Oh I did not see that coming. Rose, really?

Author's Response:

Yes, Really.  I found it to be a circular twist, but with any twist, there's another one coming in the future.  Don't get too attached to the idea  :)

 

Thanks!

wow....

 

what a revelation!

i can't believe its only Thanksgiving... I feel like so much had happened.

I almost don't feel sorry for Rose now. I mean, i do... she's got a friggen messed up life, but dang. Thats still more than any one person should be forced to handle.

and Alice. oy vey. Alice. God, she should have told Emmett yes, despite the crude imagery, or jumped into bed with Whitlock waaay sooner. He really could be a sweety if he's just stop the piercing blows... but then again, i don't think thats gonna happen... :) I'm enjoying the story. can't wait for more updates...

Author's Response:

Ah!!!

 

My timing is crazy...it's a major weakness in my writing.  I forget to advance the days that pass.

 

Sigh. 

 

Oh well, I've come up with a way to balance some of that out.  It doesn't affect the plot at all.

 

Yes, it's a tightrope with Rose, isn't it?  She's brassy and hateful and yet she's stuck in a helluva situation. 

 

Alice will have to make a choice, and soon.  If only because I can't stand the waffling. 

 

Thanks for the review!

I offense but I really hate the idea of Edward having feelings for Rosalie. The thought of them together romantically just makes me ill. Alice and Emmett would be kind of ok together, but for some reason, to me at least, It doesnt seem like Alice really feels strongly for either Emmett or Edward. Is this where Jasper comes in? Im guessing, that Jasper is Rosalies brother that Edward called for her. Thanks for explaining a little better the relationship that Bella and Edward have. I was really wondering about that. If this whole Edward and Rosalie thing gets explained further, I would really like to know what on earth he sees in her, how his feelings came to be in the first place and how the hell he could get so caught up in the "moment" to whisper her name instead of Alice. God that would really suck to be Alice.

Author's Response:

No offense taken.

 

I'm personally am not a R/Ed shipper (unless EXTREMELY well written), but the reason that I added that in is because it uncovers anothr layer of Edward's character, which will be dissected in upcoming chapters.

 

And Jasper is actually NOT Rose's brother, he's actually Jax's brother.  And I can't tell you how he enters, only that he's coming soon.  And per usual, there is a twist.  

No worries about Alice.  She'll bounce back.

 

She always does.

wooo hooo. :) I just started reading your fic today, (well, i also just signed up for twilighted today as well... so yea, ) but i swooned at Emmetts little monologue at the end there.

I'm really enjoying the non-canon pairings. ( i really always have, they add adventure to a story line than can get overworked)

And in all honesty, if anyone said anything like that to me in real life, i'd probably kick their pretentious arse into next year. But I like to live a little (or a lot) in my fantasy world, mostly through Twilight, and I'm really impressed so far. Can't wait to keep reading. :)

Oh this story is just so gut-wrenching and angsty and emotional... I love it!! You write it so well, I am just so drawn right into everything. I was giddy when I saw there was an update. Great job, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Why thank you!  I'm so happy I can make other people happy just by letting my crazy imagination run wild!

What Alice?  You are definitely a tricky one.   You fooled me I absolutely thought the person's POV was Bella.  I can't wait to see what you've done next so on to the next chapter.

WOW. Glad to see Alice and Edward finally had good sex! :) Been reading this for a while and finally got to the last chapter. I was SO sure Jackson was going to be the one that Alice eventually hooked up with, not because they are a canon pairing but just because their exchanges are hot and a bad boy like Jackson is hard to resist! :)

This story is very unique and I love how you reveal thiings. Can't wait to read more... I fear a little for Rosalie, what she may do to herself after the Carlisle/Connor discovery and having no friends to turn to... hopefully Alice will be there for her.

DAYUM!  That was some hot shit between the two of them!  A nice slow burn (all the way home in the car) followed by frantic sex (wanting to kick the door in) is such an effing turnon.

And I absolutely loved Alice ball punching Jasper!  That's the kind of stuff I wish I thought about at the right time, but never do. :)

You have made Alice a hero of some sorts for me.  She's doing the best she can under some adverse circumstances at times.  I adore her!

Thanks for posting again and I'm looking forward to more...soon, please?!

you are INCREDIBLE! and i'm sorry i haven't been reviewing more :P I've been really REALLY busy for the past months. but i hate it when people say that to me, so....yeah you get the picture :D your chapters get better and better each time i read them i think. i was ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT that entire arguement between alice and jax. you have no idea how much i want them to hook up........ALOT. :P tee hee. and also, when emmett saved her THAT was incredible. Because I've been wondering what happened ot him and then it was like BAM.

Great great GREAT job. I'm looking forward to your next chapter so much. <3 SHesDiabolical

W.O.W.  And I'm not talking World of Warcraft either.

You don't know how giddy I was this morning when my phone beeped signifying I had a new email alerting me to a new chapter.  I read it at work on my lunch break and honestly, I am so bummed that I did because I wish I were reading this in the privacy of my apartment so I could laugh out loud and swoon audibly LOL.  Alice's entire exchange with Jackson was a peculiar ball of hotness, repulsiveness, assholery and hilarity all in one.  Mostly hot though.  I SO WANT THEM TO HOOK UP...lol.  Pure comedy when she punched him in the balls though.

And neat freak Edward tossing her shirt into the hamper?? LMAO.

i keep wanting to turn away. your story is like porn on a tv screen of the frat party you just walked into. You really dont want to watch but you can't help it. and then you tell yourself your just watching to see whats going on. i cant like your story because you dont do edward and bella. i have read bella jaspers and even liked them. I never like the edward and alice's. I want to turn away from this story because it doesnt look like your ever going to do canon. i guess i really like your writing. i guess i really like your alice and im waiting for her to find her true love. i dont think its edward and i hate your edward. literally...cant stand him. hes a reason not to read your story. but i do love your alice and in a way i love your rosalie too. shes confused and messed up but shes a good characterization. Ok, now for my theory...Jackson is jasper. The reason why he harasses alice and her "hicktown" ways is because he knows those are his roots. He likes her because she is him. He is her soul mate.

sorry i was being so honest but i just felt like you should know that even though i am so conflicted. i still read. like an addict.

It makes me laugh so much that Edward just cant seem to last, lol. Whats the deal with that anyway? He was Mr Hot sex with Rosalie and Bella when they had their threesome. Why cant he do it with Alice? I know they said she is little, so Im guessing pretty tight, but really, could it be that bad? Im also guessing the girl in the bad clothes that night was Bella. Alice doesnt know what she looks like. I still think he is probably fucking Bella.