
Being a fellow full figured lady, although I have another X on my clothing tags, I was so happy to hear about this story on RAoR. I am always on the lookout for plus-sized Bella stories, and there just aren't many out there. The Mary Sue factor makes so many people shy away from anything that would make the lead character possibly unattractive to the majority of readers or people in real life.
I look forward to reading this. Great start!
Author's Response: Wow...first of all can I say....your story Blood & Lust is amazing...it's one of my favorites. Secondly, what is RAoR? And thirdly, thank you so much for giving my story a chance! I look forward to your reviews as you continue reading!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
So ring Bella back straight away and see if Saturday would be OK. Then invite Bella to the party Sunday. No brainer.
You gotta have something else in mind however. I'm going to go check out your other story now.
Author's Response: Tell me how you like I Watched You Change! Mysty and I are very proud of it so far! We have a thread up about it too!
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=11901
Thanks Griff! You rock my socks!
~Tru
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
I've got a bad feeling about grandpa's visit- wish Bella could ditch him
Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
I hope Edward says something to Bella so she can change the dinner date with grandpa. Love how they were at the hotel. Bella has grown quite a lot with confidence and has Edward to thank for that. I think Edward has grown as well and is more friendly towered others because of Bella. I am really hoping that you let Tanya get her comeuppance as she so deserves it.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
Great chapter.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
Very good, LOVE IT!!! I will have to check out Watched You Change, sounds Good!
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
oh oh what to do?
Keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: DingoesAteMyBaby (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
I just found this story, it's just sooo good! I'm completely in love with it. Just one thing here in the last chapter: After the Oh Shit comment all the writing turned cursive, I don't think that's intentional on your part:)
Can't wait for more and no matter what happens , I expect to see Grandpa A hole taken down a few pegs, along with Tanya and James and Victoria and Aro..and well, all those who are being idiots really:)
D. Mai
Author's Response: Well that's embarassing...thanks for the heads up on the italics...you're the first one to mention it, stupid computer switched it on me. Haha.
Glad you are enjoying the story! Thanks for reviewing!
~Tru
Reviewer: Kalika87 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
This is why all men should have an internal calander like women do. Most women don't confuse dates like that.It's just not acceptable. =P
Brilliant chapter! How about you get Bella to go with Edward and his family for Carlisle's birthday and then next week have dinner with Chief and Mr. Swan? Might be a way to work it out. =)
Look forward to the next one.
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 32: Invite
Do you know how great it is to read a story where Jacob and Edward are friends and not fighting over Bella....LOVE IT!!! I don't see the big issue with the dinner and the bday celebration since Bella left it up to Edward when they would have the family dinner. Edward just need to call her and let her know they need to change her family dinner and then invite her to the bday celebration. I hope Tanya gets her ass handed to her soon.
Reviewer: LoveMe123 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 17: Fight
Damn good chapter, dearr.
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