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Reviewer: mistybreeze (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

loving the story!

Update soon!(:

Reviewer: Nikkipiper9 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

When are you going to update



Author's Response:

Next chapter is awaiting validation.

Reviewer: mtomlinson (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

That was so good! Are you going to finish it???



Author's Response:

Finish what? The lemon or the story? HAHA

Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Wow, I am really impressed by Bella's sudden brazeness.  (Is that a word?)  Um, also is this the shortest chapter ever?  Or was that my imagination??

BTW- Are we supposed to know who Aro is, did I forget something??  Just wondering.



Author's Response:

Aro is the leader of the band Volturi...and you get the explanation as to why he's there in the next chapter.

Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

I found your story yesterday and read through all the chapters!
I love it! It's interesting to read how Bella look at herself and how people treats her. I'm not chubby myself, so I can't relate to that, but as a girl I can relate too an extent about being paranoid when people stare and it looks like they are talking about you. I'm looking forward to more chapters, and I'm so glad Bella have got a much better life in Forks! She deserves it! People are so judgemental! Who cares about looks? It's the inside that counts.. And from what I get from E POV, Bella isn't exactly fat, but a bit chubby.. I wouldn't call it fat if she looks like those pictures of the models wearing the dresses you posted. They looked great!!

I have to apologize for my spelling, I'm from Norway.



Author's Response:

Well you're spelling is fabulous for a foreigner. I totally understood all of it! Thank for your support!

Reviewer: twlightforever (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

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I just found your story and it is fantastic . I love it. It is different then most stories out there. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Missy96 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 16: Confession

WOW!!!! I was born and raised in spokane and the way you wrote it was perpict. made me miss home. great righting!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

u r a tease!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sarapride (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

I am so in love with this story! It hits right up my alley.

What you are writting is me, or I should say what I went through in high school being the overweight one. I never had an Edward, but I never had Drake either thankfully!

I can't wait for future chapters!

 

 

Reviewer: Stunningmisconception (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Oooh!! They're being dangerous, I wonder how mad charlie would have been had he walked in on that!!!! I also think that the whole volturi band concept is hysterical by the way!!!! Picturing the big bad volturi brothers all emo-tastic waiting for their big break is just too much. I love this story!!! Great job!

Author's Response:

Haha thanks! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: maielle (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Wow! I really want to thank you fot this story... cause, for once, It's not about thin wowman, cause this is a bright idea, cause not every wowman in the world is a top model. And cause it's not because we can be "large" that we dont't deserve love... so thanks. (and sorry, cause I'm french, and my english is soooo bad and will never express my feelings).



Author's Response:

I understand! And thank you for reading and reviewing! It means so much to me!

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Really good!

Reviewer: Cullenist (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Edward's reaction to Tanya ~ priceless. Especially the throwin-her-jackett-in-the-closet moment :)

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Very good and steamy loved the hit to Tanya. More please soon.

Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Perfect, lovely, bitchy, spectacular, breathless, warm, funny. Loving it.

Reviewer: stellar128 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

bella got off! wooooo! lol

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

I was all jumping around yelling WOOHOO because they were starting to get somewhere... and then stupid Aro had to walk in and kill myu victory dance.  :(  I hoe he isn't a bad guy in this story, but I never trust him.



Author's Response:

HAHA yay for happy dances! As for Aro, I guess we'll see.

Reviewer: Evie Lynn (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Secret

I love Chubby Chasers! My Hubby is one. Totally t&a man. lol great story so far.

Reviewer: blueeyedbella (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Your the best. This chapter was AMAZING

Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 25: Talk

LOL the infamous talk...OMG LOL I love your story cause in almost every chapter you find a way to take me back to the most hilarious moments of my life

Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 24: Interrupted

LOL been caught a couple of times too...it was mortifying then, but now I look back and those kind of scenes are just hilarious LOL

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

very very good chapter keep up the graet work and post

bye bye

Reviewer: InThisTwilight (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Great Chapter. - Mel

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

:D daw. 

So cute!

Reviewer: livin_it (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Haha Edward sure does know his dress design! So loving this story. =)

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