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Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 23: Proclamation
Oh no! Did you get tarred & feathered for that last chapter? Grumpy readers.
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
Why does Charlie look irritated?
Why do the last 2 chapter end with Aro??
Sigh - so many questions!
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 18: Caught
Lusty Edward that loves rubenesque women. Yum.
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 15: Departure
Well, whether he wants to know, he should know. Perhaps, then he can avoid some pitfalls.
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
I wish I could feel more tolerant towards Tanya, like Bella is trying but I still want to kill her. Hope she is over and out for this story but you never know with her. Loved how attentive Edward is towards Bella, can't wait for her to take care of his needs. Great story, please update soon.
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 14: Makeover
Lovely.
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 7: Bound
smiles for your chapter.
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 6: Reason
Poor sweetie. She needs a hug. Most teen guys are scum. Not all, but most.
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 5: Project
Well, we really don't know yet. Is he brave enough to stand against peer pressure. I'm certain we'll get to see.
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 4: Biology
I don't mind seeing both sides. True, 50 chapters of it can be monotonous, but having both here & there adds to the character development. Write it how it comes.
I do enjoy E noticing her skin, her lips, her BRAIN. Excellent thus far, moving on.
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 2: Acquaintances
Sigh. I an eternally greatful that HS was nearly 20 years ago for me. I was a cup size D and a jean size 6 in HS. A 6 should never be considered overweight, but in some circle I was. My daughter is a C cup and a size 13. I dare anyone to call her fat! She is beautiful and well proportioned. She'll never be a size 2 and frankly, I wouldn't want her to.
Currently a size 18. Guess, I'll never meet those skinny standards....I think I'll survive. You keep writing what you're writing. These stories are few and far between.
Reviewer: Pigmy (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
Relative sometimes are like that, my dad is one of those He always has to say somethingh unplesant about everything :<
Thanks for sharing your experience with us :>
Reviewer: msj2779 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
Cute chapter! It would have been funny though if Edward would have pulled Charlie's name. Charlie would have LOVED the charm bracelet. LOL!
I'm pretty confused about Aro. Did I miss where he's been mentioned earlier in the story? I know i read it kind of fast and I'm in the middle of about 30 diff. fan fics. SORRY! Anyhoo, he's def. up to no good. Hopefully, Tanya is out of the way but I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of James.
Reviewer: hart_of_ice (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
I am totally addicted to this story. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
fantastic chapter.
Reviewer: sarahbailey (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
LOVE IT....... Please keep going
cheers sarah
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
Aww that was cute!!!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
I loved Bella's gift. It was perfect.
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
Oooh.....that present from Edward was sooo sweet :) What on earth is Bella going to do now, knowing that she just pulled Aro's name out and that the names won't match up later if she claims she pulled out Edward's name?
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone
Wow....damn...Bella let go with Edward and it was him that was holding back from the physical interaction. Her responding queries about his needs made me giggle, especially when he informed her that he'd taken care of everything before she'd even arrived. *L*
I hate Tanya. That is all. :)
Reviewer: 2journey (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
okay....i'm lost...what is the deal with Aro? I must have missed something? Help!
Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
I love Edward so much!!! He is too cute with the whole name in his hand thing and the charm bracelet was a perfect gift.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
Great chapter.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: Eaglerise (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
I happened upon this story and stayed up all night reading it. It is really good. I am intrigued to see what's up Aro's sleeve!!!
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts
keep up the graet work and post soon
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