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Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 09:18 PM · On: What happens to potential deferred?
I wanna know!! Who is it? Oh god, please update soon! Don't keep me in suspense!
Reviewer: SiDEADde (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 07:40 PM · On: What happens to potential deferred?
Football games in the rain blow.
I need more Emmett and Alice.
Ah the intrigue....
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 07:38 PM · On: What happens to potential deferred?
It's so Jasper isn't it?
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Stain of Honesty
And the mystery builds...
And Emmett is being a weird douche--but Eddo is too.
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chess Master
Gah. That was really well done.
Dirty, even raunchy.
And really well done.
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chess Master
Gah. That was really well done.
Dirty, even raunchy.
And really well done.
Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 06:53 PM · On: What happens to potential deferred?
AHHH!!!! Who is it!!!!!!????? Update soon!
Reviewer: eroticfan (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 06:32 PM · On: What happens to potential deferred?
FUCK! Another cliffie you mean person. Riveting stuff as usual but I'm sad for Alice on her b-day.
Loved the Jax interchange. He's hot dammit and I want Alice to fuck him. Might detention get a bit Saturday Schoolish? Is it Jax Rosalie's glued to? Damn, she gets all the good ones, the bitch.
Reviewer: jonquilemm (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 06:17 PM · On: What happens to potential deferred?
Hot damn, you know how to cliffhang a gal, dont'cha? Really enjoying this story, can't wait to find out what's next!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Stain of Honesty
Hmmmm...shit just keeps gettin deeper and Rosalie is turning out to be one helluva slutty bitch. It does piss me off however, that Edward is blaming the fact that he dipped with no wrap all on Rose. That''s just fucked up. He's just as much as fault as her, the little whore. But from the way it sounds, she did do that shit on purpose. So, whatever for? That bitch is up to some shit, and I have a feeling it's pretty fuckin epic. So Edward should squirm, that'll teach his cocky ass. And poor Alice, she needs RUN!!! Far away from those messed up mind fuckers. So far, her and Emmett's the only two that seem to be worth a damn.(when he's not bein an asshat, ofcourse) Can't wait to see what kind of twisted shit these kids come up with. Evil little asscrackers.
Reviewer: eroticfan (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Stain of Honesty
Yes, where is she? Is it a revenge mission if she's not fucking the boys? Hmmm. Love all the intrigue and game-playing, and Alice ordering those two boys around is very cool. Drunk Edward was hot.
Loved:
"Alice, shouldn't you be in the library or something?"
"Edward, shouldn't you be expelled for stealing keys, drinking underage, and stealing from other students?"
Why did E nick Rose's panties? Suspect it was mostly habit since he happened to be in her drawers anyway.
Looking forward to the next part.
Reviewer: Simi (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Stain of Honesty
aarrggg!! holy hell woman, youre killing me! ') youre such a killer writer! i gotta say, i hit the sauce pretty hard on a regular, but every nite(occasioannly morning) i coime home and force my bleary eyes to focus long enough on this shit looking for am update!! great story and characters, and i can relate to ms rosalie on a heavy scale back in my un'glorious' days. pleasse keep it comin darlin, and well done!! happy new year!
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Stain of Honesty
Oh, it was definitely NOT poo! Ironically though, it's the SHIT! :D I do have one question though. WTF is up with 14-15 year olds wearing stiletto's in school?! Just why?!
I just love this Alice characterization - GRRRRR!! You go girl! And Edward? I know this may sound strange, but I find him to be crass in a sophisticated way (and that must be some hard shit to write so I give you some serious props). I'm glad Alice got a few answers for a change even if it wasn't as many as she wanted. I know his current condition isn't conduscive to it, but I sure hope Emmett removes the chastity belt (with Alice) soon. *wink*
Thanks so much for posting this awesome story! More asap, please?
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Stain of Honesty
Oh my oh my... she's not with Royce, is she?
Bella?
VERY interesting. Very intriguingly written!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Stain of Honesty
Oh my oh my... she's not with Royce, is she?
Bella?
VERY interesting. Very intriguingly written!
