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Reviews For The Elite
Reviewer: linsers (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Epilogue

I don't usually review but I just have to say thank you for a great story! I read the entire thing in about two days... which means I'm lacking a little in the sleeping department :) Thanks again! You're amazing!

Reviewer: 01dani (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Epilogue

Itruly loved this story!! Its the reason im always on ff, seeing if there is a update. You are an amazing writer!!

 

thanks for being awesome!!

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Epilogue

Sequel ! Sequel ! I *heart* your Edward !!

 

 

Reviewer: Nikita (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Epilogue

Mmm. Loved it. I'm not a wordy person, so sorry it's not much. I will repeat what I said last time though, I'm astounded by the lack of attention this gem of a story gets.

Ending was great, thank you for entertaining me !

Reviewer: Bulls in Brooklyn (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Epilogue

Awwwwwww! I'm sad now! I'm going to miss this story! It's so good, and awesome and fuckyeah. Sequel would be nice, even if it's a while from now.

Reviewer: goflyakite (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Epilogue

OMG! I LOVE YOU! this was epic. great job. ill look out for more awesome drama packed stories of yours. your a great writer!

Reviewer: -LOVEafterDEATH- (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Epilogue

So I have to be awnist I didn't really like this story the airst time I read a chapter (I think because the APOV was just new to me) but then I kept on ready and I got addicted! And I love this story so much! I'm so so soooo sad to see it go! Your an awsome writer and I can't wait to see what stories you come up with next! Bye bye bye!!!!

Reviewer: lilgoblin (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Epilogue

Loved loved loved your story.  Smart, funny, and different.  I wasn't sure if I would like stories that didnt include canon couples.  You convinced me otherwise.  Love it!

Reviewer: mad_megan (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Epilogue

OMG, im so sad its over.

i loved your story, it is amazing. and it had a really good ending, but its over!!! :(

Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Epilogue

Thank you, for each and every chapter. I have read them all and have now to confess that I was mostly a lurker, not a reviewer. Now that it's done I definately had to review. So thanks again. It was an awesome ride :)

Reviewer: raindancer (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Epilogue

I can't even describe how much I really enjoyed your story. It is THE most originial fanfic I think I have ever read. I spent the first half wondering when the canon characters were going to get together, and then I just got sucked in to this amazing story. Most of all, I just loved your characters and the depth in which you wrote their story. It is a seriously messed up version of a coming of age story..but I really liked the flaws in the characters..their humanity and their mistakes that they made. The manipulations, the drama, and the deep connection that was formed between the characters is what really set this fic apart from the rest. I'm no expert, but you certainly have a talent for writing. You could easily turn this into a novel..with just a few changes of names. I wish you the best in your writing career and I eagerly look forward to reading any future stories that you write!

BTW- this is the longest "review" I've ever written. ;)

Reviewer: randigiles (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Epilogue

OHHHHHHHH For Cryin out loud SEEEQUEEEL! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEE!  I need them all the way up to graduation! C'mon U know U wanna do it too.  Purdy please, I need more of the Whitlock's and well just plain more of EVERYONE.  This was such a fantastic ride....Thank you for every chapter.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks for the fun story.  It didn't turn out like I had expected, but high school is unpredictable.  It was tough to remember that the characters were underage.   Good luck on the next story. 

Reviewer: Edwardsfavoritebrunette (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Epilogue

Bawling. Bawling. Bawling.

I knew there most likely wouldn't be a sequel, but I don't like the cold ahrd facts.

Maybe I should go find Royce now. Rose, can I have his number? Please? No? Ok. I get it.

You have some AMAZING quotes which deserve the highest praise, and this story is one of the best I've read in a long time. Thank you for you time and effort: it's highly appreciated!!

Can't wait for that teaser, even if I might not like the next story as much!!

Forever,

Edwardsfavoritebrunette, the Elite wanna-be.

Reviewer: AliceCullenTwin (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Epilogue

SEQUEL!

No, I'm just kidding (ish). I've said this a million times but the ending only cemented it: this is by far my favorite, favorite story on Twilighted or anywhere, and I'd recommend it to everyone in the world. No doubt. Although it would be great to have a sequel, I know that it'd just make this one less special..but please do look into the whole book thing ;) Anxiously awaiting your next story, I know it'll be just as awesome.

Thanks for writing this<3

Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Epilogue

GAHHH!!! This is one of the best FF stories I've read, totally unique in plot and well-written. And though I hate to see it end, it does end perfectly, as it should be. The whole story was about their becoming their own little "elite" band of friends, so I can't imagine what a sequel could bring. (Although of course I would read it!)

I love that they all came to visit Alice over the summer, and that she and Emmett were able to get back together.

Thank you for sharing this story and following it through to the end. Will be watching for your next story!

Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Epilogue

I enjoyed it. I want a damn sequel!!!! No, if your tired of the story then , oh well. I still want some Jax. I love me a bad boy. I thought in the other chapter that Alice would sleep with Edward for one last time. I know he was probably was thinking about it from his actions. Anywho, I'm looking forward to your new story. But if you change your mind about a SEQUEL let us know please.

SMOOCHES HOT BITCH

 

Reviewer: luckycharms0210 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Stain of Honesty

Poo! POO I say!!! Even though I'm on chapter 11 right now and can't tear my eyes away... ... ... POO!

Reviewer: moonlipse (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Epilogue

Well again, a big thanks for writing this story. And big thanks to those you mentioned (Miztrezboo, MissLooneyLovegood, and Ruby Wednesday) for keeping your brain in tact, so you could update with great stuff! It would have been so sad to miss out on such a great story.

Reviewer: AngelTalion (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Epilogue

Hrmm ok this was suprisingly a very  GOOD ending. I can't say satisfying because I'm all abut neat little bows and three of the five are still all single and crap but I LIKE it... its... complete in some way. Thank you for an amazing and HOT read. I can't wait to see what you do next.

Tali

Reviewer: VampViv (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Epilogue

So I am incredibly guilty for reading this whole story obsessively and never leaving a review once. I am so sorry for that! But I just wanted to let you know how amazing, intriuging, and well written this story was. I loved EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER and I can't wait to see what other stories you have planned for the future!!!

Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Epilogue

I pretty much said all I needed to say after the last chapter...

 

The epilogue was lovely. I can't wait to read more from you.

Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Alone I Would Have Perished

What a wonderful story!!!  I really enjoyed reading it and waiting for each new chapter!!!  I'm sad to see it end :)

Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Alone I Would Have Perished

Oh, This is the best story, I mean it! I hope you won't stop writing the twilight fanfiction simply because it's very enjoyable to read as well as your stories make peole think and look at things in different light which is what being a true author is all about.

Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Alone I Would Have Perished

Wow, I'm glad I caught up and I'm so sad to see that this story is ending. It was a remarkable, tumultuous journey through adolescence and high-society. I hope to see more from you in the future. You're an amazing writer.

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