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Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 13: Shopping

wish I had a shopping trip like that LOL

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 12: Secret

I didn't think that was his secret LOL...good one.

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

Yeah....grandparents....I had a grandmother that loved to sit and have milk and cookies and conversations with her granddaughter, except she always told me to go outside and wait while she did this with my cousins. Never could figure out what I ever did that made her hate me so much...finally just chalked it up to her having issues and it was her loss not getting to know the incredible me. :)

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 10: Party

I like that you have Edward and Jacob friends. It is refreshing.

Reviewer: Cullen_xoxo (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts

Hey, i've been followin this story for a while now--but always on my fone so i cudnt review--anyways jus wanted to say FABULOUS!!! seriously this story is really really good--i love your ideas and how Bella is not a size zero(like in every other story) i jus think that recently the chapters hav too much makin out (lol) it would b nyc if u skipped the makin out for atleaast one chapter cuz i lyk wher the story is goin!!! anyways best of luck on the rest of the story and again you ROCK!! i'll b followin it, so update fast please :D xoxo



Author's Response:

Yeah the making out is slowing down....it was only rhere because they had 2 months of making out to catch up on. You'll see in chapter 28 that they're going to start working back up on their relationship rather then their intimacy. More dates with less steam! Promise!

Reviewer: Cullenist (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts

Wow those handcuffs...that would be so embarrasin :P! tehee!

 

I wonder whats up with Aro... oooh dear...

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

both! lol

Reviewer: Lechanteur (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 10: Party

i'm still only part way through reading your story, but just wanted to say that its nice to read a story where Bella isn't a size 2!

 

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Energy

I was expecting Edward....you threw me LOL

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 8: Punishment

hmmm wonder what Edward said to Tanya

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 7: Bound

ha ha funny chapter

Reviewer: 101779KS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts

I thought this chapter was sweet. The charm bracelet sounds very pretty.

 I'm a little wary though that Tanya might try to pull something before the night ends.

Thanks for updating

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts

Good stuff... should be rather interesting.... I love the bracelet ;)

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reason

Drake is a jerk!!!!

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 4: Biology

Ahh and Bella throws Edward a curve ball by not playing his game.

Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts

Aro???? LAAAAAAMEEEEETOOOOWWWWNNNN :P Excited for the long chapter that's comming!

Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alone

Well if only we could have all meet someone who was willing to forgo their own please at that age. Look forward to more.

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: Lunch

great chapter

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 2: Acquaintances

Hmmmm wonder what he said

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Arrival

interesting



Author's Response:

:) thanks!

Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts

Bleck last chapter. Oh well. Guess I'll just patiently wait for another update.

Reviewer: kschelte (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts

Man why would you leave it there?? I am very happy that you have updated so quickly..I hope it continues :)

Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 25: Talk

Been there done that. I only have one more to have. And I agree, personal experiences are way off limits unless requested for a specific example. Those being medically related for the most part. With 3 girls, 2 of them developing early and having larger then average chests, the "talk" was an early requirement. Neither of them look their age. (shakes head in despair)

Personal experiences aside, your Charlie's great!

 

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 27: Gifts

Like it!

Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 24: Interrupted

Cute. I could share some stories, but won't.

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