Always wondered what was goiung through Edward's mind, as he prepared to go "public" that day. Bella knew instinctively, that he had a sneaking hunch that there was Heaven, even for vampires. That girl knows her man, doesn't she?

wow only three 3 chapters but it's enough to amaze.

pls tell when will i read the next chapter ?

Author's Response:

uhmm... maybe a week-ish? thanks for reviewing :))

xx mb

I loved the part where Bella threw the tree branch at Emmett. And the straitjacket. lol.

This makes me all teary!  When Jasper talks about it in Eclipse I cry every time.

Now, that I like! Well done! It was sweet to see their meeting done this way :D

Great piece of fluff about Alice waiting for the perfect man to finally arrive into the diner.  Love at first sight for both of them.  Loved Alice's greeting about his making her wait so long.  Then his southern drawl apology.  So sweet and tender.

ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!    they are just so perfect

every time i read new moon end up crying....sooooooooo yeah i cry again....good job....:) :(

Jesus! I've read a couple of other stories of this scene from Edward's pov (some good - Dark Side of the Moon - and some not so good) and it doesn't matter how many times I read it, I'm still wrecked! Its worse, I think, reading it from his pov. Anyway, I've read most all of your stories and I think you're so talented! I can't wait to read the next chapter of this story...which I think is a FANTASTIC idea btw! I loved the first chapter...her running, throwing trees, the straightjacket...too funny! Hurry and give us another chapter! Lol!

Love the premise of having a collection of oneshots. It gives you a lot of freedom to play around with the characters in different parts of the timeline.

I think you did well with the aftermath of the breakup. I could see Edward falling to his knees perfectly in my mind. It's not a "great" moment, in that it's incredibly sad, but you kept Edward very true to character. I've read a lot of post-breakup EPOVs before, and this one was not very well. I like how you had Edward lash out at Jasper. Everyone was so damned accpeting of what happened with Bella, but in his grief, it makes perfect sense for Edward to turn on his brother.

I hope this review made sense; I'm completely exhausted, but I hate to leave you some love because I understand what you're saying...There's nothing more annoying than a really disproportonate number of reads to reviews! Well done, and looking forward to more soon!!

So good!!!!! This is exactly what I thought would be running through his head! Great job :)

~Madelyn xx

Very sad.  Emotional.  Heartbreak.  It felt like my heart was being torn away from me.  The pain Edward was suffering at the loss of Bella.  He turned away from her to protect her dispite the pain he would endure for all time.  I can understand his anger at Jasper for making the step necessary in his mind.  But the combined grief of Alice and Esme along with Edward was too much to bear.  I cried throughout the entire piece myself.

I like it-  looking forward to the rest.