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Reviewer: BeccaBoo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught

I don't know which I love more... the story itself or the fact that you update so often!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught

GOD! Finally! YAY!!

Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught

Isabella Cullen?  Is that a typo or is Edward not just day-dreaming about her body?

Reviewer: sapphire (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught

Okay, was the isabella cullen thing at the end a mistake, or was it a mental slip on his part?

Love this! Keep it up! It gives us bigger girls some hope  ;-)

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 17: Fight

Great chapter. Loved how Edward took those lyrics and made them his own. He and Bella have made a connection because she feels secure enough with him to let him in. Look forward to the trip home in the car, how those moments and conversations will go. I'll bet there will be lots of sharing of the deets with Alice and Rosalie also, Bella will need to unwind with the girls. Great job, look forward to your next update.

Reviewer: lacyangel32 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught

Isabella Cullen?!?! Is he imagining her with his last name now?! OMG!!! Great story, btw! I just love the thought of a not so perfect tiny Bella! A REAL woman!

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught

I'm glad he reacted like he did. Sheneeds to see he wants her; he needs to understand why she's afraid he might not.

 

(Did you mean to write Isabella Cullen at the end?)

Reviewer: 3dawns (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught

How mortifying....it's happened to me too. 

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 16: Confession

Intense chapter.  I'm a bit surprised Bella told Edward of her past but maybe that conversation with Jeremy did the trick. Clearly she feels comfortable and safe with Edward at this point and his reaction only confirms what a decent and honourable person he is. I hope Bella can begin to take it all in and let Edward into her life more completely

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught

You are just awesome!!!!! I so know how she feels about things, as I am a large woman myself!!! He did good! I hope he keeps it up!

Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught

Totally unexpected and yet SOOO hot and sexy...and Bella went for it and kissed the hell out of him! Poor Edward's not gonna know what hit him.....LOL

Reviewer: mistybreeze (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 17: Fight

Wonderful!!

loving it.

Update soon(:

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: Departure

How brave of Bella to open up to Edward about the most painful of subjects. Thankfully he seems to understand the enormity of her candor and is giving her the time she needs to tell things her own way.

Reviewer: mistybreeze (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 16: Confession

Wow man I couldn't get On the interweb

yesterday and I could think is aaaaaaahh need you read your

story!

loving it!:)

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 14: Makeover

What a great day for Bella spent with the Cullens. I'm just sorry that Bella can't yet accept Edward's warmth and attention for what it is....but she has every right to be suspicious given her history. I'm so glad Bella has such a great friendship with Alice....you can never go wrong with her on your side.

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Shopping

Love the girl time....you couldn't ask for better friends than Alice and Rosalie. And how cool is it that Esme will reno Bella's room? Looking forward to Bella going to the concert with Edward, I'm sure they will have a blast.

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 12: Secret

I think Edward is going for the whole package and Bella more than fills the bill. If her size adds to the attraction, all the better. He may have his work cut out for him though given her history with that asshat Drake.

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

That was kind of a tough chapter to read with Bella's grandfather belittling her that way because of her weight.  Its no excuse but sometimes older people from another generation seem to have little to no filter between their brain and their mouth.  To know that Charlie endured some of the same growing up belies the basic personality of Charles....crass and insensitive. I only wish Bella could have gone on that double date.

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

Despite the drama, I think overall it turned out to be a good evening for Bella as she was able to realize that she is now becoming part of a group of friends. Loved the support from Rosalie....we don't see that side of her personality often but clearly she had an understanding of what Bella had been through. I'll say it again.....Tanya must go, she is nothing short of a leech. I hope Edward tells her in no uncertain terms to get lost.

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 9: Energy

I knew something would happen in the parking lot but somehow thought it would be Tanya doing the ambushing.  Thank goodness for Jake....never thought I'd be saying that!! LOL

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 8: Punishment

Tanya is a snake.....I hope Edward sees her for exactly what she is.

Reviewer: Stunningmisconception (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: Fight

Love the story read it all in one day can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 7: Bound

LMFAO.....food fight!  Love how Bella and Edward kind of stuck up for each other, not letting either take the full blame. And thats a shame about Tanya's one of a kind shirt being ruined NOT!

Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 17: Fight

It's going to be another month til Tru B season 3 starts in Australia at least which sucks. 

So your Bella is going to give it up.  What she needs Ed is a nice fitted football top with your number and a seat in the girlfriends area.  That and maybe a pointed discussion about the truthful attractions of a womans curvy figure and how incredibly distracting it can be.  Eyes on the ball Ed.

Reviewer: teresaellen1 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 17: Fight

Ome (oh my edward) i love this story!!! Do you think drake will show up any time?

 

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