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Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
love epov hope for moorrrre chapters soooooooooon
Reviewer: EdwardianVelvet (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 10: Party
excuse my Englishness, what's Pawn 1 please ?
Author's Response: HAHA! It' a pawn store. A store you can go to sell things for cash and pick up things for even cheaper then retail prices.
Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
I have to admit, I'm loving this story more and more. You have kept me guessing, keep wondering where the plot will go next. Is Bella going to have some epiphany and go get all skinny on us? I hope not! And now that we know Edward's secret, he probably wouldn't want her to. By the way, I love that Edward and Jacob are friends! And I hate Grandpa Swan!!! But, I seriously love Rose, Alice and Emmett! Cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Koffie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
Loved the chapter. I could kind of see that he was a chubby chaser and i think more guys should be... well, maybe not be chubby chasers but just like thicker girls more in general
Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
God I hate the term "chubby chaser"...it conjurs images of an unshowered, toothless guy in a dirty wifebeater, sitting in a lawn chair with a can of Pabst in one hand and scratching himself with the other....I know, very Jerry Springer-esque (not to mention biased and sterotypical, lol). I know that isn't the real deal, but still that is what always comes to mind. All I can say is GO EDWARD!!!!
I'm loving that he isn't just attracted to her personality, but her body too. Us curvy women all need a hottie like Edward to remind us how sexy we are! lol.
Thanks for the quick updates, you rock!! And thanks to your betas for busting through them so fast!
Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
I liked the EPoV! haha kinda funny that Jake asked for the double date because Edward didn't have the guts.
So Edward has a dirty little secret he likes real women!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter !
Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
Oh wow :) I laughed out loud when he whipped out the Big N Busty! They are perfect for each other :)
Reviewer: Bones_Rocks (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
I love, love, LOVE this story!
Reviewer: neverbetagainstalice (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
Love how quickly this sotry is update! And am really enjoying reading and not having the typical high school story. Interesting in seeing how events play out
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
This is a really good story! I agree with most men prefer a real woman with curves. I was built like a boy in high school, but now how ample curves that my husband enjoys. I am the adverage size woman and I do get tired of all the fashion mags and movies that have size 0 women. This is a great story for real women! Thanks!!!!
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
So cute, he admits to being a chubby chaser! LOL!
Reviewer: sunystone (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
Great chapter! I'm hoping Edward will tell Bella how he feels about her soon!
Reviewer: kiki gum (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
hahahaha. I sooo did not see that coming. :D great chapter. update soon!
Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
i saw it comming during the food fight chapter ;)
Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
Great chapter :)
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret
Loving this story. But I wish Edward would nip Tanya in the bud once and for all. Be cruel, be harsh. That's what it is going to take. Otherwise, he can kiss Bella goodbye.
Reviewer: Sakkosekk (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
How big is Bella, really?
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
*LMAO* When Bella lost the plot over the phone and blurted out that stuff to Edward, I seriously almost choked laughing. Total second-hand mortification for her!
Grandfather Swan is a douche. Seriously, what a rude jackass - way to go Charlie for standing up to him and refusing to let him belittle Bella anymore!
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
Charlie is a great dad. Bella's grandfather is an idiot, saying things like that. And the telephone marathon was so funny!
Thanks for updating so quickly. I love this story!
Reviewer: saturnine9 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
well i get that it was taugh to write but it's good that some of your bad memories serve you on this chapter now you can look at them with new eyes and more wise ?maybe now it can help other people too!
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
Great chapter.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: reddms88 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
i hear the same things plus 1hr long lectures on dieting from my aunt...ive learned to literally zone out and just nod
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 9: Energy
Did I miss something? I must have. I remember Tanya freaking out about getting pudding on her blouse, and I remembered that they were going to the game and then to the after party, but I don't remember where James, Victoria and Laurent come into the equation. Maybe I'll have to re-read the beginning, cuz I'm totally lost.
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
So devastating, but I think will touch a lot of people...
The phone call madness at the beginning was highly entertaining :)
Your updates make me happy!!
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: Party
I do like the fact that Edward and Jacob get along. Wow, edward is just too good to be true and rose is turning out to be a pleasant surprise, too!
I hate to admit it, but I think I have Tanya's "like" disease :(
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