Reviewer: NyteRock (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Stain of Honesty
Gah! The tension/banter/fucking PLOT is ridiculously crazy and I absolutely fucking LOVE IT!
Reviewer: gemma (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Stain of Honesty
This is getting good! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: moonlipse (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Stain of Honesty
ahh!! Great chapter! I loved it! Update sooooon! =)
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Stain of Honesty
Oh dear, I'm very worried about Rosalie now. I didn't think about Royce. Edward's playing some master game where I am apparently much too stoopid to understand the nuances of. And I'm dying to meet the "public school dyke" that is referenced here. Loved Alice schooling the two boys. They so needed it. I thought it was sweet how Emmett went to Alice when he was feeling as bad as he did, that shows something here.
Reviewer: Simi (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Incomparable Them
incredible. intricate. shirtless jasper. full of hot sex. the only way this could get any better is another chapter!! PLEASE! lol, awesome work babe!
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 09:13 PM · On: Chess Master
That was absolute devious HOTNESS! I'm not into girl on girl, but I could handle that. And what an interesting way to introduce Bella into the story. ;) I was wondering when it was going to happen and how. I loved Rosalie turning things around on Edward and manipulating the situation to her advantage after Edward humiliated her. I'm sure Edward will get her back somehow, some way, but this was sweet payback for her for now.
This story obviously has a familiar plotline, but I like your twist on it...a lot! Please post more soon! Thanks bb. :B
Author's Response: girl on girl has never been much of a turn on for me either, which is why i wanted to make it not every guy's wet dream, you know? I wanted it to be a power play gone wrong.
Edward doesn't appreciate it. Nor does he deal with it very well.
Thanks so much for reading and enjoying. Makes my day!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 02:13 PM · On: Chess Master
Well, shit, Bella's performance..er..sucked. And Edward, he's just a horny little f*** isn't he. Kinda harsh shit throwing Bella out. But it seems that she's just Edward's whore anyway, which apparently he has quite a few. I'm curious of his thoughts on the scene, escpecially since he just blew a load in Rose. Drama. drama, drama. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!
Author's Response: lol, Edward's not dealing with the latest developments very well. And maybe, just maybe, Alice will shut down his days of whoring...
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lambTOslaughter (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 09:56 AM · On: Incomparable Them
I love this story!! Your version of Edward is totally hot, and I personally like the dynamic between him and Rosalie. I think it is hilarious that they are both such a-holes that they can't even stand giving the other the satisfaction of knowing they were able to "please" each other. I loved when Rose noticed the look on Edward's face when his brain caught up with what his body was doing. hahahaha. guys think they can get the best of us but it is very rare. Anyways, is Jasper going to be in the story or just the brother? just curious. =)
Author's Response: you are so right on about the R/E dynanmic I want to hug you!!!!
and yes, Jasper does appear in the future. Not the immediate future unfortunately...what the hell was I thinking?
Reviewer: thatgirljen (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 07:06 AM · On: Chess Master
I really do like this story, but seriously what is the deal with Rosalie getting all the lovin? I feel like its obvious that Edward esp doesnt really like Rosalie as a person, which has nothing to do with sex, but I feel like he had a weird connection with Alice in that piano room at least yet she gets none at all. I know there is a bet and emmett gets first dibs but it seems like they arent even really interested in her that way at all, exept when she is right in front of them, and even them there is hesitation.
Author's Response: I really like your insight into the E/R relationship because it's true. We see a bit more of Edward's motive in the coming chapter and then there's finally a bit of a break through with the E/A dynamic. Hang in there!
And thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: eroticfan (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 12:54 AM · On: Chess Master
I like her revenge being a raw fuck for germophobic Edward, plus making him lose control. Man, they're all such game-players except Bella it's hard to know what's real with them - Rose and Edward being the uberdouches. And of course her pusher would be Royce - I'd forgotten about him. Nice.
Author's Response: lol, i have some sort of weird obsession with making Edward a germaphobe. I don't know why. But I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks so much for reviewing! You made my day!
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