Hi again! :)

I just finished this story and it was totally brilliant! I mean the characters were totally in character, a trait that some canonical stories tend to overlook, and yet your creativity gave them a completely fresh feel. :) Jake and Nessie's story here made me alternatively sniffle and laugh as Nessie and everyone around her is put through the wringer of an extraordinary childhood. I also LOVED your treatment of the relationship between Bella, Edward and Jake, you let a relationship that has all the makings of awkwardness develop and retain the uniqueness it deserves, as Bella and Edward perfectly balance themselves in their dual identities as Nessie's parents and Jake's friends. :)

All in all, thank you for another brilliant story and please update the duke and the dove soon! ;)

 

p.s. I'm starting The Courtesan tomorrow and so see you on the other side! :)

Author's Response:

Wow! I am humbled by your words. My whole thought behind this story was that I so loveed the characters that I wanted the story to continue. Had I not maintained their integrity I would have veiwed it as a complete failure and might never have written again.

 

Thank you for validating my efforts.

 

Hope you like Courtesan, it is completely different than this one, but I did so love it.

its wonderful!!!! i just luv this chapter,but you should've written something about jake and nessie's honeymoon.

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it.

this ws sooooo good! well worth stying up for!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am thrille that you liked it. it was my very first fic. I have another one now posting "Cortesan." I hope you check it out.

*sniff*....wow....*sniff*

Author's Response:

:) (hands you a handkerchief)

poor edward. this would kill me

 

Author's Response:

He is a stronger man than most for sure.

I greatly enjoyed your story. Thank you for writing it!

Author's Response:

Oh thank you! I am thrilled that you liked it. I have a new one posting "Cortesan" you might want to check it out.

I really and truly love this! Its a very realistic presentation of the relationship between Jake and Ness, and of how being g an 'in-between' must feel. great work!

Aww, I love this. I must admit to initially being a bit creeped out by Jake and Renesmee, but you do a perfect job of making their relationship just... make sense. Excellent work, now I'm off to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I have just always believed that 'Imprinting" was such a beautiful concept. I hope you continue to enjoy.

So far I think this is a really awesome story.  I really love the family dynamic you have created.  And I am extremely interested in what happens next.  To see what Nessie will be and what she and Jacob will be  It's going to be awesome!

Great job!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. It was a true labor of love.

 

Please continue to send your feedback.

 

Wow, there are no words at the moment but give me a minute, they may come eventualy

Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it. Please continue to read and review.

As always, your story is entrancing - keep writing!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am thrilled that you like it.

Oh please continue! This tory has kept me from my RL, but I don't care!

Author's Response:

I am continuing, stay tuned it will be updated this week. Thank you for the support.