THIS STORY IS SO GOOD. EVERY CHAPTER IS A TEASE.

Author's Response:

Aww thanks! Haha! Is the tease a good thing or no?

i still want grandpa's number, please...(  love edward's response, love edward period.

Author's Response:

HAHA! You and me both! Edward is a sweetheart!

love it.

dear god i hope this was a COMPLETE figment of your writer's imagination, otherwise i'll have to politely ask for this relative's phone number and address and start a line of communication.  

 

btw - last chapter with the hand kiss at the door was lovely.

Author's Response:

afraid not...everything that was said to bella, was said to me by my grandfather at one point or another. karma is a bitch though, and he now has a broken hip...soooo....

the hand kiss becomes edward's staple thing he does to Bella. haha! I'm a sucker for old romantic gestures.

i knew it was a wacky misunderstanding.  adios, tanya, go find mike newton.

I wish I could drop out of college and read fanfiction full time. It's not fair that I have to wait so long before I have a semi-break to read this amazing story! The James/Tanya thing actually took me by surprise. I thought it was just James being an asshole, but it makes complete since that Tanya would pay him to torture Bella. She is the uber bitch that I wish I could get my hands on. Ugh! The loving was freaking fantastic. Props to Bella for the bj work. Woot! Then Edward making love to her to the song was to DIE for. Then grandpa Swan showed up and ruined the bliss I was in...he reminds me of my father, who personally killed my self-esteem as a child. I hate the way grandpa Swan acts towards Bella, but I love the way Edward stood up for her. And now I'm proud that she is going to start standing up for herself against him. That is the best thing to do, when you have your own self-worth no one can bring you down!! Go Bella!

 

Can't wait for more! xoxo  

Author's Response:

Do you just not have internet in college? Or do you choose not to read it?

James is really as harmful as a paper cut, Tanya is the staff infection waiting in the wings.

The loving was pretty great huh? It kind of sucks that you're going to be M.I.A. because I have a couple more scenes in my head...then again I might have to save them for the next installment of this happy couple, hehe.

Grandpa Swan is a dickhead, but he'll hopefully come around as Bella starts standing up for herself. She just needs to put her foot down. LOL!

Thanks for the review! I'll post the next chapter soon!

~Tru

Hooray for Edward! That was great. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Bella's grandfather trys for any remorse afterwards.

I also am waiting to see what development is going on next with Tanya.

love the chapter.  Yep..James and Tanya was a shocker. 

The grandfather's behavior is real...mine revealed itself in my grandmother.  Good job in portraying it.

Loved this chapter again. Bella and Edward are more fun human sometimes and they way you have written them here is proof of that.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh, and Grandpa Swan is a tool. [/discussion]

 

Well hello..first off your writting is amazing i am reall enjoying reading, your bella reminds me alot of myself before i met my Matt, I'm a large girl who up untill 4years ago when i met my boyfriend felt very ugly and unloved soo i love that you have managed to express that big girl are beautiful too, I'm sorry this is the first review you have got from me but i only started reading yesterday and spent all day, night and this morning trying to catch up b4 the next chapter update 33 chapters in less then 14hours aint bad but didn't leave much time for reviewing but i have loved every chapter and can't wait for more u trully are a talented writter! i think this may be my new fav story which is saying alot because im currently reading 148 diff twifics keep up the amazing work you totally rock!

quite possibly your biggest fan Chelle x

Author's Response:

WOW! Consider me floored at your review! I'm soooo glad that you are enjoying my fic and can relate to it! I honestly started writing this just because it was stuck in my head, I never in my wildest dreams imagined I would get the response I did. It humbles me and keeps me motivated to keep it up. I promise Chapter 34 is on it's way, hopefully it will be up within the next couple days, if not I am on fanficti(dor)net, my penname is Truefan20 over there.

Thank you for the confidence boost about my writing. I'm a long way off from where I want be and I'm in the process of re-editing this chapter for the minor things I missed before. I hope I don't disappoint my biggest fan as this story comes to a close, but don't you worry because I will be doing another installment of this sondrous Bella and her enigmatic Edward, hehe!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Tru

This chapter made me bust out laughing like Jacob. ROFLMAO!

UGH IS THEIR A RATE NUMBER HIGHER THAN TEN!!! GEEZ AND IM PISSED CUZ THIS BOOK IS BEYONG GOOD! :( PLEASE REPOST QUICK!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WITH TANYA EVIL A**!!!!!!!! [EVIL GIGGLES]

Author's Response:

BAHAHAHAHA! Thanks! Your enthusiasm about my little story astounds me! Hehe! I will repost as soon as I can! I promise!

glad to see Edward sticking up for Bella.