omg!!!

such a good ending!!!

write quickly!!

weakkk.

that was so weak.

I love this story,it always makes me laugh

brilliant chapter - the scene with them all walking through the school was perfectly done and really summed up the theme of the story.

you did a great job of making Rose seem more vulnerable and likeable than she had seemed in a while. i love grungy Bella and her telling Rose some home-truths.

the thing I love most about this story though, is that everything isn't spelled out for us. we never really know the whole truth and that level of complexity is rare in fics.

 

 

Thanks for a great chapter.

wowww...

haha

really confused about who's POV is where!

I was so, so excited and happy to see an update!!  Hmmm...Rosalie finally starting to clue into Edward's feellings??  I would love to read a chapter about Em and Alice, especially after the ending of the previous chapter!  I really like those two together.  Can't wait for more....hurry, hurry ;)

wow....i just read your story, i've actually been reading it all day and that's hard to do on a cell phone. i'm speechless! this story is great i'm so happy that alice is finally going after her knight in shining whatever lol thanks for this great story...i'll be looking out for an update

Author's Response:

Wow, on a cell phone!  That's crazy...thanks for reading and thanks for reviewing!

Well HELL! I can't WAIT for more... and WOW... I like Jasper! ALOT! LOL I feel REAL REAL bad for Edward though. *sighs*

Author's Response:

It's a tough balancing act with three guys and only two girls!  I'm so happy you like Jasper, I was really nervous after waiting this long to introduce him. 

 

Update this weekend! 

 

Thanks!

This was very interesting.  I almost stopped reading when you realize in the first chapter that its Alice speaking and not Bella.  But the unconventional aspects of the story are intriquing.  I am enjoying it.  Very well written too.

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you continued on!  Maybe you'll end up being a non-canon fan :) 

 

Thanks!

After submitting the review at ff.net I forgot to mention some important stuff, so here's review #2!

I am LOVING the Alice/Rosalie friendship!  They are too perfect for each other (as friends) :P  I love how Rose is opening up to Alice and how Alice is putting others aside to be there for Rose.  She's even trying to accept her relationship with the pervfessor.  Oh and I LOLed when Alice said pervfessor!!!!  Awesome!   I also liked Rose's story, though I had guessed most of it from pervious chapters, it's nice to see it in one nice lump. 

I also love that Alice got to rock her new outfit!  And metaphorically punched Lauren in the balls!  Bwhahaha!  And what the hell is a prig?! LOL

And I loved that Jasper stopped Lauren from doing anything.  *sigh* He's going to be the death of me or Alice someday.  Are they going to start flirting like Alice and Jax were?  How would Jax take that?  Or how would Jax respond if he walked in on Alice giving Jasper head when he couldn't get that from her?! LOL *sigh* sorry, ignore my daydreams of Jasper and have a good spring break!

P.S. I got a box of Thin Mints from a friend this weekend and it made me think of this fic.  I'm not obsessed or anything..... :D

Author's Response:

Review #2 = you are the pimp daddy of feedback, the rockstar of reviews.  AKA: my favorite person ever 

 

Alice gets OUT of said rocking outfit in two chapters, so keep an eye out for that!  And a prig is "someone who shows an inordinately zealous approach to matters of form and propriety; especially where the prig has the ability to show his/her superior knowledge to those who don't know the protocol."  I had to look that shit up; i had only ever heard it used in the context of cheesy historical romance novels (which I, embarrassingly enough, love). 

 

As for the Jasper/Alice/Jax sandwich, that will also be in the cards for coming chapters.  So much to write, so little time to write it in!

 

AHHH!  THIN MINTS...I'm at work and I destroyed my GS cookies order the moment I got them (like a week ago) and now I'm craving them all over again...

 

You deserve an award for being soo awesome.  If I knew ANYTHING about photoshop, I would make you one. Will you settle for a Burger King crown instead?

<3 <---- Look after my heart, I've left it with you. LMAO... I was just going to say that you have my heart with this fic but decide to cheesify it up.

I've already gotten pretty bored with my other top 2 favorites so you my dear are my #1.  I literally crave updates to this story.

Funny how I initially said that Alice/Emmett is hot, but then really wanted Jax and Alice, and then feel a bit of heartfail anytime I think about Edward having feelings for Rosalie instead of Alice, but then Jasper's introduced and want them together naturally... ROFL.  I just want everyone to love Alice and for Alice to love everyone.  That's not asking too much is it?

Author's Response:

Bwahahaha, I adore the cheddah.  I truly do.

 

I'm number 1???  You like me, you really like me???  Sarcasm aside, that's so awesome.  I can't even begin to tell you how much that made me grin when I read that.

 

I just want everyone to love Alice and for Alice to love everyone.  That's not asking too much is it?

 

 

LOL.  Not at all.  There might be one-shots/alternative endings after this story ends, because I know how you feel.  Plus, Jasper deserves some lemons...just because he does.

 

THanks for being so amazing and reviewing like a rockstar!

Aaaamazing chapter. Now I'm just hoping that her brilliant speech doesn't get shot to shit with Jasper. Those sweet talking southerners are always a bit of a problem..:)

Author's Response:

They are, aren't they?  Many a good woman has been brought to her knees (WOW) by a sweet talking southern cowboy. ...but not this time around :)

 

Thanks!