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Reviewer: tiffanyc2 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
I really enjoy this story, this is the first time that anyone has shown another type of bella that I can relate to. Since I myself am a chunky lady lol. Thank you for letting people know that its not all about being thin and attractive all the time.
Reviewer: anonymouscsifan (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Yes I hope you update soon! I am enoying thie story very much!! More please and soon!
Reviewer: AugustaBlue (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Nakedness!!!! Gotta love nakedness! Can't wait for more. He referred to her as 'Isabella Cullen' at the end--was that intentional? Edward and Bella sittin' in a tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g.... :D
Reviewer: kaylamarieswan (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
"Isabella Cullen is my addiction"...was that intentional or is it supposed to say Isabella Swan?! Loved the chapter btw!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Ohhhhhhhhhh. That'll be an unshackable image for the poor bastard. Blue balls for weeks. Turn him into a gibbering idiot. Is Rose and Alice going to find out about it? Ed is NOT going to deal with this well.
Reviewer: lansingchick85 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Just out of curiosity was the line "Oh God, Isabella Cullen is my addiciton." done puposely as in Edward thinking of Bella with his name? Or was it suppose to be Isabella Swan?
Reviewer: gabys (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Great chapter. They are so cute.....
Reviewer: msj2779 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
"Isabella Cullen"...hmmm..Edward thinking marriage already or was that just a typo? Anyhoo...I'm so happy Bella decided to let Eddie in. Thank you thank you thank you for the quick updates. Love it!
Reviewer: Koffie (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
oh my gosh! i would have been horrified if i was bella! And wow Edward is sucha horny teen!
Reviewer: Angelfan984 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
I am a plus size girl and I am LOVING your story. Please keep writing!
Reviewer: MinaBR (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Isabella CULLEN? faux pas or has it a deeper meaning?
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Loooooved it!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
I loved that they finally kissed. They are just so adorable together.
I do have a question. What is Bella's last name? I was confused by the last line because I thought it was Swan.
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
OMG finally!!! I can't wait to see what happens from here on out. Isabella Cullen???
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
oh jeez. this was a great chapter, even with it being ridiculously too short. ;) and I know like everyone will point this out.... but you said "Isabella Cullen"...... was he thinking of marrying her already? lol
I'm totally loving how this story is shaping up and I can't wait to see how they get along with everybody around at school...
Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
I LOVE it!!!! YAY.. Thank you so much for the frequent updates!!! Your my hero. Um, seriously, you are. More please?!?
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 17: Fight
Sweet. The Jeremy and Emery characters seem a little weird to me... keep thinking Emery is a guy name... overall liked the chapter.
Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
yay they kiss!!!
great chapter. but why did he said isabella cullen?
Reviewer: iliketoread2 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
great chapter glad they got there 1st kiss and lucky Edward got to see Bella unwrapped. I guess it will only be fair if she gets her turn next. love the fast up dates
Reviewer: Tsherm (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Isabella Cullen???
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
YAY they kissed! I'm so stoked! Finally!
A little freudian slip with the Isabella Cullen comment, perhaps? ;)
Can't wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: psund123 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
You ae getting thease chapters up really fast. I love this story. I am wondering what is going to happen next
Reviewer: lisamaree1 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
another great chapter as always :)
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Wow, I know I wouldn't mind discovering Edward in my bedroom post shower while starkers!! LOL I loved how he gazed at her and just sort of took her all in like he was appreciating every inch of her....so sexy. And Bella's confidence now seems to be soaring, with the way she kissed Edward good bye, their friendship has turned the corner. Great chapter, love your story. More, please.
Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Shit!! How many times have I forgotten the towel or realized the kids have used the last one and it sits dripping wet on the floor. Had to do the nudey run down the hallway or up the stairs hoping to Christ you don't slip over and then bolting into the room to EDWARD!! Oh how I wish. To have someone say I look beautiful naked is the biggest dream I have. This is a defining chapter and takes them to a new level. I am so happy I'm sqealing like the fan girl I am for this story. You are all kinds of awesome.
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