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Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 02:42 AM · On: Incomparable Them

Woah, wasn't expecting Alice. Cool. Can't wait to see where this goes! :)

Reviewer: rindycella (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 12:21 AM · On: Incomparable Them

Not sure why I'm always into the prep-school vibe, but once again, I find myself caught. I really enjoyed this--can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: EmilyCullen (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 06:02 PM · On: Incomparable Them

Well, that was a shocker. I was expecting Bella. I'm sure you wanted us to do that. Great first chapter. Look forward to more. :)--Emily

Reviewer: HollyElizabeth (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 05:11 PM · On: Incomparable Them

Haha! I thought it was Bella's point of view but I guess I was wrong. ;P I'm still confuse about the girl on the piano . . . What's exactly is wrong with her again? Did she get raped? Anyways, I'm enjoying the first chapter so far and continue ASAP!

Reviewer: Goo82 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 05:04 PM · On: Incomparable Them

Ha! threw an Alice shocker in there.

Reviewer: MidnightSunsLove (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 04:57 PM · On: Incomparable Them

Wow... Threw me for a loop with her being Alice! I automatically assumed it was Bella! Can't wait to see where this is going :D

Reviewer: Rachxox7 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 04:19 PM · On: Incomparable Them

Oh big shocker at the end. I did not see that coming at all. I so thought it was Bella. Now I am wondering what is Bella's role in this story.

Reviewer: nicole37 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 03:38 PM · On: Incomparable Them

Ooh... I'm definatly hooked!

I thought the whole chapter was about Bella... and then bam, it's Alice.

Can't wait for more and to see where this story goes! 

Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 02:58 PM · On: Incomparable Them

Oh, I wasn't expecting Alice... Nice twist. Next chapter please.

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