I just started reading this story, and I have to say I love it! Seeing Nessie grow up around Jake and everyone, and seeing their relationship blossom was really good! And I really liked it when the Pack, the whole tribe, accepted the Cullens in as a part of their own family! That was amazing!

Ugh, Nahuel, and Caius too... I just want to strangle him/them, if only that would do any good to a vampire. And how in the world can Nahuel speak to Nessie like that, or is that something he recieved from his little experiments; and it also seems that he and that creepy seeing chick (sorry, I forgot her name) can work together, how? Poor Alec though, I really do feel sorry for him right now.

Wow, this story has taken some weird turns when it comes to emotions and feeling about certain Volturi members, and even Nahuel. You've done a really great job in creating them again! I'm glad that the Cullens, Aro and Marcus, and the Denali's are able to work together on this.

Poor Colin. I can't believe it. I hope they are able to keep everyone safe in LaPush now, and that Carlisle, Edward, Bella and Eleazar can find some way to counteract with whatever venomized weapon Nahuel comes up with and decides to attack with... better yet, I really hope they don't get the chance to even use them on the wolves.

Oh, and a few things I noticed about certain abilities. Edward can read every mind, with the exception of Bella; so wouldn't he be able to see when Nessie has these visions and hears Nahuel without having her share them through her gift? And Alec was able to see some sort of vision or whatever?? His power was sensory depravation, so wouldn't that mean that with the experiment having backfired on him, he would be able to sence whatever he was doing to his victims instead? Not that I'm complaining, just a little confused, but it's a good thing that someone at least knows what Nahuel's plan really is, and Caius too. But I also find it weird that Aro never knew what Caius was planing, or thinking.... did they never touch when this plan was actually formed so that Aro never knew, since he knows every thought that has done throuh a person's mind with a single touch?

Keep up the great writing, and I can't wait to see what happens next!! I really hope you'll update again soon!

Author's Response:

Wow what an awesome review. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. To recieve update notifications put the story on your favorites and you will get e-mail notices. I will explain why Aro did not know and a few of the other things as well. Thanks again. PLease keep reading and reviewing.

I agree with you totally, it explained why Jake could never say goodbye to Bella.  loved the chapter, I can't wait for more!

Take care, Dixie

Author's Response:

Thank you for the vote of confidence. It just made such sense to me, because if he had been in love with Bella it would not have just poofed, even Sam still had feelings for Leah. I thought it explained it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, more to come soon.

Great chapter!!!

I reread this chapter and now I really hate Nahuel...

I'm dying here for another update... :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, Nahuel isn't the nicest of guys. He is a bit obsessed and feels entitled, not an attractive personality trait. Thanks for the review, Please keep reading and reviewing.

i love this story, i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much. Please keep reading and reviewing.

Very cool, very sad about Colin. You got Nahuel's demonic craziness across very well.

Author's Response:

Yes, but I thought if I had to kill a character it would have to be a minor one. Couldn't part with my faves.

This chapter is amazing!!!!!

Great chapter!!!

I loved this chapter!!!

Poor Jake lol

This's beautiful!

Great chapter!!!!

Wow... This chapter is amazing!

I loved how you wrote about the legends... awesome!

You're an incredible writer!

I really liked your story so I'm going to review both sites :)

Author's Response:

Awwww. Thank you. That is so very sweet.