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Reviewer: physcofarmgurl (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
Amazing chapter! I can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: The wait won't be too long! Promise!
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
Your fight and concequences made complete sense to me. Real life isn't black and white. But them I'm a well matured aged bloke and not a young kid. Far from all teenagers sexually experiment for a host of reasons. I know I didn't but was horny as the next guy and even had a willing girl looking back in hind sight. Wasn't sure if you weren't going to hold out on them like Ed in the books.
Bumped. Well, meaning your threat for your story had been inactive and gone pages down in the stories of the forum. I posted in it 'bumping' it back up to the top maybe reactivating it for peoples attention.
Author's Response: Thanks Griff! You rock! Next update is going to be soon!
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
Okay - back on track, thanks for the update. Oh, and I LOVE TEAM CHARLIE!!
Author's Response: haha! Thanks! Team Charlie is pretty awesome!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 22: Truth
What the hell! Why would she react like that to something Tanya of all people said. She should give him a little more credit than that! I get the insecurity, hell I have that myself, but.....really?
I'm uber pissed at her right now!
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
LMFAO so worth the wait!!!
Btw good luck with school. :D
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks! Next update won't be as long.
School's not too bad, it's work that's killing me.
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 20: Brothers
Definitely approved of the kiss and the coming out day. A little nervous as to what Tanya and James are going to do next....
Great story!
Reviewer: BELLAxMOMENT (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
I loved this chapter! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: haha! thank you!
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
Fighting is fighting. No matter who started authority should end it. Punishment to fit the crime. Nice lemon BTW. OK, so the childs can go at it like bunnies in spring but that's clearly not what the story is about. Glad Ed got a piece though or he was going to badly strain something. So, go team Bella. School is going to be rotten with people patting her on the back. So what's Tanya going to do to make herself feel better.
BTW, I bumped your threat for this story if you didn't know.
Here's your cookies. Nom nom nom. http://www.cookie-recipes.net/
Author's Response: You bumped my threat? I don't understand...
I'm glad you agree with and understand the fighting thing. Most people are PISSED that Bella had to do some time. And yes they are high schoolers...of course they're going to hump like bunnies. She'll be okay. Thanks for the cookie recipes...haha!
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
Go Charlie!!
Great chapter, as always!
Author's Response: thanks! and thanks for reading!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party
So sweet for a first date! I am glad that Jake and Edward are cool here. The whole competition thing gets old after a while. Tanya is getting on my nerves, so I see she'll be Bella's foil throughout the story. I hope Tanya gets what coming to her. I like the chivalrous Edward - opening doors and chaste kisses get my vote every time. I hope he makes more of a move on her soon! She seems happy here - well depsite the loser James and Victoria attack! Good work here!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
go charlie!!!! and go bella! haha :p
Author's Response: thanks! haha!
Reviewer: Msarkie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 25: Talk
ROTFLMAO!!!!! Loved the sex talk scene in the movie, too. My folks were so uncomfortable with the whole topic they just decided to skip it entirely. I, however, have taken a slightly more proactive approach - my 4 yr old daughter will proudly tell you she has a 'bagina'.
Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
Awesome story!!!!! Let's hear what Carlisle and Esme have to say to Edward!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha! totally!
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
HOLY shit!!! GO CHARLIE!!!! I loved it!!! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: haha! yeah he's pretty bomb.
Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
love that eric yorkie got it all on video. you should actually make the video and put it up on youtube with a link. =) thanks for the update!
Author's Response: hmmm...interesting idea....I'll consider it!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
I'm glad that Bella told Charlie what has been going on. I love Charlie for going to her school and fighting for her.
Great chapter. I am looking forward to what happens next.
Author's Response: of course he did! That's his daughter!
Reviewer: twlightforever (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
Glad your back very good chapter
Author's Response: I wasn't gone, my validation beta was! haha!
Reviewer: Leibeezer (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
WAY TO GO CHARLIE!!!
I thought the truck sex was hot! I think Charlie should see the video that Rose showed to Bella. I also think it would be great if Charlie were to arrest Tanya and take her down to the station.
Author's Response: That may just happen...haha!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
so Rose needs to show the principal the video! And I hope that Charlie busts Tanya!
Author's Response: hehe we'll seeeee!
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
I so totally <3 your Charlie!!
Author's Response: haha thank you!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
You go Charlie!!!!!
Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
Thank you for the update, I was just thinking of this story and how much I like it! I loved E&B's post drama love-in! I agree that it was unfair for Bella to get detention, Rose needs to show the tape to the principal. Eager for the next chapter!! =)
Author's Response: I'm not telling what's going to happen. We shall see...
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
Loved it!!!! Can't believe that Bella got detention. Wonder if Tanya will be getting pulled over anytime soon. Can't wait to read what happens next
Author's Response: Thanks! She probably won't have a car to get pulled over in for a while. HAHA!
Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
Ahhh, crazed teenage truck sex...does it get any better than that? Didn't think so. Oh, and really, OLDIES station????? I just can't believe that Jeff. Airp. is an oldie. When I think oldie, I think Earth Angel or some other 50's or 60's cheesy music lol. Damn, I feel really old now.
Author's Response: I know, have you listened to an oldies station lately? Most of it is from the late 60s all the way to the early 80's! It's making me feel old just because I know those songs! AND I JUST TURNED 21! Jefferson Airplane rocks though, so don't worry! You're taste in music hasn't gone out of date!
Reviewer: renee m (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 36: Inquisiton
OMG! tanya is going down.
Author's Response: ooohhh yeeeeaaaah!
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