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Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

Grumpy old man syndrome.  I think the chapter was better for putting some of yourself into it.

Reviewer: AugustaBlue (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

That was so sad.  I cried with her.  I'm a big girl, but I never had to experience that kind of judgement from loved ones and I'm very sorry that you did.  Another very very good chapter.  Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

loving the idea of jacob and edward as friends.

loving even more the fact that Edward is popular but still kind of a loner- the tanya angle is good but loving the bond between Rose and Bella sooo much

your frequency of updates is outstanding

two in one day, i want to savor but instead wnat more

Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

AWWWwwww!  Nice Daddy!

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

llike always im just showing my love and yes this chapter was a little sad and sorry u have to hear  all that ..........but like always amazing work love your story next chapter i can't wait

Reviewer: bmor (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

Trying to type while crying isn't easy, but I need to tell you thanks for writing this story again!  I think that the majority of us who are curvy have had to deal with family members who are more than a little judgmental.  It hurts even worse coming from them.  Still keeping it real, that is what keeps me reading!  And can I just say, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Charlie!  Can I just have him for my own dad????? PLEASE!!!  Ok, so I have reached an all time low, wanting a fictional character for my dad.  The Edward, Jacob, Rose phone calls.....HILARIOUS!!! 

Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

That made me cry, now I wanna kick an old mans ass! Never thought I'd wanna, but I do!

Love the pseudo double date coming up.. Next chappie maybe? ;)

Reviewer: Daisy Mae (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

I don't even know what to say about this chapter.  Some people shouldn't be allowed to talk no matter how old they are.  Thank goodness Charlie understands and stands up for his daughter.  I was beginning to think that things were starting to look up for Bella and all these new friends would boost her self-image.  One step forward and twenty back, thanks to good ole' Grandpa.

Look forward to reading more!

Reviewer: romanceisbliss (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

I really enjoy reading your story.  I know what it is like to hear this too...only from my mother.  She did it to my daughter to and now is doing it to her daughter who is only 4.  My daughter actually had a similar thing happen to her with a boy that Bella did too.  I still don't understand how she can be his friend now, but she is.  She wasn't even that heavy.  She was 5 foot 7 inches and wore a size 11/12.  I don't think that is bad.  Do you?



Author's Response:

WHAT?!? 5'7" and a size 11/12? That's not big at all! GOD people can suck! I'm 5'9" and a size 18/20. I would love to be as proportional as your daughter but it just isn't in my cards right now. I'm still working on losing weight but it seems to be coming off in only 1/2 to 1 pound increments, driving me nuts!

Reviewer: Dark Angel (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

I sooooo can relate to this story! And it was my HUSBAND'S grandfather who constantly ragged on me about my weight. I finally had enough one day, and told him "grandpa, if you don't hush about my weight, I'm gonna sit on you!" and just laughed and laughed. He never said another word about my weight! I guess he was scared I was gonna actually do it......I just might have!! Enough is enough....

Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

Great chapter

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

Wow! What a old geezer Grandpa is. Poor Bella! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

The Edward/Jacob/Bella love triangle is just so -yawn- that simple friendly rivalry is a good thing.

Kiss on the hand is nice, but should be followed up with kiss on the cheek to make intentions clear.  ;)

Reviewer: sunystone (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

I just found this story today and I love it!!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

Edward and Jacob are friends! Yay! Thank you, that's a welcome change. And the party was awesome. Edward is so sweet, I hope annoying Tanya is going to take a road trip to Tibet or Timbuktu soon ;-)

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 9: Energy

I've never been to a high school football game, but after reading this chapter, I'm sure I missed something. I could practically feel the atmosphere. Amazing!

Reviewer: valadria (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

I'm all for the lack of conflict between Edward and Jacob.  Can't stand him in the books, and then so many write him as a bad guy that it's hard to ever like him.  But this was is good.  Athletic competition is much more fun:)

I feel so bad for Bella though.  She's so insecure that Edward's gestures are either being scrutinized serverly or she's not seeing them at all.  I am glad for Rose though.  Perhaps she can help the two along, help Bella with her self-esteem and help Edward understand a little better.  Can't wait for your next update:)

Reviewer: Alyssafan (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

You are the best for updating so frequently!  I'm glad you are getting so many reviews, and the story is great.  I was very relieved nothing too terrible happened to Bella before she was rescued by Jacob and Edward - I got nervous that this story was going to get really dark.  

Your Bella continues to be very charming - and so is your Edward!

Reviewer: Ashleykh93 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

I love that Edward & Jacob are friends for once! its about time.

The kiss on the hand was sweet :')  Can't wait to see where Bella & Edward go from here.

 

Reviewer: vackie27 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

Please update! I'm obsessed!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 10: Party

i know...i liked the jake and edward bond!  hehehe!

I wanna kick tanya's ass just because I hate that character!

 

I am still loving rose and seriously...................the details she knows cold really hurt bella...I hope she doesn't hurt her or spill Bella's secrets!

HAHAHA in your face tanya!!!!

 

Reviewer: Joy Moony (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 10: Party

i just found this story and am really enjoying it thus far.  well done!

Reviewer: Daisy Mae (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: Party

Great chapter or should I say -- LIKE great chapter. LOL Tanya is just such a loser!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 6: Reason

Poor Bella. But yeah, that's the worst, being treated nicely just to be dropped cruelly later on...

I hope Edward can show her that she's worth more than that!

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